Comments by JAYLIN SANTIAGO

Rain on the East River

Sun, 10 Oct 2021 15:36:38 -0400

My first draft about the East River. https://www.youthvoices.live/docs/the-east-river/

Sat, 09 Oct 2021 22:32:47 -0400

I have lived near the East River for about 9-10 years. Depending on what building and window you are looking out of ,you can see how beautiful the view is. In the fall and winter it does become extremely cold because of living o close to the river. Although in the summer it can be very refreshing when you are walking near bay. It can also be a good place for a picnic, date, and even some where you can go when you need to be by yourself and think about life. A good memory that i have walking near the East River is when i went with my friends and we just talked and jumped around. It was very fun and exciting to be near the water. The view is very beautiful and crossing the bridge to go to randall’s island was also very fun. Randall’s island is a park that has many activities like mini golfing , horseback riding , and playing on baseball fields etc. i have been to Randall’s island several times through programs and friends. Although the East River has the word river in it , it’s not actually a river. It is a salt water tidal. It doesn’t always smell good around there but the smell isn’t that distracting because the only distraction would be the water and the scenery. You can’t go swimming but you can go on boat rides and go under the bridge the crosses over to randall’s island.

How can people have intercourse without getting attached?

Thu, 16 May 2019 13:49:08 -0400

It has a good flow. It is for sure an attention grabber and is . who is she referring to when she says ''hisself''?

Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:07 -0500

They are all family until someone crosses the line

Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:07 -0500

They are all family until someone crosses the line.They all have each others back. Cool just for protection.

Techniques that I want to grab from Angelou's writing:

Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:06 -0500

1. Topic is what people DO in the person's favorite place. (play hopscotch) 2.

people are just using each other

Thu, 16 May 2019 13:56:57 -0400

This are trying to say that people just use each other for pleasure and not anything but a factor of pleasure.

People are confusing love and pleasure

Mon, 08 Apr 2019 11:42:13 -0400

Some people actually confuse love and pleasure and think that just because they are good in bed they are actually good people that you actually love .

how can people have sex and be so intimate and not e able to have any feelings for each other

Mon, 08 Apr 2019 11:37:51 -0400

i find this line strange but yet so interesting because she is right how can people be able to mess around with each other with no strings attached.

he's cleaning a brain?