Comments by Grace Wise Most recent public comments by Grace Wise https://nowcomment.com/users/43069 Personal account, not very applicable but can be used as a widespread example. https://nowcomment.com/documents/140109?scroll_to=1354213 https://nowcomment.com/documents/140109?scroll_to=1354213 Mon, 13 May 2019 12:52:42 -0400 Acknowledgment that people can get past outside factors and everyday stressors on top of being an athlete. https://nowcomment.com/documents/140109?scroll_to=1354212 https://nowcomment.com/documents/140109?scroll_to=1354212 Mon, 13 May 2019 12:51:41 -0400 Indication of outside pressures and factors. https://nowcomment.com/documents/140109?scroll_to=1354211 https://nowcomment.com/documents/140109?scroll_to=1354211 Mon, 13 May 2019 12:50:23 -0400 A helpful description of the model used a sort of a guide throughout the study. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136630?scroll_to=1320372 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136630?scroll_to=1320372 Tue, 09 Apr 2019 16:18:26 -0400 Not only addressing that multiple factors are all interrelated, but that they need to be seen by policy makers to create an agenda to promote well-being. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136630?scroll_to=1320371 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136630?scroll_to=1320371 Tue, 09 Apr 2019 16:17:39 -0400 Sports are related with better mental health overall. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136630?scroll_to=1320366 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136630?scroll_to=1320366 Tue, 09 Apr 2019 16:16:15 -0400 Not only saying that student athletes are just as likely as the rest of the population to develop mental illnesses, but possibly more likely due to environment stressors. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312263 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312263 Mon, 01 Apr 2019 14:25:23 -0400 Contradictory to the claim that sports can help mental health. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312260 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312260 Mon, 01 Apr 2019 14:24:08 -0400 They really just dive into the facts (cited). https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312258 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312258 Mon, 01 Apr 2019 14:23:26 -0400 Multiple sources say that sports and being a student athlete can actually help mental health and foster wellness, but this article is saying otherwise. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312256 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135990?scroll_to=1312256 Mon, 01 Apr 2019 14:22:19 -0400 Overall summary with sources on how physical activity can be used as treatment for depression. https://nowcomment.com/documents/134406?scroll_to=1307578 https://nowcomment.com/documents/134406?scroll_to=1307578 Tue, 30 Nov 2021 18:34:01 -0500 Deep and detailed description of what it means to be 'well'. https://nowcomment.com/documents/134406?scroll_to=1301277 https://nowcomment.com/documents/134406?scroll_to=1301277 Fri, 22 Mar 2019 13:00:09 -0400 Recognition that mental health treatment has multiple factors and while sports may be one way to combat it there are still many obstacles presented. https://nowcomment.com/documents/134406?scroll_to=1301270 https://nowcomment.com/documents/134406?scroll_to=1301270 Thu, 10 Aug 2023 16:15:49 -0400 Further continues the information by building on it. This constitutes the next step in the essay. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295174 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295174 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:21:58 -0400 No transition between this sentence and the next. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295164 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295164 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:19:42 -0400 Shifts to a completely different point but still grabs the reader. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295161 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295161 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:19:10 -0400 Circles back around to the point that sex isn't needed to reproduce, not even another sex is needed. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295148 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295148 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:16:05 -0400 Implication of another slight shift in topic or something that will be touched on later in the essay. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295132 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295132 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:14:13 -0400 Transition to a more narrowed down topic of interest but still related to the previous information and idea. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295130 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295130 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:12:39 -0400 Further continues on the idea of 'virgin mothers' by shifting the focus to animals and insects. It's a shift to a different topic. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295119 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295119 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:10:53 -0400 Implies what the essay will talk about or what it will focus on. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295108 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1295108 Tue, 19 Mar 2019 16:08:38 -0400 Specifically Trump administration. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191934 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191934 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:40:00 -0500 It seems as if the trump administration has a problem with immigration all together, not just illegal immigration. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191933 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191933 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:39:22 -0500 Important clarification. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191932 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191932 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:38:19 -0500 Worse over time https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191931 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191931 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:37:53 -0500 Trump administration and xenophobia, their campaign is encouraging an irrational negative view on immigration. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191930 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191930 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:37:31 -0500 Reason for getting rid of DACA was to improve the economy but seems like it will only make it worse. Deeper reason? https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191929 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122953?scroll_to=1191929 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 03:36:34 -0500 Quite the numbers considering more than half the population views the caravan as a threat. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191900 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191900 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:55:48 -0500 Fake news/misinformation. Plays a large role in politics today. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191899 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191899 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:54:35 -0500 Ties back to nationalism. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191898 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191898 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:53:05 -0500 Work of media and government campaigning? Making immigrants out to be the enemy and shifting the population's view. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191897 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191897 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:52:31 -0500 Obviously, someone really doesn't want them to come in. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191896 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191896 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:51:37 -0500 Overall an incredibly negative start. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191895 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122951?scroll_to=1191895 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:45:14 -0500 The party in power has had the same view on immigrants for the past 30 years, kind of like Orwell was implicating and predicting. They are still higher than 30 years ago, but with xenophobia driving their campaign, could that view worsen? https://nowcomment.com/documents/122950?scroll_to=1191894 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122950?scroll_to=1191894 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:44:21 -0500 Far more positive view than 30 years ago, yet a heavy negative media presence. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122950?scroll_to=1191893 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122950?scroll_to=1191893 Tue, 08 Feb 2022 22:51:09 -0500 Claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/122950?scroll_to=1191892 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122950?scroll_to=1191892 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:40:40 -0500 Sympathy for children. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191891 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191891 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:38:54 -0500 Specific negative view. 'Stealing' jobs narrative. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191890 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191890 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:38:26 -0500 Specific, positive view on immigrants. Implies short-term residence in the US. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191889 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191889 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:37:36 -0500 ~70% of Americans believe immigrants are integral in the US, while before they were implying 50/50. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191888 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191888 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:36:33 -0500 50/50 in terms of opinion on immigration. Half the population views it negatively. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191887 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122949?scroll_to=1191887 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:35:16 -0500 There's a lot of back and forth, a certain demographic doesn't support the wall while another demographic does. It's difficult to keep track of the numbers and who actually supports what. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191886 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191886 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:33:19 -0500 Most Americans don't think the wall is an immediate priority. This most likely means that the population's view on immigration isn't as negative as one would think. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191885 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191885 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:30:20 -0500 Xenophobia fueling the Trump administration, what led them to power. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191884 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191884 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:27:46 -0500 Keeping immigrants out isn't worth the turmoil it would do to our government, but it's still important enough to the population to the extent to where something should be done. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191883 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122948?scroll_to=1191883 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:26:42 -0500 Pairs with paragraph 20, but both millennials and the older generation are split half and half considering views on immigrants. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191882 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191882 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:21:03 -0500 Important clarification, could mean that in the future, the American population will mostly view immigrants positively. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191881 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191881 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:19:36 -0500 Implying that we are going through a period of time where there are more people advocating for immigration than those in positions of power. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191880 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191880 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:17:26 -0500 Xenophobia driving a campaign, especially when the last administration worked very hard to make it easier for immigrants in our country. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191879 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122946?scroll_to=1191879 Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:15:53 -0500 It's a jab on the Republican party as a whole. After the party won majority in the government, they started cracking down on immigration. DACA is one of the programs the party wants to get rid of. https://nowcomment.com/documents/122943?scroll_to=1191878 https://nowcomment.com/documents/122943?scroll_to=1191878 They want to get rid of DACA for 'tax' reasons. They also weren't able to give a concrete reason to exactly why they were trying to get rid of it. Either way, we are becoming more close-minded towards immigrants because of taxes or simply cause we are a racist/xenophobic society. Thu, 20 Dec 2018 02:13:10 -0500 The author has good reasoning, but even though there are holes in the data that doesn't mean we shouldn't be worrying about this issue. Along with global warming, plastic pollution has great potential to harm the environment drastically. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148722 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148722 Fri, 02 Nov 2018 14:17:39 -0400 The author fails to consider the amount of plastic that lives in our oceans. There are multiple trash islands with one about or larger than the size of Texas. These islands emit a lot of micro plastics and could have long-term affects. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148716 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148716 The author also fails to note more than once that there is essentially no long-term data on the long-term affects of micro-plastics and plastics in general. Fri, 02 Nov 2018 14:14:55 -0400 This statement could be incredibly false. There is data that links plastics and micro-plastics to cancer and the author doesn't have any sources to back this statement up. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148704 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148704 Fri, 02 Nov 2018 14:09:43 -0400 Also not the greatest paragraph to start out the argument. At this point, the authors main idea is being clouded and is shifting away from the idea introduced in the title. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148696 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148696 Fri, 02 Nov 2018 14:07:53 -0400 Considering the environment has one of the biggest affects on human life, the fact that plastic is degrading the environment will eventually be harmful for us. This paragraph is not very good to use to argue against putting so much effort into pollution. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148690 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1148690 Fri, 02 Nov 2018 14:06:10 -0400 Making it difficult to dump trash into the ocean is economically positive. It depends on how well the bill is executed to see change. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132185 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132185 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:55:22 -0400 The United States produces a lot of debris of it's own. A lot of the debris in the ocean is our own. Trump intends to irritate the masses by putting the blame on other countries in order to enact change. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132182 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132182 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:53:44 -0400 Landfills are overflowing or becoming full so the ocean has become a dumping ground. Not only does the debris need to be removed but disposed of in an efficient and environmentally-friendly manner. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132177 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132177 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:51:59 -0400 Change doesn't start at the national or inter-national levels, it starts individually. The government can make all the laws and guidelines it wants, but in the end, it's the individual that has to make the change. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132173 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132173 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:49:58 -0400 There has been no long-term research done on micro-plastics. This makes it difficult to say what it will do to marine health and ultimately human health. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132129 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132129 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:48:23 -0400 With the help of global warming, we will lose a lot of marine life in the coming years. By 2050, it is predicted that almost all coral in the ocean will have died. It will knock marine ecosystems out of balance and ultimately end up affecting us. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132127 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132127 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:47:08 -0400 It's difficult to believe that researchers haven't already been doing any of the following. It could really help further research on both marine animal life and how that relates to pollution as well as getting data on the pollution in the ocean. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132122 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132122 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:44:08 -0400 Micro-plastics could play a big role in deteriorating the turtle's health. Unfortunately, there hasn't been a lot of long-term research done on these particles. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132121 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132121 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:41:50 -0400 The amount of plastic in the ocean will be greater than the number of fish in the ocean by 2050. It will greatly affect larger marine animals in a negative way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132118 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116075?scroll_to=1132118 Tue, 16 Oct 2018 10:38:51 -0400