Comments by Catherine Lyons Most recent public comments by Catherine Lyons https://nowcomment.com/users/61261 maintains the beat of the poem and helps describe the action -catherine, maddy, and julia https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469329 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469329 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:24:24 -0400 adds a rhythm and connects the words to help create a flow in the sentence -catherine, maddy, and julia https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469320 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469320 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:22:21 -0400 helps to create a rhythm in the poem. -catherine, maddy, and julia https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469297 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469297 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:19:45 -0400 alliteration (feet first) https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469243 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469243 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:11:11 -0400 alliteration (climbing carefully) https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469233 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469233 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:24:24 -0400 alliteration (boy's been) https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469194 https://nowcomment.com/documents/153875?scroll_to=1469194 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:06:41 -0400