Comments by Fatoumata Diallo

he was seen his brother everywhere and his student faces.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 13:10:19 -0400

This's hilarious because he's an algebra teacher and his brother is an addict.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 12:50:15 -0400

He was scared for this brother and at the same time do not known what to do.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 12:28:08 -0400

Even though he ready the news papers and known that his brother was arrested he continued his journey like nothing was happened. If was me will directly go to see what happened to him.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 12:27:04 -0400

This is fascinated how he talked about his brother and worry about him.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 12:20:14 -0400

sonny was arresting for using and selling drugs.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 12:17:31 -0400

In this part of the story, the narrator is remembering some bad memories. when he was in the subway station.

Wed, 15 Jul 2020 00:53:30 -0400

This's where we stopped for now!

Wed, 15 Jul 2020 00:48:27 -0400

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Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

AMANDA : They do or they do without it!Not everybody has a craze for adventure." This shows us how Amanada likes to have a man that is already working for her daughter . It is why he still bothers her to get a man who works or has a career that can help them to have a good life that she wants. And this is important to know because many mothers are like that they just want their daughter to get married. Since they think that can help them. The author seems to be making the point that sometimes making a guess is important when you are writing a play with much imagery . We should describe everything that can help the reader to understand.

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Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

The Third and four sections of The Glass Menagerie. By Tennessee might leave a reader feeling interested because the scenario of these chapters make me think and feel like being a middle class or poor class is not good. We can look in front of us to change our life by using someone. Since you will like to have a good life that society is showing us. An example of this I’m one personage of this who is Amanda. Amanda is a mother who wants to know everything from her children but the one thing that she exagere is she wants her daughter Laura to fail love with someone who is rich and married. She wants to discuss that with Tom “ I know, but it's not good for you. We have to do all that we can to build ourselves up. In these trying times we live in, all that we have to cling to is - each other. . . . That's why it's so important to - Tom, ! - I sent out your sister so I could discuss something with you. If you hadn't spoken I would have spoken to you” this is to show us how I deserve to get my daughter married to someone who has a good class then us. Since I’m tired to still live in my conditions of life. Then I am a woman who cares about society thinking I like to compare myself.

If she continue like that she may lose her kids.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

yes because she like him and for her those memories are important.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

they will form a beautiful couple.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

yes that's why she was scare to talked to him and she preferred not to approached him.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

yes at that time she feel like he could not notest her that's why she did not said anything to him.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

It's seen to me that Laura like Jim a little bite. she is shy but she love him.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

In this part of the play the author used imager to described Laura beauty.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

she make her so stress because she take it serious and Laura was so surprised.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

His mother does not known about his plant. Amanda try to make sure that her kids is well educated but she did not do it at the best way. May be that's why they are leaving because she is annoying.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

He compared himself to his father because he not a good worker in the warehouse and want to leave.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

His selfish man he is like his father. He only care about himself. if is a loser he quiet when things is hard.

I think this part Amanda go to far because it's nice of her to push Laura to meet the guy if she does not want too.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

She should think about her daughter and what can make her happy. the most important thing is respect her decision.

I think Amanda want her to answer the door because she want Laura to meet the gentleman caller. I guess it's trick she want to do Laura to meet Jim.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

The author used imagery to described Laura beauty. but i'm surprised to see that Laura accepted her mother demanding to prepared herself to the gentlman caller.