Comments by Mr. Zachary Hollis Most recent public comments by Mr. Zachary Hollis https://nowcomment.com/users/61048 rhyme - day and play https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554784 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554784 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 13:15:07 -0500 This is the poem we began yesterday https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554783 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554783 Mon, 13 Jan 2020 13:02:05 -0500 Saying a person's name again and again would not necessarily count as repetition. The phrase "Casey at the bat" might be a better example. https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554049 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554049 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:13:05 -0500 rhyme - day and play https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553869 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553869 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:06:04 -0500 This is the poem we heard in class on Wednesday. https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553854 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553854 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:41:06 -0500 Alliteration - Birches bend https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469759 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469759 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:26:49 -0400 Alliteration - birches bend https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469186 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469186 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:05:09 -0400 Birches are thin white trees https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1466221 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1466221 Fri, 04 Oct 2019 12:52:42 -0400 Very true - at least he has a chance to overcome this issue with the blind man. He continues to hold onto this hope. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463548 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463548 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:40:57 -0400 Very true - at least he has a chance to overcome this issue with the blind man. He continues to hold onto this hope. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463445 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463445 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:23:45 -0400 Negative - This sentence speaks to me the most. He compares himself to Satan, the most evil entity to exist. While realizing that even "Satan had his companions," he understands just how alone he really is. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463545 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463545 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:40:56 -0400 Negative - This sentence speaks to me the most. He compares himself to Satan, the most evil entity to exist. While realizing that even "Satan had his companions," he understands just how alone he really is. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463444 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463444 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:22:36 -0400 Notice how his thoughts go from positive when referring to the people in the cottage to negative when Victor's journal is read. He places blame on Victor for all of his problems. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463543 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463543 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:40:56 -0400 Notice how his thoughts go from positive when referring to the people in the cottage to negative when Victor's journal is read. He places blame on Victor for all of his problems. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463443 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463443 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:21:21 -0400 This is such a vital piece to his image of mankind. Can you imagine if we could read how God created us and how disappointed he was in our creation? This would rightfully hurt anyone. To know that your creator hates you is such a difficult thing to learn. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463442 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1463442 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:19:51 -0400 This is such a vital piece to his image of mankind. Can you imagine if we could read how God created us and how disappointed he was in our creation? This would rightfully hurt anyone. To know that your creator hates you is such a difficult thing to learn. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463541 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463541 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:40:55 -0400 Read the next sentence. He knows she is asleep and says these words. When she begins to wake up, he is afraid and hides. When he realizes Justine would react the same as everyone else, he decides to frame her. His thoughts go from positive to negative. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463441 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463441 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:15:59 -0400 Read the next sentence. He knows she is asleep and says these words. When she begins to wake up, he is afraid and hides. When he realizes Justine would react the same as everyone else, he decides to frame her. His thoughts go from positive to negative. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463589 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463589 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:37 -0400 He hasn't framed Justine for murder yet in this sentence. He certainly feels guilty for ending the life of another living creature. I think he is also afraid of how he feels now. All of this aggression came about just because he heard his creator's name. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463587 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463587 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:37 -0400 He hasn't framed Justine for murder yet in this sentence. He certainly feels guilty for ending the life of another living creature. I think he is also afraid of how he feels now. All of this aggression came about just because he heard his creator's name. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463426 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463426 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:11:44 -0400 Maybe not things he used to enjoy but definitely things he feels that he should enjoy. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463425 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463425 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:09:01 -0400 Maybe not things he used to enjoy but definitely things he feels that he should enjoy. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463584 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463584 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:35 -0400 Good point. Remember, Frankenstein is the creator, not the monster. Our monster has no name, which is another reason why he hates Victor so much. He didn't even have the decency to give his creation a name like God did when he created Adam. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463424 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463424 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:08:16 -0400 Good point. Remember, Frankenstein is the creator, not the monster. Our monster has no name, which is another reason why he hates Victor so much. He didn't even have the decency to give his creation a name like God did when he created Adam. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463582 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463582 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:35 -0400 Yes! This is the final straw. He once again does something nice for human beings, and he is punished for all of his trouble. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463422 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463422 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:07:08 -0400 Yes! This is the final straw. He once again does something nice for human beings, and he is punished for all of his trouble. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463580 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463580 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:34 -0400 I think you are reading too much into what he is trying to say. I think this could be expressed as a positive feeling towards humans because he exerts maximum effort to swim against the current to save the drowning child. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463577 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463577 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:34 -0400 I think you are reading too much into what he is trying to say. I think this could be expressed as a positive feeling towards humans because he exerts maximum effort to swim against the current to save the drowning child. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463421 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463421 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:05:48 -0400 Remember, Frankenstein is the creator. Our monster does not have a name. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463419 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463419 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:03:20 -0400 Remember, Frankenstein is the creator. Our monster does not have a name. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463570 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463570 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:32 -0400 He has moved into the extreme realm of hatred. He has now drawn a line between himself and humanity. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463566 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463566 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:30 -0400 He has moved into the extreme realm of hatred. He has now drawn a line between himself and humanity. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463417 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463417 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:02:11 -0400 Remember, you need to share why he is feeling this way. What has led him to this feeling? https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463416 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1463416 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 08:01:04 -0400 Remember, you need to share why he is feeling this way. What has led him to this feeling? https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463561 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463561 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:30 -0400 Simply double-click on a sentence, and you can make a comment for everyone to see. Tell us if his thoughts are positive or negative, and then explain what caused this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463563 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463563 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:30 -0400 Simply double-click on a sentence, and you can make a comment for everyone to see. Tell us if his thoughts are positive or negative, and then explain what caused this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1462135 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1462135 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 10:29:11 -0400 We are going to take a closer look at Chapter 16. I want you to find examples of the monster's positive or negative feelings towards humanity and explain what he is feeling and/or why he is feeling this way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463562 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154011?scroll_to=1463562 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:41:30 -0400 We are going to take a closer look at Chapter 16. I want you to find examples of the monster's positive or negative feelings towards humanity and explain what he is feeling and/or why he is feeling this way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1462134 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153728?scroll_to=1462134 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 10:29:11 -0400 Simply double-click on a sentence, and you can make a comment for everyone to see. Tell us if his thoughts are positive or negative, and then explain what caused this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1462105 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1462105 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 08:17:54 -0400 Simply double-click on a sentence, and you can make a comment for everyone to see. Tell us if his thoughts are positive or negative, and then explain what caused this. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463551 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463551 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:40:59 -0400 We are going to take a closer look at Chapter 15. I want you to find examples of the monster's positive or negative feelings towards humanity and explain what he is feeling and/or why he is feeling this way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1462104 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153876?scroll_to=1462104 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 14:39:33 -0400 We are going to take a closer look at Chapter 15. I want you to find examples of the monster's positive or negative feelings towards humanity and explain what he is feeling and/or why he is feeling this way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463550 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154010?scroll_to=1463550 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 10:40:59 -0400