Comments by Jeremy Edie Most recent public comments by Jeremy Edie https://nowcomment.com/users/42639 I love how the writer makes the images so descriptive, giving us a mental picture of what she experienced. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1158247 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1158247 Wed, 14 Nov 2018 14:59:53 -0500 This introduction is very nice to read, giving both descriptive wording and an insight to how the writer felt about her family. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1158246 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1158246 Wed, 14 Nov 2018 14:58:27 -0500 This introduction is quite interesting to read, making the hook quite effective. https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1158245 https://nowcomment.com/documents/78460?scroll_to=1158245 Wed, 14 Nov 2018 14:57:19 -0500