Comments by students Ahmed edhah Most recent public comments by students Ahmed edhah https://nowcomment.com/users/63203 I think here Laura did something smart. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819413 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819413 She wanted to let her brother Tom talk with his mother, so she act like she fell down in the stairs. She knew that her mother and her brother will hurry to make sure that Laura is fine, then she just go and leave her mom with her brother to talk. Mon, 20 Apr 2020 04:08:00 -0400 Laura trying to persuade Tom to say sorry to his mom about what happen last night. She think if he said sorry, the mother will excuse him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1819412 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1819412 Mon, 20 Apr 2020 04:03:10 -0400 I don't agree with what is Tom doing, to run away from problems isn't the solution to the situation. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819411 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819411 Plus he should be stronger here to understand what his mom trying to say, however I know he's having a lot of things going on in his mind. Mon, 20 Apr 2020 03:56:20 -0400 Tom felt that his mom is controlling his life, by giving him a lot of instructions. He screamed on his mom because he thinks that his mom never think about what is he doing for their family. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819409 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819409 Mon, 20 Apr 2020 03:52:49 -0400 The mother been checking the magazines and calling trying to find a good man that may meet her daughter. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819407 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1819407 Mon, 20 Apr 2020 03:47:54 -0400 I,m agree with you that may be a bad decision, but what you think is the best thing that the mother could do in this situation. I,m just thinking, because Laura couldn't success at education and her mother financial situation seems like a bad situation. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1819223 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1819223 Mon, 20 Apr 2020 00:09:05 -0400 That's what any mother will do, https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1819150 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1819150 That's what any mother will do, if she have a daughter that didn't like to finish college and being successful as well as the mother not able to support the girl financially. She will think about getting her daughter a man who may give her happy life. Sun, 19 Apr 2020 23:32:26 -0400 This quote stand out for me, it is a painful truth. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819053 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819053 Everything that Amanda mention is the reality of 50% of females in my country, there's two reasons for a woman to got into this situation. It could be that this woman didn't like school so she drop of thinking that when I got married my husband will buy give me everything I need. The second most common reason, which is that their parents didn't allowed them to finish school due to our their stupid culture not the religion as some people thought. Sun, 19 Apr 2020 22:51:05 -0400 OMG she's just like my brother who act like he's going to school everyday, but his teachers told me he been absent for two weeks. By the way my brother were going to the gym everyday when my mom, thinking he's in the school. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819027 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819027 Sun, 19 Apr 2020 22:38:07 -0400 * To correct my mistake, it was Laura first day at business college. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819020 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819020 Sun, 19 Apr 2020 22:30:59 -0400 Here I can make an great connection! https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819014 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1819014 Just like how Laura felt in the first day at the school, my brother have the same experience in his first school day here in NYC. I think that could happen to kids who scare of school for some reasons. Sun, 19 Apr 2020 22:30:59 -0400 It seems like her daughter not going to school. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1818980 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1818980 Her daughter skipping the school, but Amanda couldn't believe that, since her daughter leaving the house everyday as she's going to school. Sun, 19 Apr 2020 22:16:40 -0400 Description https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1818950 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1818950 Sun, 19 Apr 2020 21:37:59 -0400 Here we go, Just like how teenagers doing all the time, acting stupid in order to find excuses. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1809956 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1809956 I think she understand why her mom ask her that question (How old r u) but she act like "Mom you know my age. Laura wanted her mom to think that she still not old enough to understand that is wrong so I have to forgive her. Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:44:34 -0400 Mother wanted to show her daughter that she's doing something wrong, and that she is old enough to understand that is wrong. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1809909 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1809909 Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:35:53 -0400 Pressure on Islam https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1761523 https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1761523 This women challenged the world when she came out in public as a Muslim woman who cover her hair and body, in a world full of judgment.She was viewed different by many people for just covering her hair. But like she said she's proud of being who she is. Fri, 03 Apr 2020 02:31:12 -0400 Experienced people. https://nowcomment.com/documents/166940?scroll_to=1761493 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166940?scroll_to=1761493 Ms.Moore is an experienced woman, here I stop to think about experienced people. I have learn that we really need an experienced people in our life, to take their opinion sometime. Fri, 03 Apr 2020 01:59:36 -0400 Good way to start. https://nowcomment.com/documents/166940?scroll_to=1761490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166940?scroll_to=1761490 I agree with you, dear Oumy, these three stories teach us a lot of things. Mon, 07 Nov 2022 02:12:58 -0500 A description of the apartment from the inside. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715281 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715281 A description of the apartment from the inside, and the distribution of parts of the apartment between a living room, a kitchen, and others. There are pictures of the father hanging in the living room. The father is described from the picture that he wears his hat during the First World War. He is smiling and showing courage forever. Tue, 24 Mar 2020 22:10:30 -0400 Memory plays a large role in creating the scene, and because memory has a great connection to the heart it increases some unreal details due to emotion. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715227 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715227 Tue, 24 Mar 2020 21:58:42 -0400 I think this sentence explaining the fact that these buildings structures may be at risk of slow fires-and that's why the apartments have an alley to enter through extinguishing fires. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715165 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715165 Tue, 24 Mar 2020 21:45:20 -0400 Description of the apartment location! https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1715117 Tue, 24 Mar 2020 21:32:03 -0400 I think there is an action that made him remember something that he didn't like to remember. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711762 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711762 Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:24:41 -0400 Correct Ms.Oumy https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1638002 https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1638002 We all in the same situation with Walter Diaz, and most of the students in this class doing great as an immigrant looking forward to have better future, however we have done similar things like that to talk to each other about our cultures. I think we should do that in our last year at least plan a day where we could have time to show our cultures to our teachers and all students in Ellis, I think it will be so much fun and great thing to do. Since you are so close from our school office, I will ask you to ask the main people in our school to find a day for us to do that and let people who want to show their cultures know so they could prepare for it. Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:50:28 -0400 Strongly agree! https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1638001 https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1638001 Yes Fatema he is a person who care about people and always wanted to help. I think one of the reasons why he want to help people is that he had a lot of experience and he been suffered in hard situation, that gave him power and push him to help any people who is suffering in similar situation. Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:34:25 -0400 I like what Walter Diaz did and keep doing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1637999 https://nowcomment.com/documents/152779?scroll_to=1637999 The fact that immigrant have to feel somehow that they are not belong to the US may cause some people to forget their cultures and pretend other culture characteristics. While Walter Diaz didn't go that way, he keep in his mind that he have to adapt to the US culture, but never forget about his real culture, so he show up with his friends and done a lot of things for themselves as an immigrants and show people their cultures. Thu, 12 Mar 2020 03:27:01 -0400 Great https://nowcomment.com/documents/165551?scroll_to=1628815 https://nowcomment.com/documents/165551?scroll_to=1628815 Great explanation. Mon, 02 Mar 2020 05:19:04 -0500 You are right https://nowcomment.com/documents/164681?scroll_to=1628814 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164681?scroll_to=1628814 Strongly agree with you, these three stories teach us a lot of things based on the situations in the stories. Mon, 02 Mar 2020 05:08:52 -0500 Dee wanted to show love! https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1573600 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1573600 The point of Dee kissing her sis Maggie is, that Dee wanted to show mama that Dee love Maggie and care about her. The way mama was thinking that Dee don't like her sister to win any think were wrong now, because Dee love hear sister. However Dee wanted the quilt because she knew how important is to save old things. Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400 Dee wanted to show love! https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634664 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634664 The point of Dee kissing her sis Maggie is, that Dee wanted to show mama that Dee love Maggie and care about her. The way mama was thinking that Dee don't like her sister to win any think were wrong now, because Dee love hear sister. However Dee wanted the quilt because she knew how important is to save old things. Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:25 -0500 Dee wanted to show love! https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634361 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634361 The point of Dee kissing her sis Maggie is, that Dee wanted to show mama that Dee love Maggie and care about her. The way mama was thinking that Dee don't like her sister to win any think were wrong now, because Dee love hear sister. However Dee wanted the quilt because she knew how important is to save old things. Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:51 -0500 Dee wanted to save the quilt! https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634343 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634343 The real reason behind why Dee wanted o have the quilt Is, That she learned how important is to take care of the Archaeology. Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:48 -0500 Dee wanted to save the quilt! https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1573599 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1573599 The real reason behind why Dee wanted o have the quilt Is, That she learned how important is to take care of the Archaeology. Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400 Dee wanted to save the quilt! https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634649 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634649 The real reason behind why Dee wanted o have the quilt Is, That she learned how important is to take care of the Archaeology. Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:23 -0500 The differences between Dee and Maggie! https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1573598 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1573598 Dee had stronger characteristics then Dee because She like to show up, while Maggie don't. Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400 The differences between Dee and Maggie! https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634509 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634509 Dee had stronger characteristics then Dee because She like to show up, while Maggie don't. Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:06 -0500 The differences between Dee and Maggie! https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634206 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634206 Dee had stronger characteristics then Dee because She like to show up, while Maggie don't. Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:30 -0500 Mama describes Dee and her sister. https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634508 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634508 Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:06 -0500 Mama describes Dee and her sister. https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634205 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634205 Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:30 -0500 Mama describes Dee and her sister. https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1571116 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1571116 Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:49 -0400 What a description of the yard. https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1571088 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158262?scroll_to=1571088 What a description of the yard, It seems like the yard is so important for them!! Wed, 27 Apr 2022 11:09:42 -0400 What a description of the yard. https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634404 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296608?scroll_to=2634404 What a description of the yard, It seems like the yard is so important for them!! Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:55 -0500 What a description of the yard. https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634101 https://nowcomment.com/documents/296605?scroll_to=2634101 What a description of the yard, It seems like the yard is so important for them!! Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:17 -0500 Ms.Moore have really good heart. https://nowcomment.com/documents/158324?scroll_to=1551502 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158324?scroll_to=1551502 She's really good lady (Ms.Moore) because she used her life and college experience to help young people who's not from her family and guide them to the right path (Education), while that time where most young African American male and female were accept their unfairly situation and not dreaming to go far and having better future by fight to learn and being educated. Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500 Good observation, I,m agree with you. https://nowcomment.com/documents/158324?scroll_to=1543913 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158324?scroll_to=1543913 Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500 She use the flashback to start the story about the past. https://nowcomment.com/documents/158324?scroll_to=1541514 https://nowcomment.com/documents/158324?scroll_to=1541514 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:10 -0400 I don't think that her sister was happy of what, the mother decided, because she wanted the quilt for herself.Maybe Dee is acting that https://nowcomment.com/documents/161034?scroll_to=1536465 https://nowcomment.com/documents/161034?scroll_to=1536465 I don't think that her sister was happy of what, the mother decided, because she wanted the quilt for herself.Maybe Dee is acting that she is happy for her sister, but the from the inside she is envy, so you can say that. " I like that my sister show that she agree with the decision of Mama" Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500 Great job! https://nowcomment.com/documents/161037?scroll_to=1535676 https://nowcomment.com/documents/161037?scroll_to=1535676 Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500 A lot of emotion, and this is the truth in my opinion in the end of the day she like/love her sister. https://nowcomment.com/documents/161037?scroll_to=1535675 https://nowcomment.com/documents/161037?scroll_to=1535675 Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500 Good job! https://nowcomment.com/documents/161033?scroll_to=1535669 https://nowcomment.com/documents/161033?scroll_to=1535669 Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500 Great start. https://nowcomment.com/documents/161033?scroll_to=1535668 https://nowcomment.com/documents/161033?scroll_to=1535668 Wed, 29 Jan 2020 22:54:35 -0500