Comments by Jen Bird Most recent public comments by Jen Bird https://nowcomment.com/users/42028 The ending is very nice. It explains that the characters have had a long, unforgettable,and hard trip, but that they reunited with those they love at the end. It's a sign the adventure is over, but a new one has just begun as they ride off into the sunset https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1044892 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1044892 Fri, 06 Jul 2018 11:12:35 +0800 There is the recurring phrase of "Westward, westward rolls the train". It is a reminder to the reader that the train and all her travelers are drawing closer to their destination and to whatever they're trying to get to. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1044891 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1044891 Fri, 06 Jul 2018 10:48:38 +0800 I like the way it explains how the locomotive starts up. I feel it's an interesting and fun way to introduce children to curiosity of the world's workings. https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1044888 https://nowcomment.com/documents/77821?scroll_to=1044888 Fri, 06 Jul 2018 09:29:23 +0800