Comments by Aboubakar Dabre

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In the morning, the mother sent Laura, her daughter, to the store to buy some better.

can you pplease reread this sentence Please?

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When she invited Jim O'Connor to come over.

i think the husband did not do the samething as Tom. In my opinion Tom is better than His father. How come the head of the family can leave his Family Without nothing and never come back or send even a letter to them.

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therefore the real probelm is the mother. right?

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of curse everything will fell afther. they had to say the true at the beginning.

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That is one thing that I did not understand. Why should they reacte as like they were rich in order to attrack a man. Actualy I preferc to be natural, in that way the other person can know the real me. Hide her realy inditity can bring other problem.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:18 -0400

I'm totaly agree with you that the setting can change some one. But for Ammanda it is an over changing.

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How could he know that they wanted to prente him a girl. Tom didn't say anything about Laura. He was called for a diner, no for a gentlement. call

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He was irresponsible.

She use to have connection with him but she did lose him because she shy. and now he is get marry with another person.

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In page 2 of scene one and two.

I think that Amanda was kind person before the disapuring of her hhusband. She is materialis woman. At that time her Husband was giving her what she want. so need to cahnge.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:18 -0400

Actualy asking if the guy was marry? was a good question. But Ask if the guy was rich that was not a good question. there are a lot of girl who get marry to a rich man but aren't happy in their marriae.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:18 -0400

i think is not the same thing that think about Tom is special. it is the mother who is cruel without knowing it.

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money does not make a life better. if there is love and trust life is good.

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But by page 104 in scene 5 and 6, Amanda has begun to transform in to the archetypal of the hustler.

can you please reread this sentence? thank you

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what do you mean the first character of the play. I thought that Tom was the first play in the play.

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in my opinion the dad lift because the mothe

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The question of these question is the mother is a motherfucker. she wante to be rich since before the day she shoose the father of Tom to become her husband.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

I think that the play did not take place in the 1937 and the is also wrong.

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The glass menagerie (1937 Film) by Paul Newman, is a play that describes all the actions of the memorie of the main character and at the same time the narrator: Tom wingfield.

it happene sometimes that student get a new at school. even me I dot one when I was in my country.

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I see why she give up. It was enough to give up.

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women have a good memory than man

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did she has two name?

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i think Jim should ask Tom went they were smoking on the terrace

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a lot of people who was a singer in hight school then go to college never becaome a singer.

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I never see a girl who will tell say to a guy she love in secret that she is shy.

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people get what they give to people.

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why are they talking about light?

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That's why a lot of people don't like to go to girls house, specificly the one they are dating.

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it think what Amanda said is true. sceince is clearning all mysteries thing for Us. but one thing is sure science will never clearn every mysteries. Ther some them will stay mysteries for ever.

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why Amanda is talking about nonsence? this subject is not even connected to perpose of the call.

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what is a match?

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it seem lkie tom is taking is father way. in one way it is good but in another way it is not. Laura her mother are counting on him to survive so before he moves he should make sure that they have something to survive.

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what is the victrola

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she thinks that her children ar not normal because they don't do she want them to do

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that's true. we don't chose when we will lose our mind

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i think Laura is right. she shouldn't answer the door. she has to come the last at the table to surprise the guy.

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now I see why she react like that. But any way what will happen?

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sometimes it is hard to talk to some one in the pass and then you stoped talking to them. I also think that there is something behind all this

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marrige is not a beauty thing. But it is about how you behavor with each other.

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that true. this is a trap to get the man. this the beggest mistake that a lot people do. this type of trap get the man for limited time. it doesn't trap the man for long time. should learn ho to trap oour partener to say forever

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I think everybody should choose their partener.

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yep that one of the important thing that your mom was waiting for.

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some girl are shy to talk to a man.

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i'm agree with Tom. But that means that Laura should stay different from the otheer girl. She has to adpate to her worrld in order to go forword.

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That's how she did this tragedic mistake, appearance. never juge a book through it cover.

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i'm all right with Tom.

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this is the second time that she asked om if th guy was drinking or no. so That means Tom should say such of thing yet.

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why parent always think about money before they give their daughter to a man. money doesn't make hapyness.

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can someone tell me this job is?

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that true. we don't marry all the girl we meet. we just chose the one that the heart beating for.

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I'm realy proud for the mother who asked if the guy who come to see her daughter doesn't drinnk. A lot of parent with they daughter to man without asking themself if the guy is a good guy.

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we do they have to make a lot of preparation for the gentlement who is coming. i think they have to say natural to show to the guy who they realy are.

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in this part I'm with the mother. If there was the moon Tom would say anything to her mother about the gentlement who coming the next day.

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that day one of the happyness day of Amanda

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this sentence Amanda was waitting for a long time.

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everybody knows about it. during the four first scene she been talking about and fighting about.

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some time we don't need a transparent heard to guess what some one is think of.

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I don't why do we have to make wish when there is moon. what the moon represent at that time?

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this paragraph is showing how difference their live is from other people. That may also be the live that Tom would like to have. But he coan not have it because of her mother.

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good man! good job!

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wow! Amanda did attract men, but she only accepte rich men. until she did not have a choise and she chose tom's mother.

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fi I was you i would add this: in her way.

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Finaly I'm agree with ya about the mother.

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you are right in this part. he doesn't think about other people. But here is not the problem. the problem is the mother. she doesn't suporte the children to do what they want to become in the furture. in addition to this she talk to much.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

how someone can live in this kind of house?

Actualy Tom does respecte her mother. it is his mother who is Talking. She does want her childrent to rise and shine, but in her way no in the way that the children wanted.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

SOme time we have to pay attention life in order to make our life bttere. I mean by paying attention to other people life you will not do the same mistake as the rest of the people did.

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This is why since all those things, I tryed to accomplish my purpose in life because I understand you do not have to pay attention to someone else life.

this writing should only be about the first and the second scene of book.

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I agree with you

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OH mother! I can never understand mother they alway bother their children. But this i'm with Tom's mom. Yeah! firstly smoking is not good for the hummu body, and secondly Tom can start think how to improve his future.

Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:26 -0400

In another hand Tom has to smoke in order to stay live and support all the talking form her mother. she talke too much.

The connection between me and Tom is that we never comb our hair.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

Finaly he is going out but no to the movies. This guy like to much too such as everytime he goes out he is going to the movies.

Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:26 -0400

that is the thing i hate ijn my live. when a poor a family has a daughter, they want a rich man to marrie their daughter. But when they have a Boy, they want a poor girl to marrie wife him. wait how cann you find poor girl to egt marrie with ayou poor man

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if you don't want to give your poor girl a poor boy.

since I was born until now I never understand the femal hypothesis. I don't know why she want to prepare the house for a gentleman. We human we have to learn how to be natural with other people.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

that's is ... crazy. yep! tha mom is wow of finding a wife a man for her daughter, that she doesn't even know the time. she went an call some one in at 7 in the morning.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

I don't know why a lot of parent their daughter to get marry early. they donn't even know that marrage is not make for everybody. also they forgetting that things can not happened when the time didn't arriva yer, and we should not make things us we want.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:17 -0400

I think that is true because sometimes iexperince it. I go out juat because I don't want to stay home with the other.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:16 -0400

Tom didn't want to spend his whole life in where he is woking. He want to create he owne jobe and to it.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:16 -0400

Tom should not talk to her mom like. I mean a child should never talk to his or her mom like Tom just did nonmatter wate what happened, or what the mother did to the child.

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when I see this part, I think that the Mother was thhinking that her daughter was a lesbian. I think that the daughter is firstly shy secondly she does not talk to boy. so who she is talking to.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:16 -0400

It seem like the mother is worrying about her daughter, because firstly she is a house girl, a hold gilr is did get marry, and secandly she is not going to school to prepart her future. I think the daughter does not carre about her future.

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:16 -0400

walking? i think that is not true becaue she stoped going to school since January, and January is the time where there is snow and some one can not stay outside during this time. where was she?

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the day I will do that my father will kill me. But wait I wonder where she was during all these time she said were going to school

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in this part the mother were thinking that her daughter was goingg to school. but no, she did not.

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I think she chose their father because she did not have another chose. she have to. She did not love him before they get marry. you know before people were getting marry without love. then start loving each other.

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this is the perfec example of what I just said she want her daught to react like a queen.

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she does not know that rich people and poor people don't react the same way. she and her children are poor, but she want her children to react like rich people.

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she think like a female and react like it. BTW she is female. But it is not a reason to make other people react like her. it is only girl who doing this.

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I hate this part where she is connecting her son to animals. there are not the same. She could tell him about the consequens of eating food without Chewing it.

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how came some someone can send a a post card with only two words? there is something wrong that happened before.

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how came someone can fall in love a long distance. something that we can not even thouch?

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firstly where these truck come from

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do you think that in this country we can offer support to a friend being bullied? Sometime we can not help them because the friend himself. there when you see a bullied situation put in your head that each for himself and god for all

Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:16 -0400

Sa I said before this situation look like: each for himself and god for all

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You got to be kidding me? How can we come out of a room by entering in?

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