Comments by Marie Grassi Most recent public comments by Marie Grassi https://nowcomment.com/users/61300 alliteration adds to the poem by adding a sound effect giving it a happy ear sound -- samantha wherle https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469961 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469961 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:35:13 -0700 going and coming--consonance https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469887 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469887 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:22:57 -0700 black branches--alliteration https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469871 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469871 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:21:47 -0700 flung feet first--alliteration https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469861 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469861 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:20:45 -0700 climbing carefully--alliteration https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469852 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469852 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:20:18 -0700 like girls on hands--simile https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469830 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469830 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:19:16 -0700 shattering, avalanching--assonance https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469795 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469795 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:24:03 -0700 cracks and crazes--alliteration https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469764 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469764 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 09:16:17 -0700