Comments by Ariana P

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:59:26 -0400

It is quite possible that there are people in our communities who refuse to accept or even believe that bullying is a real issue. Unfortunately, the overwhelming research on the American School System has proven time and time again that the majority of students have witnessed or experienced some form of bullying.

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:54:27 -0400

Bullying has always been a prevalent issue within American school systems. However, in the modern day bullying has taken on many forms and is becoming increasingly more difficult to manage. This is making the process of learning almost impossible for our students.

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:49:58 -0400

Bullying is on the rise and despite efforts to combat it, more had to be done.

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:48:33 -0400

I sincerely believe that focusing on these ideals will help decrease the rate a of bullying within our school systems.

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:46:27 -0400

Burrmaster, E. The fact that there are so many ways to bully students it is essential that schools take the initiative and implement strict policies in order to combat it.

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:42:55 -0400

By addressing and later tending to each of these components we will be able to effectively engage and teach our students on how to develop healthy relationships with other students.

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:37:25 -0400

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Sat, 05 Oct 2019 10:36:08 -0400