Comments by Laney Paharik Most recent public comments by Laney Paharik https://nowcomment.com/users/40121 It was interesting the way the author referred to the train as pronoun “her”. It could make a child reading this think of the train as a girl rather than a thing, which I child can relate to. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=993448 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=993448 Wed, 16 May 2018 02:43:45 +0800 I could clearly imagine the sound of the train from the details in the book, also because I hear the trains passing through my city all the time. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=993445 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=993445 Wed, 16 May 2018 02:43:45 +0800 I like the frequent use of onomatopoeias, it added flavor to the story. I found the story a little plain, but his helped. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=993444 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=993444 Wed, 16 May 2018 02:43:45 +0800