Comments by 2019 Andrew Turner Most recent public comments by 2019 Andrew Turner https://nowcomment.com/users/46322 In this sentence, the author starts by giving the fact of insect reproduction and shoots the fact down with the fact that aphids reproduce exponentially faster and with more offspring https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310255 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310255 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:43:15 -0400 I would consider this sentence much too long to be included in an essay that's already a boring topic. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310253 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310253 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:40:54 -0400 This paragraph gets technical with the aphids, including the fact that they reproduce exceptionally fast https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310252 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310252 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:39:44 -0400 He uses a number that doesn't exist to show the uncountable number of aphids in this sentence https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310251 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310251 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:38:24 -0400 This sentence will grab any readers attention if he didn't already have it to begin with. The steady use of exciting language draws readers deeper into the text. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310250 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310250 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:37:28 -0400 This sentence foreshadows a change that is needed in a time when fresh and tender plant growth is hard to find. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310249 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310249 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:35:35 -0400 In this paragraph, the author uses enthusiastic wording to keep the reader intrigued. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310248 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310248 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:34:12 -0400 In this paragraph, the author goes more in depth on parthenogenesis. He shows some of the cycle of life in this section. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310247 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310247 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:32:26 -0400 The author keeps the readers attention by reminding them that the content being read is not very interesting. He then shows the reader why it is rather important. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310245 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310245 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:30:28 -0400 In this paragraph, the writer gives examples of what was hinted in the previous paragraphs. He gives examples of different species that reproduce via parthenogenesis. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310244 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310244 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:28:16 -0400 Coming from a Catholic school, readers of this sentence are even more engaged because it hints at something other than religion. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310239 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310239 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:25:00 -0400 The writer immediately catches the attention of the reader by referring to sexual acts in a playful form. https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310223 https://nowcomment.com/documents/133763?scroll_to=1310223 Thu, 28 Mar 2019 15:23:15 -0400