Comments by Yeanoor Chowdhury

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:03:10 -0400

I'm starting to write about play, " Galss Menagries" then you can discribes about the play

I really enjoyed to read this essay. this is phenomenal and i really liked it how you describe all the problems in the play and what each of the characters struggling on their lives. Amanda, a mom, who is controlling their lives where she did not left any

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400

Amanda, a mom, who is controlling their lives where she did not left any choice for them to choice what they wants. Toms is being irresponsible and getting addicted to the smoke which he should not be. I really loved it how you explained everything in a details.

It is phenomenal way to address the conflicts between Laura and her family. Nothing will change if she does not speaks up for herself.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:08:22 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:07:17 -0400

But even though the reader doesn't support Laura at all because she is quiet, she needs to share her ideas with others and try convience them to change their mind and let her to make decision for her future.

There family issue will never ends. they are not satisfied what they have, instead they are unhappy with each other

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:05:10 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:03:40 -0400

Tom used to discuss with Amanda for everything, Laura is quiet and never talks but she always has something to say.

I really liked how beautifully you wrote it

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:01:46 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:00:48 -0400

Did she choose to marry someone who would care about her so studying would not be necessary for her ? This is important because the same thing is happening to Laura; she dropped out from her school without even trying.

" last Character" ? who you are talking about? I think you could be specifice about the character name and traits

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 13:00:10 -0400

You could even talk about more how Amanda feels towards her husband. How his husbands style of living affects Toms live?

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:57:55 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:55:14 -0400

The scene in the first and 2nd sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee Williams may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:54:19 -0400

What I have thinking of my book for the reason that my final analyzing is that nothing is created, nothing is done, all this is transformed.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:50:11 -0400

I'm starting to write about my book, once upon a time in the world that all things men had planned or idea were destroyed solely one day because we belong to any person who is the biggest one .

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:10:41 -0400

Amanda the mother, always try to encourage the best of her kids by making them do things that they do not even want to.

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Sun, 03 May 2020 16:27:06 -0400

And he tells her that he was engaged and getting married soon

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:35:10 -0400

The significance of the apartment was that the Wingfield family was living in a small apartment and somehow managing their lives by being a middle class family.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:33:34 -0400

Her story is set in Saint Louis in 1937, specificlly in a small town, in The Wingfield apartment.

This is really phenomenal Oumy . Great jobs. I really enjoyed to read the frst paragraphed. It is clearly shows the conflict between their family and how they are breaking their back but getting nothing. your explanation really good . Thank you

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 12:32:57 -0400

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Sun, 03 May 2020 16:25:23 -0400

I can understand why he does not want to stay in their house when comes back to home from work.

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Sun, 03 May 2020 16:24:06 -0400

While her son, Tom, is being the man of the house, but does not have full respect for her mother.

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Sun, 03 May 2020 16:23:34 -0400

Amanda, the mother, wants what’s best for her kids, but most of the time, she wants her daughter, Laura, to be like her, have gentlemen to follow her.

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Sun, 03 May 2020 16:21:53 -0400

It shows how a family changes their mood and personality so fast. At a one pint they fight and other point they reunited and be together. can be at a certain point, they can fight, and later on they come alone and be the perfect family.

Amanda cant wait for her daughter to get married as soon as possible . she is restless to find a person for her

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 16:37:55 -0400

Amanda wants to have a some times with tom to talk about the situation

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 16:37:04 -0400

It is basically saying about past time where fire escape and everything was different

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 16:29:44 -0400

Amanda trying to pushing him Tom to brings some man for his sister

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 16:04:17 -0400

Here it is talking about scene six where tom is discribing about her friends Jim and also saying he has a better Job than Jim

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:34:42 -0400

Trying to helping out the group to understand what they needs to do

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:32:44 -0400

Student are divided into group to finish up the glass Menageris all the scene

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:06:16 -0400

Mr Paul is adressing what student needs to done

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:36:00 -0400

Emily is optimistic who never lose a hope. She is still expecting that Gettysburg will give her a chance to shows her ability what she can do

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:33:23 -0400

Deniers have not done something significant today because she wake up late. however, she is enough responsible to catch up the class

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:31:27 -0400

Idelkys is happy and proud her self that she own a scholarship and she was filling up some paper to get the money

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:28:43 -0400

Hossanato is a person how gives a main priority to her family. he gives her hands in her house work. she did laundry for her family which clearly emhazied that she cares and love her family

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:26:32 -0400

Aboubakkar is really responsible who is always make sure that everything is fine in the household. He grocery for his home which shows no matter how busy he is in education life , he still take out some times to do to house chores

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:23:36 -0400

Omuy is trying to change her time table by making sure that she is taking care of her heath. She is right now managing her time good way.

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:20:48 -0400

fatomata wants to have a good grade in her class . She is working so hard to keep on track of her all classes

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:17:52 -0400

She loved singing which made her feel clam and good

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:11:02 -0400

Now he is recalling every little details about their past together

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

Laura remembered that they both had a together singing class

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:09:24 -0400

Laura unexpected that he will be guest of her house

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:31:15 -0400

Laura recognized him once she heard his named . She still did not forget his high school hero

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:06:47 -0400

He is refreshing all the memories with Laura

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:05:42 -0400

She is disapponited that her crush did not know her well

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:05:01 -0400

Jim was unaware about that Laura was Tom sister . Laura does not leaves any opportunity to connect with him more

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:41:33 -0400

Laura is trying to woo him

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:03:30 -0400

she is praising tone of his voice to make him sing

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:01:44 -0400

Mom is giving punishment to Tom because of his mistake

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 10:49:28 -0400

She wants to finish up with the dinner before it becomes dark

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:58:59 -0400

He is being kind and maybe trying to save Tom by saying he is fine with candle light

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:58:19 -0400

She is suspect that Tom did not pay the light bill

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:57:03 -0400

She is kind of making fool of Jim to pushing to think that there is something wrong with fuse where reality is something else

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:56:16 -0400

She is trying to distract him from the fact that they did not pay the electricity bill and making fun of the circumstance

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:10:51 -0400

She is kind of talking which does not have a logical answer. she is making up something to talk with him more and making him feel comfortable

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:53:58 -0400

She is more worried about guest than her son . She wants to keep the impression on them until they are here

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:08:49 -0400

I think mom is kind of denouched about Tom ability when it comes to fix something machinery

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:06:28 -0400

I really did not understand what she is talking about in this part.

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 15:02:35 -0400

Physical appearance should not be matter when it comes to get married because marriage is all about respect, trust and understanding

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:46:03 -0400

Her moms wants that Laura looks like women who has a attractive body

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:44:34 -0400

Mothers wants Laura and Jim gets together and married

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:43:03 -0400

Jim and Laura knew each other from the high school.Laura used to like him

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:41:10 -0400

He choosed to be with him because he gives importance of his everything

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:39:03 -0400

He was not comfortable with group of people

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:38:08 -0400

I think , Tom trying to shows that even though he was not socially actives in his high school, it did not stops him to achieved something. He took a example of Jim life as a inspiration

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:37:12 -0400

After all the talent of Jim, eventually Tom has a better job and position than Jim. eventhiugh Tom was not popular at high school, but she is right now in good place

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:35:02 -0400

He was good at everything like basketball . He is very talent full and smart guy

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:32:56 -0400

His nature and behavior was really polite and nice

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:32:03 -0400

Jim is Tom high school friend who was really popular guy

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:31:28 -0400

She is cleaning and changing everything from the house to looks good

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:24:58 -0400

She wants everything presentable

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:24:00 -0400

Mother needs more time to organize and prepare everything to impress those young man to make them to like her daughter. This is why she is kind of disappointed that Tom did not ask her before he confirmed the coming time.

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:20:00 -0400

Mom was happy to hear that Tom invited some gentilmen for a dinner

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:17:28 -0400

Mother intenstion for find a man for her to get married

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 13:16:16 -0400

This whole Play mostly using fire escape . I think fire escape represent freedom or get away from his manupulative life

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:57:23 -0400

He preferred to smoke instead of going to school back

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:55:43 -0400

She is saying he could be use those money in education

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:52:46 -0400

Instead of worrying about her son, she is thinking about money. She worried that how much money he is spending on smoke

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:51:55 -0400

Tom somke over limit which could cause his heath. Her mom is not happy with his habit

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:50:44 -0400

He is stepping out of from the house just to relax. However, Smoking is not good for heath because it can cause a lung cancer

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:49:37 -0400

Her husband always make sure to look good to present himself to the society to get respect. Amanda still cant forget her husband

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:47:58 -0400

Amanda is using Tom to make her remind of her husband because her husband was under control of her. She wants to do same things with Tom

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:45:17 -0400

I can imagine that Amanda wants to control her son and make him do what she wants. She did not ask him to fix the hair not only because he will looks handsome, but also she wants to rule over him

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:42:54 -0400

Toms showed up with well dressed, who is heading to the fire escape

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:38:27 -0400

I think author is trying to implies that both sister are content and delightful . They are cleaning up everything from the dining room and making their movement that they are danceing or their is any occasion going on

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:37:18 -0400

Laura trying to convince to Tom to step forward and say sorry to mom .

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:28:52 -0400

There is some reason mother does not talk to Tom. I wonder what is the reason?

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:28:12 -0400

He will wake up morning but he will not be bright or happy

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:27:07 -0400

He is recalling the past when Amanda used to says wake up early in the morning

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:26:17 -0400

He is saying how magic works. Hoe things can be change through magic

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:24:02 -0400

He also enjoyed the magician show. I think all of these his imagination.

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:23:08 -0400

Luara wonder why he has to watch everything that has done outside

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:21:50 -0400

Tome stayed long time outside and intend to entertainment himself. He used imagery to discribed what he had did in outside

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:20:43 -0400

I think Amanda is upset about somethings. This is why, her tone of the voice change

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:15:49 -0400

I wonder what is D.A.R means

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:13:25 -0400

He is describing with details that what kind of man mom is looking for Laura. she wants someone who is rich and well settel down . Therefore, he can give a comfortable life to her

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:11:56 -0400

This is shows her character and personality. I think it means whatever she does , it does not make anyone doubt her decision or action. she is strong . so it is hard to disobey her decision

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 12:06:16 -0400

Mother wants Laura to get married to have a stable and respectable life.

Sun, 19 Apr 2020 11:59:50 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400