Comments by Huiwen Li Most recent public comments by Huiwen Li https://nowcomment.com/users/42173 I see author use a short paragraph to tell things more than that. https://nowcomment.com/documents/70558?scroll_to=1048550 https://nowcomment.com/documents/70558?scroll_to=1048550 It's is important to me because some time people use so many word to describe a simple thing,and use less word to describe more things is not easy.And this connected to me because when I still young my family is also poor. Mon, 16 Nov 2020 09:48:50 -0600 I see the reason why he write down more things about himself,because only write down the address is not enough to tell were a person actually from. https://nowcomment.com/documents/70558?scroll_to=1048549 https://nowcomment.com/documents/70558?scroll_to=1048549 It's impotent to me because this is the reason why the writing started, and it explain the new way to write about "where I'm from". It remain me the time I wrote about"where I'm from", and I only introduced my homeland, and now I have a new way to tell were I really from. Mon, 16 Nov 2020 09:48:50 -0600 I see old memory in this paragraph, like an old photo you place in a drawer you will never check. But after many years pass by, all the sudden you open that drawer and see that old picture. https://nowcomment.com/documents/70558?scroll_to=1048547 https://nowcomment.com/documents/70558?scroll_to=1048547 It's important for me because it can remain people think about their pass and connect the writing to them-self. It's connected to me because the poem remained me about my past when I looking at the old picture in my grandfather's house. Mon, 16 Nov 2020 09:48:50 -0600