Comments by Layla Bergman Most recent public comments by Layla Bergman https://nowcomment.com/users/61302 Lily and Layla: alliteration in this poem creates rhythm https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469910 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469910 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:26:38 -0400 alliteration - climbing carefully https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469878 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469878 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:22:20 -0400 simile - like girls on hands and knees... https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469865 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469865 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:21:05 -0400 alliteration - soon/sun, shed/shells https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469844 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469844 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:29:11 -0400 assonance - heaps, sweep https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469810 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469810 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:18:47 -0400 alliteration - cracks and crazes https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469796 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469796 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:18:13 -0400 alliteration - birches bend https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469763 https://nowcomment.com/documents/154238?scroll_to=1469763 Mon, 07 Oct 2019 12:35:13 -0400