Comments by Nathaniel Rake Most recent public comments by Nathaniel Rake https://nowcomment.com/users/40928 The cadence of the words used makes the sound of a chugging train. The emphasis is on every second or third syllable giving that impression. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1024663 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1024663 Mon, 07 May 2018 12:10:16 -0400 The book mentions things like "switchgrass" and "blue stem" without any pictures, which may be difficult for a child to comprehend. There are no context clues to help understand these more advanced terms https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1024662 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1024662 Mon, 07 May 2018 12:03:14 -0400 I like the use of the onomatopoeia in this section. It adds a nice feel and atmosphere that bring the story to life https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1012931 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1012931 Tue, 24 Apr 2018 11:24:20 -0400