Comments by El-Hossin Salem

I do not agree with this statement because I do not see that the Covid-19 is impacting our mental health but rather, it grants us a lot of free-time to better take care of ourselves

Tue, 20 Oct 2020 20:56:15 -0400

Yes - by holdoing the American flag, they are showing that they are not only protesting for their self-intrest but for the common good.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:22:13 -0400

The problem is with disallowing people from owning guns is agaisnt the Constitution of the US. So I think it would be a lot of better if they widend background checks.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:20:07 -0400

I think background check should be amebded so that peole who wants to buy guns has to undergo background check.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:18:35 -0400

Unfortunately, I agree with you. But I think as long as we keep movong forward and advacating, the world will be a better place.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:17:07 -0400

I agree with you. Everybody can make change in their society, but youth are capable of causing a major social change.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:16:08 -0400

I belivee that social media has potively contributed to the menas that young people use to psuh for social or political change.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:15:02 -0400

I totaaly agree with you. Youth have the power to do push forward any social change.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:13:15 -0400

Actually, it's the quite oppesite. They were crying on prtestors who were killed during protesting.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:07:31 -0400

I was living in Egypet during that time. A lot of Egyptians went down on streets to protest gainst the oprression regime of the deposed presidnet Hossny Mubarak.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 11:05:49 -0400

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Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:29:10 -0400

“Everyday Use” and “How to Date a Brown Girl” are also similar because in “Everyday Use”, dee is beingdiscrete about her place of birth to prevent her friends from lookinf down on her, and in “How to Date a Brown Girl”, the main character pretendes to be rich by conealing aspects of his culture and the fact of being poor.

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Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:26:40 -0400

Also “The Lesson” and “How to Date a Brown Girl” are similar because in “The Lesson”, Miss Moore wants to teach a lesson to a group of kids about money and in “How to Date a Brown Girl”, the narrator is teaching the main character about how to treat differents girls.

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Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:25:44 -0400

In “Everyday Use”, Dee wants to assimaltes American culture to feel superior to her family and in “The Lesson”, sylvia thinks that Miss.

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Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:23:39 -0400

“Everyday Use” and “The Lesson” are similar because one of the main themes that both stories have in common is the theme of appearance vs. reality.

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Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:21:36 -0400

Each story has a character that does not want that others to know about his/her culture and infested with lies and deception.

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Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:19:08 -0400

The significant similarities between the three stories is the theme of appearance vs. reality.

I think that you should elaborate on each story's background info.

Sat, 21 Mar 2020 10:16:08 -0400

Youth make up approximately 42% of the whole population worldwide. Therefore, their voices must be heard and respected because they are the driving force for every change we crave for.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:35:39 -0500

If humans remain executing the same course of actions towards Earth, then human will not survive.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:33:14 -0500

I do agree with her on every point he stated. Earth belongs to everyone of us which means everyone of us reserves the right to leave on a clean Earth.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:32:07 -0500

She is an audacious person because she was not reluctant when she confessed that she is a queer. Round of applause to her, ladies and gentlemen.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:25:15 -0500

I do agree with Blair that it is very rate to encounter Muslim girls who announce themselves as queers.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:20:34 -0500

I agree with you on the fact that he is spreading and demonstrating his culture, not only in a peaceful way, but in a way that make people who do not understand his language to be able to understand him because music is a universal language.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:13:53 -0500

He is an altruistic person who tries to do whatever he could to help other people.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:11:24 -0500

He is a powerful youth who has shared visions and actions with other remarkable people.

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:08:59 -0500

The narrator is describing how his friends are very poor that their teacher ask them what money is.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 11:39:55 -0500

The narrator despises Ms. Moore because she always speak act foolishness.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 11:37:30 -0500

Ms. Moore was actually poor like Sugar and his friend, but she was rich relatively.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 11:31:19 -0500

Ms. Moore was not religious at all and she probably speak non-sense.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 11:25:38 -0500

the narrator neighborhood seems to be a slum area which is filled with homeless people.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 11:21:08 -0500

This sentence indicates that the narrator was stupid and naive in his adolescence.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 11:18:39 -0500

Wearing a mask will never uproot your insecurities

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 00:43:05 -0500

The central idea of this short story is no matter what the speaker does, no matter how much trouble he might go through to change his identity and put on false appearances, the reality will never alter. Society will always view him in the same way and he will be stuck with the labels placed on him through his socio-economic status, his family background, and the color of his skin.

Try to be creative in making false statements to your girlfriend in your first date.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 00:25:12 -0500

If you ever feel stranded in a situation where your opponent is way much stronger than you, do not fight back. But find a way out of the situation so that you are perceived that you have not lost a fight on your first date.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 00:22:03 -0500

The narrator is noting to be careful while you are on a date with a girlfriend in his unsafe neighborhood that is filled with creeps and psychotic people. He gives an example of a Puerto Rican kid in his neighborhood who has two wild dogs.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 00:15:50 -0500

The narrator is giving an advice on how to be able to present yourself properly based on girl's race.

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 00:07:37 -0500

The narrator despises the city he lives in and believe that girls from his city are ghettos

Wed, 29 Jan 2020 00:01:38 -0500

The narrator bleievs that halfie girls' mothers are easy to go along with

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:59:38 -0500

The narrator is steryotyping by noting that people who want white girls are only Africans.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:57:29 -0500

The narrator believes if the girl's father you are dating is overprotective, then you should take caution in treating him.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:49:53 -0500

The narrator believes it is easy to convince parents to date their daughters. But the complicated part of a relationship being in convincing a girl to date you.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:43:54 -0500

The narrator believes that white girls are more open and more comfortable when it comes to relationship. Conversely, girls from different races, in his perspective, are more reluctant and cautious.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:37:00 -0500

Malcriado is explaining how he hides all the hints that would reveal his destitutuon to his girlfriend he is trying to impress.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:29:02 -0500

The narrator seems scared to visit one of his relatives who is bigger than him and probably beat him up when he sees him. The narrator pretended to be sick to force his mother to stay home and not visiting the bully relative.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 23:25:19 -0500

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:20:47 -0500

The three stroies are third-person narration .The connection between the stories is the education.

She is narrating a story about her when she was a teenager and naive.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:10 -0400

The reason for the excessive metaphor is I wanted to demonstrate why family is indispensable.:)

Tue, 03 Dec 2019 14:35:32 -0500

Dee hated her past that she changed her name in order to wipe out the bad memories.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:42 -0500

Dee hated her past that she changed her name in order to wipe out the bad memories.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400

Dee hated her past that she changed her name in order to wipe out the bad memories.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:18 -0500

She is documenting the poverty-stricken life that her sister and her mother live in order to proof that she is better than them.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400

She is documenting the poverty-stricken life that her sister and her mother live in order to proof that she is better than them.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:17 -0500

She is documenting the poverty-stricken life that her sister and her mother live in order to proof that she is better than them.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:41 -0500

Dee is Muslim

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:40 -0500

Dee is Muslim

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400

Dee is Muslim

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:16 -0500

Dee wants to eradicate her past that she resented, and to pursue that, she dresses luxury clothes.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:15 -0500

Dee wants to eradicate her past that she resented, and to pursue that, she dresses luxury clothes.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Dee wants to eradicate her past that she resented, and to pursue that, she dresses luxury clothes.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:39 -0500

Mama perceives Maggie as a bad-looking girl, whereas she perceives Dee as a near-perfect girl.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:14 -0500

Mama perceives Maggie as a bad-looking girl, whereas she perceives Dee as a near-perfect girl.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama perceives Maggie as a bad-looking girl, whereas she perceives Dee as a near-perfect girl.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:38 -0500

This is an evidence that shows that Dee chose her signifcant other unwisely, which resulted in her getting divorced afterwards.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:13 -0500

This is an evidence that shows that Dee chose her signifcant other unwisely, which resulted in her getting divorced afterwards.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

This is an evidence that shows that Dee chose her signifcant other unwisely, which resulted in her getting divorced afterwards.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:37 -0500

According to Mama, Dee does not know how to choose "good frineds".

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:37 -0500

According to Mama, Dee does not know how to choose "good frineds".

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

According to Mama, Dee does not know how to choose "good frineds".

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:13 -0500

Dee is discomifted of her social position

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Dee is discomifted of her social position

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:37 -0500

Dee is discomifted of her social position

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:13 -0500

Mama is ignorant which implies that she may misconecept her daughter's attiude.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama is ignorant which implies that she may misconecept her daughter's attiude.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:12 -0500

Mama is ignorant which implies that she may misconecept her daughter's attiude.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:36 -0500

Dee have always wanted to be a better person. She puts a lot of effort to accompplish that. She does not let any circumsatnces to turn her down.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:34 -0500

Dee have always wanted to be a better person. She puts a lot of effort to accompplish that. She does not let any circumsatnces to turn her down.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:10 -0500

Dee have always wanted to be a better person. She puts a lot of effort to accompplish that. She does not let any circumsatnces to turn her down.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Maggie thrust unnecessary knowledge upon her mother and her sister to make them feel inferior.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Maggie thrust unnecessary knowledge upon her mother and her sister to make them feel inferior.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:08 -0500

Maggie thrust unnecessary knowledge upon her mother and her sister to make them feel inferior.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:33 -0500

Maggie seems to resent her old house that, in fact, she wanted the house to be annihilated by the fire.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:30 -0500

Maggie seems to resent her old house that, in fact, she wanted the house to be annihilated by the fire.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:06 -0500

Maggie seems to resent her old house that, in fact, she wanted the house to be annihilated by the fire.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Maggie is timid of her body flaws, burn scars.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:03 -0500

Maggie is timid of her body flaws, burn scars.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:27 -0500

Maggie is timid of her body flaws, burn scars.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama is insecure about her dark skin, and her insecurity seems to be an obstacles to accomplish her dreams, unlike her daughter, Dee, she is confident and fearless.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:26 -0500

Mama is insecure about her dark skin, and her insecurity seems to be an obstacles to accomplish her dreams, unlike her daughter, Dee, she is confident and fearless.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:03 -0500

Mama is insecure about her dark skin, and her insecurity seems to be an obstacles to accomplish her dreams, unlike her daughter, Dee, she is confident and fearless.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Characteristics of Mama's personality and her physical figure

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Characteristics of Mama's personality and her physical figure

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:01 -0500

Characteristics of Mama's personality and her physical figure

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:25 -0500

She is indulged in daydreaming about the reunion she wants to have with Dee on TV. :)

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:59 -0500

She is indulged in daydreaming about the reunion she wants to have with Dee on TV. :)

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:22 -0500

She is indulged in daydreaming about the reunion she wants to have with Dee on TV. :)

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Maggie is feeling jealous of her sister due to her belief that she has the world in her hand

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:56 -0500

Maggie is feeling jealous of her sister due to her belief that she has the world in her hand

Wed, 27 Apr 2022 11:12:11 -0400

Maggie is feeling jealous of her sister due to her belief that she has the world in her hand

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:18 -0500