Comments by Celines Zamora

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Wed, 06 May 2020 14:20:40 -0400

After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this play because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seems in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda find out the truth about Tom. Probably Tom ignored the things that his mother talked to him about.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 14:20:42 -0400

We learn something interesting about one on the characters, Amanda in line 46 where it says; “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family, especially with Tom. She know that Tom have problems and he try to be alone. She want to know their excuses and find something to help.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 14:20:45 -0400

The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene shows a conflict where the family tries to solve a problem. An example of this is in line 49. “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because these words are of Amanda and she is worried for her son. This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 14:20:47 -0400

This play “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories of the sons of the family where they explain some details about his life. The protagonists are Tom (son), Amamda (mom) and Laura (daughter). Every protagonist has different personalities that are facing somo struggle about thinking in their future. When you read you find things interesting in the story according to the scenes.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:57:37 -0400

A reader will recognize that the turning point for Amanda comes when describing the climax of the book. In lines 76 in Scene five, encourages this evidence; AMANDA: Do you realize he's the first young man we've introduced to your sister? It's terrible, dreadful, disgraceful that poor little sister has never received a single gentleman caller! 1Tom, come inside!.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:57:34 -0400

But by in line 153, Amanda has begun to transform into the archetypal antagonist. She changed spontaneously in her opinions about her family. It's says; “AMANDA: What gives her any idea? However, you do act strangely. ! - I'm not criticizing, understand that! I know your ambitions do not lie in the warehouse, that like everybody in the whole wide world - you've had to make sacrifices, but - Tom - Tom - life's not easy, it calls for - Spartan endurance ! There's so many things in my heart that I cannot describe to you ! I've never told you but - I loved your father”.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:57:32 -0400

Amanda is a dynamic character. Her archetype changes over the course of the book. At the beginning of the story, she is the archetypal "the mother". This can be seen in lines 36 in first scene, where the author writes; “Amanda [to her son]: Honey, don't push with your fingers. If you have to push with something, the thing to push with is a crust of bread. And chew !chew! Animals have sections in their stomachs which enable them to digest food without mastication, but human beings are supposed to chew their food before they swallow it down”.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:12:40 -0400

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene 3 in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 12:26:47 -0400

An example of this is inthe first scenein line 27; where it says: “Amanda and Laura are seated at a drop-leaf table.

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Mon, 04 May 2020 13:00:32 -0400

After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this play because it explains the relationship that this family has and struggles that the mother (Amanda) tries to resolve in her future. What’s probably going to happen next is that the mother understands the struggle that her son’s have in their lives and she can give some advice but everyone decides different road takes in their life.

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Mon, 04 May 2020 13:00:34 -0400

A reader’s questions might start in line 74 in the first scene where it says: “Amanda: No, dear, you go in front and study your typewriter chart. Or practice your shorthand a little. Stay fresh and pretty! It's almost time for our gentlemen callers to start arriving. [She flounces girlishly toward the kitchenette.] How many do you suppose we're going to entertain this afternoon?..” This is important because it describes the personality of Amanda that wants the best future for her sons. This part is confusing because all parents the best for her sons but she has a specific reason to manipulate her family on her way. The author seems to be making the point that Amanda is the first protagonist in this book because she gives some advice to her son’s, using some strategies and this make that the reader continue to read the play.

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Mon, 04 May 2020 13:00:37 -0400

The first scene of “The Glass Menagerie”by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling confused because it describes the setting of the scenes in the play where the protagonist is ready to start the show. Then the protagonists start with the dialogue that is family discussion. An example of this is in scene in line 27; where it says: “Amanda and Laura are seated at a drop-leaf table. Eating is indicated by gestures without food or utensils. Amanda faces the audience. Tom and Laura Seated is a profile.” This is mysterious because you try to understand that it happened to the protagonist and wait for more information and after they start to dialogue you can identify every protagonist in the play.

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Mon, 04 May 2020 13:01:55 -0400

This play is based on the memories of the narrator Tom Wingfield. He related part of his life in different scenes according to what he remembered. Also describe some specific issues that his family struggled with when he was young. The play has some strategies and literary techniques that each book has in different perspectives according to the readers.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:11:16 -0400

After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking forward to read the rest of this play because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seem’s in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truth of Tom. Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother told to him.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:12:40 -0400

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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Wed, 06 May 2020 13:11:03 -0400

The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene, it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem. An example of this is in scene 3 in line 49; “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son. This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 21:14:17 -0400

I accept as true with in the “Glass of Menagerie'' the important persona is Tom. In the play, even if Tom takes off Amanda and Laura, he is frequently bandy even merciless toward them. He is also a man who does not care about what other contributors of this family think. Then I experience like he is selfish. He is bold and selfish. He no has way to pay attention a his mom due to the fact he feels his mother is too much. I can describe Tom’s relationships with others a little in a different way because Tom has a sturdy relationship with his sister and does why he wish to guard her with the aid of ignoring his mother sometimes. I assume Tom sincerely loves his sister. However he thinks he may want to forget about that when he left. But it never went away. I observe that in scene I, the relationship between Tom and Amanda is stretched and worn. In this scene, you can see that Tom seems to have a hard time tolerating her, and whilst Amanda loves his child notwithstanding all. One, she is miserable. Two, she scares. three, she is sad.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 21:08:01 -0400

I accept as true in “The Glass Menagerie'' the important person is Tom.

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Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:49:36 -0400

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Tue, 05 May 2020 14:38:04 -0400

After this part of the play, most readers will probably continue reading because they want to know how the family is going to end. In the first and second sections, I predicted that the family will come to an understanding. In the next section, we might see Tom really realizes the effort that his mother is doing for him. He now knows that his mother only wants the best for him. There is gonna be a time in life when we are lost however a little bit of concentration may bring us back.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:43:05 -0400

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:42:24 -0400

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda, where it says: “Mother was a woman of action as well as words”. This is typical of how Amanda acts in the play because she is just a mother who thinks what’s best for her childrens. Sometimes kids do not understand what adults can see. In my perspective, this makes sense because this is how many kids feel towards their parents. It feels like you are oppressed about something. Not understanding might lead them to mention that the mother is the bad guy because she is trying to turn her kids ' lives miserable. I think some readers might be her friend because many people can see my point like where I am coming from.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:40:42 -0400

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Tue, 05 May 2020 14:37:21 -0400

The third and final section of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams, might leave a reading feeling interested because there is a lot going on in the third and fourth sections. Amanda is manipulative and controlling towards her childrens. Amanda wants Laura to marry some important in society so that people will look at her as a respectful woman. She did not even care whether her daughter likes them or not. An example of line number four says; “ After the fiasco at Rubicam's Business College, the idea of getting a gentleman caller for Laura began to play a more and more important part in Mother's calculations. It became an obsession. Like some archetype of the universal unconscious, the image of the gentleman caller haunted our small apartment”. This is very calculative because we can learn from Tom that his mother is very conniving with her actions and how she can get what she desires.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:32:07 -0400

2The scene in the first and 2d sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee Williams may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor. Instead of, lifestyles is no longer like that due to the fact we can be negative and have a blessed lifestyles that is easy. An example of this is on page “ one of those sizable hive-like conglomerations of mobile living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded city facilities of lower-middle-class populace and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and essentially enslaved part of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and characteristic as one interfused mass of automatism.” This is interesting due to the fact America is a place that has to plenty discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but at cease of the day the understand this is now not excellent for the populace that fight to get the independence for their country. Since all of them are the same and they are doing their first-class to have a exact kind of life circumstance for they can live to tell the tale in their place.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:31:29 -0400

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:30:50 -0400

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:29:50 -0400

2The scene in the first and 2d sections of "The Glass Menagerie" by Tennessee Williams, may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact. This scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor. Instead of life styles is no longer like that due to the fact we can be negative and have a blessed life styles that is easy. An example of this is in scene in lines “ one of those sizable hive-like conglomerations of mobile living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded city facilities of lower-middle-class populace and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and essentially enslaved part of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and characteristic as one interfused mass of automatism.” This is interesting due to the fact America is a place that has to plenty discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but at cease of the day the understand this is now not excellent for the populace that fight to get the independence for their country. Since all of them are the same and they are doing their first-class to have a exact kind of life circumstance for they can live to tell the tale in their place.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:25:54 -0400

3A reader’s questions might start in scene un lines 612 where it says:”In Spain there used to be revolution. Here there was solely shouting and confusion.” This is important because the author explain about Spain revolution is an alternative of he is talking about American life conditions. This is shocking but at the equal moment fascinating because we can know and connect that all of the U.S.A is related in view that if some country that is effective others will get effects. That was once the case of this crise that used to be perplexing in their vicinity due to the fact to find a job we want more businesses that can help people to go work. The creator appears to be making the factor that every so often making a wager is vital when you are writing a play with a lot imagery. We must describe everything that can help the reader to understand.

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Sat, 02 May 2020 20:19:43 -0400

4After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking ahead to reading the rest of this play because it is too drama with a lot of questioning internal. I like the way the writer is trying to persuade a reader even if it is an imaginary story.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:29:52 -0400

An example is in scene () in lines 34 “I haven't enjoyed one bite of this dinner because of your constant directions on how to eat it.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:28:03 -0400

After this part of the play, the most reader will probably try their best to have a good relationship with each other. Furthermore, they will be looking forwards to reading the rest of this play because the author might continue to write more about the changes of the character and teach people that sometimes life can be messy and unfair. However, there are brilliant moments that are found in life. In my perspective, we will take our time and think twice before doing anything that leads us to a horrible path. What’s probably going to happen next is that Tom will realize what his mother wants for him. Additionally, Laura will take her life into her hands and try to make a better future out of it.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:25:44 -0400

A reader’s questions might start in scene () in lines 6, where it says “Downstage is the living-room, which also serves as a sleeping-room for Laura, the sofa is unfolding to make her bed. Upstage, center, and divided by a wide arch or second proscenium with transparent faded portières (or second curtain), is the dining-room. In an old fashioned what-not in the living-room are seen scores of transparent glass animals. A blown-up photograph of the father hangs on the wall of the living room, facing the audience, to the left of the archway. It is the face of a very handsome young man in a doughboy's First World War cap. He is gallantly smiling, ineluctably smiling, as if to say 'I will be smiling forever'”. This paragraph is important because it describes a memory that the family lived in the past. Whenever they are in that place they can feel happy and safe. They have each other no matter their differences. At the flashback may help the bad moments that Tom was dealing with his mom when he thinks that she was controlling her. I think the author seems to be making the point that people can be happy at a time. Then all that goes away just by a small action. The reason why people need to be good with each other and try to make great memories that could erase all the terrible moments on the past.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:18:02 -0400

The fist and the second chapter of this play of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams, might leave me a reader feeling enthusiastic because I see in the play everyone has a character to teach people what life is. I learned from Tom that people should have their lives in control and make sure they are taking good decisions that lead them to success in their future. Additionally, I do not think that people are being overprotective to make their life difficult. I learned from Amanda that a person has done no matter what to protect and do what is right for their children and lead them to a good path. An example of this is in line 34 said “I haven't enjoyed one bite of this dinner because of your constant directions on how to eat it. It's you that makes me rush through meals with your hawk-like attention to every bite I take. Sickening - spoils my appetite - all this discussion of - animals' secretion - salivary glands -mastication”! This is illustrating that Tom is being hard over his mom because he thinks that his mother is making his life hard and annoying based on her strict rules about eating. In my opinion, I think that people should think twice to judge people about their actions.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:14:53 -0400

On the first and the second chapter of this play “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams, might leave me a reader feeling enthusiastic because I see in the play everyone has a character where teach us what is life.

I think you need to explain who is the narrator because is important for the play

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:12:54 -0400

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:11:52 -0400

To begin with, this play is based on a noble family. The mother is trying to raise her kids to be better people in the future. Sometimes the mother reacts in a way that the kids feel that she is being overprotective. But she thinks that she is doing what is right for her kids. Most of the time the narrator used great imagery to describe the story better and to remember good feelings that they created. Memories are important in a person’s life.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:09:34 -0400

She reacts in a way that the kids feel that she is being overprotective.

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Thu, 30 Apr 2020 15:08:31 -0400

This play is based on a noble family.

But Laura have good memory that Jim.

Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:34 -0400

The question of Laura was a surprise for Jim.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 15:20:49 -0400

She is try to hide her nervous with Jim

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 15:19:04 -0400

they talk about the light because was off and probably Tom forget pay the bill.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 15:13:58 -0400

Amanda is surprise about the wedding.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:55:39 -0400

This sentence is talking about Tom.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 16:52:33 -0400

He explain the things that he did about his future and develop in there with some courses that he experiment during his life.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:42:35 -0400

Jim was crush of Laura and she can not forget any detail about him.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:33:29 -0400

She knows that was him but never think that he really was to go in her house.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:31:15 -0400

Sure, Laura help Jim to remember some memories about his past.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:28:28 -0400

I think she on the beginning feel nervous because she like Jim but in the same time she have mixed feeling about her first meet with Jim.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 11:25:33 -0400

Probably she want time to know more about Jim.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 10:49:28 -0400

She try to show that she is good mother and care about her sons.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 10:30:41 -0400

This words show the feeling that he have on his mid about his father.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 00:40:32 -0400

She try to look if Jim is comfortable in there and know about that it's going with Tom.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 00:24:01 -0400

I think Tom have more reasons to don't talk about Laura.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 00:21:15 -0400

In my opinion Jim means that he never meet with a shy girl and Laura is the first girl.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 00:20:08 -0400

He try to distract a Jim and the same time to help a Laura.

Tue, 21 Apr 2020 00:13:29 -0400

In my opinion her personality is try to gives different opportunities for her sons and don't have the same situation like her.

Mon, 20 Apr 2020 23:02:25 -0400

I think Tom don't feel well talk about his father because he has mixed feelings about it.

Mon, 20 Apr 2020 22:58:31 -0400

She want connection with her sons.

Mon, 20 Apr 2020 22:38:33 -0400

She wants to know more about Tom.

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:41:31 -0400

I think Amanda has bad memories about her husband that why she don't like the fire scape.

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:39:58 -0400

I think Tom try to change the conversation with her mom by laura psituation.

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:33:46 -0400

Amanda try to gives some examples to Tom and he understand the reason, why is important the things that he have in his life.

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:28:28 -0400

I totally agree with you because she was around to try to be reasonable to her sons with her advices.

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:26:04 -0400

laura was preocuped by her family discussion and confused by that.

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:22:22 -0400

I think this sentence have a purpose to understand the importance of her mother

Thu, 16 Apr 2020 15:17:05 -0400

Amanda wants good future for her daughter. Always the parents want the best for their son's.

Wed, 15 Apr 2020 19:52:30 -0400

Amanda wants that Tom don't spend money in things like smoking.

Wed, 15 Apr 2020 19:42:12 -0400

She try to unsdertand the idea of Tom

Tue, 14 Apr 2020 15:41:31 -0400

I think she mean that she want private place with her son.

Tue, 14 Apr 2020 15:38:47 -0400

I think this mean that Amanda wants to wake up a Tom and that's why ask to Laura to find a Tom.

Tue, 14 Apr 2020 15:33:55 -0400

Meaning of D.A.R is daughters of the American Revolution.

Tue, 14 Apr 2020 15:11:29 -0400

Also its good time to share time with our family without social media.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400

we know that the social media is part of our life and all teenagers are use to distraction that its good strategy to use.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400

This is a alert to remember to following the procedures.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400

in this paragraph explain some procedures to no get worried about the circumstances.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:45 -0400

we need to care everyone.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:44 -0400

We need to following the procedures to reduces the chaos that we live right now.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:44 -0400

This sentence tell us the truth because every student it missing moments to share with our friends and some plans that everyone have to do.

Thu, 30 Apr 2020 17:14:44 -0400

This paragraph tell us that that Amanda want find a good future for her daughter. But Laura show that she is not ready get marry.

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 13:09:16 -0400

I agree with you because she try to see the differences that if she married with a other men. She is reflecting on her decisions.

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 13:04:17 -0400

I think probable he show that its ok if this father not is there but in the same time he feel anguish for his father.

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:59:51 -0400

This mean that its the main idea?

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:49:02 -0400

They still continue with this issues?

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:46:11 -0400

describe the place how look with may details that have on the place.

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:35:30 -0400

I agree with you because said the audience is on the dark waiting for the program.

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:28:57 -0400

I think the sentence mean that all the details are not clear.

Thu, 26 Mar 2020 12:24:41 -0400

Is a person that have one mission to do.(agent)

Tue, 24 Mar 2020 15:18:57 -0400

Its a town of Spain they called Guernica.

Tue, 24 Mar 2020 15:11:28 -0400

Which literary technique?

Tue, 24 Mar 2020 15:04:10 -0400

I think you need to explain a little be more your opinion about religion. Everyone a received discrimination by their religion.

Mon, 09 Mar 2020 10:18:19 -0400

They make or try to make?

Sun, 08 Mar 2020 19:47:07 -0400

The purpose of young people is help.

Sun, 08 Mar 2020 19:43:16 -0400

This sentence have strong opinion about the young people

Sun, 08 Mar 2020 19:41:58 -0400

I agree with you in this sentence you identify clear connection.

Sun, 08 Mar 2020 19:17:33 -0400

Her main idea of her is to get people involved on the issue and together find a solution of the violation specialty on the guns restriction. .

Thu, 05 Mar 2020 15:41:45 -0500

I think this sentence its long you can break up. You describe clear your ideas that connect with the evidence.

Thu, 05 Mar 2020 15:37:58 -0500