Comments by Hanna Salem

Edna Chaves is proposing a solution to tackle the issue of gun violence.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 14:46:07 -0500

She is addressing that fostering a peaceful environment for high school students will be achieved if politicians pay attention to establishing more metal health rehab or mentor ship programs . she totally denounce the idea of bringing more security to the school or arming the teachers.

The issue of gun violence has its underlying cause of discrimination against black and brown youth.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 14:37:07 -0500

Edna chaves mourning the fact that mortality due to gun violence in her community is perceived as normal because it happens very often.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 14:35:33 -0500

Edna chaves explains her traumatic experience after her brother death due to gun violence.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 14:33:32 -0500

"I learned how to duck from bullets before i learned how to read" emphasizes the significance of acknowledging the gun violence issues in los angelos community

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 14:30:41 -0500

Edna Chavez a young activist who addresses the issue gun violence in los angelos community

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:42:55 -0500

it's time to eradicate the greed and the ignorance about our earth resources. We have to understand that the earth will gave us the live that we want if we respect our planet

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:26:46 -0500

some countries are shifting from the use of fossil fuels to renewable energy.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:21:48 -0500

Climate change have been a consistent issue for the last 20 years. There is no unanioms agrrement to solve this ongoing issue but the young youth from this generation are willing to make it a movement and they are not going to give up unless they see slou

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:19:32 -0500

Thanks to the powerful advocates and everyone who cares about this Earth. 220 institutions are divested from using fossil fuels.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:16:05 -0500

The young youth is reinforcing the significance of climate change issues for our generation as well as he upcoming generation.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:13:07 -0500

Climate change doesn't only affects the live on animals or the rising of sea level. It reflects in every single aspect of our life and will continue to vet worse if not enough people take an action

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:09:48 -0500

The young youth takes the climate change issues as part of his responsibility.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:07:08 -0500

"All life is sacred" this sentence emphasizes the importance of every living thing around us. We are all connected and when anybody causes harm it affects us in a way or another.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:05:09 -0500

The youth is stressing about the importance of "united actions to make a difference" . I agree with that because the planet is for all of us and everyone has to care equally.

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 13:02:16 -0500

Imani is one of the people who wants to make a change in the world

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 12:57:46 -0500

Imani is young bold activist who advocated to break the stereotypes of being queer and Muslims. Imani wants the world to know that its okay to be queer and Muslim. Queer Muslims are one of the marginalized communities whose voice has to be heard. Imani it taking a step on achieving that and her work helps launching a hashtag called queer confession.

Imnai voice inspire other queer muslims to be themselves and love themselves they way they are

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 12:51:39 -0500

Balir imani is an inspiring example for queer muslims. Becasue of her voice other queer muslims were able to be heard and discuss there opinions

Sat, 29 Feb 2020 12:49:30 -0500

Blair is discussing how people are unaware of the existence of queer Muslims

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:38:11 -0500

Imani is saying how people were judging her because she was wearing hijab

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:31:33 -0500

Blair imani discussing her struggles as Muslim black queer

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:30:42 -0500

The young adult is using music to help him adapt with new environment and also to inspire other immigrants

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:20:27 -0500

The young adult is inspiring other young adults through music

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:18:22 -0500

This young adult is using his talent at music to educate others about his culture

Tue, 25 Feb 2020 15:16:41 -0500

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Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:34:00 -0500

Once you give up, you eliminate every single tiny chance your in life to make your life a better place.

That's true . It also change the way you perceive the world.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:33:24 -0500

I love it

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:31:48 -0500

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:03:55 -0500

In conclusion, the three of the stories is talking about racial inequality.

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:03:52 -0500

Impoverishment could be the main reason were some of the characters of these stories trying to conceal their self in a small place where they have no access to somethings signifuicant.

I think you have to add more to the conclusion. Explain why its important to read these stories.

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:28:22 -0500

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:03:48 -0500

The significant similarities among these three stories is they are young tenneger who is curious and craving to fulfill what they actually deserve. differentiates and distinguishes The Lesson from the other two is the children's lives a life where they don't have access to explore the world and being uneducated letting their priority in the society very low. differentiates and distinguishes Everyday use from the other two is Maggie’s less self-esteem taking away to see the real and make communication with people. differentiates and distinguishes How to date brown girl... from the other two is the narrator knows how to behave and act depends on the situation and he is being very disrespectful toward girls.

I don't think that you have to define what characterization is

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:22:13 -0500

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:03:43 -0500

The second literary element is characterization.

you should write what makes Everyday use different or distinctive is

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:19:22 -0500

what do you mean by because of the time ?

Tue, 28 Jan 2020 15:21:31 -0500

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:03:04 -0500

Their wrong idea and not have the courage to take the huge steps and decision is not letting them have the life what they carving for.

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Thu, 30 Jan 2020 15:02:56 -0500

One of the characters in each story is illiterate.

The author is making sterotypes about white males. "Africa" indicates his african roots

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 13:00:14 -0500

he is using the word "bitch" becasue this is the language they use in the ghetto.

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:50:24 -0500

it doesn't say that teenage girls are hoes. the spanish word means old women

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:48:19 -0500

The author is trying to hide any signs that reflects his poverty.

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:44:17 -0500

The author is listing where to hide the cheese depending if the girl is the from the same neighbourhood or an outsider.

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:43:31 -0500

The author is insecure about his background .

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:38:15 -0500

The author have insecurities about the ghetto culture he raised in.

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:36:36 -0500

The author is hiding his true-self before he dates a girl.

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:34:18 -0500

it is for the poor people.

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:21:18 -0500

The author is making stereotype about how to behave if you are dating a girl based on ethnicities .

Thu, 09 Jan 2020 12:19:47 -0500

Miss Moore is a person who value education and try to spread it out.

Thu, 13 Jul 2023 23:27:52 -0400

The kids has never been exposed to anything outside the ghetto.

Wed, 28 Sep 2022 13:28:25 -0400

Miss Moore is trying to enlighten the kids about the wealth inequality they are witnessing.

Thu, 12 Dec 2019 15:28:36 -0500

This sentence is showing that miss Moore is trying to expose the kids o the culture outside of the ghetto.

Thu, 12 Dec 2019 15:27:31 -0500

The narrator is showing that miss Moore is trying to educate the kids in her neighborhood.

Thu, 12 Dec 2019 14:59:12 -0500

The sentence is suggesting that how different perspective can lead to a conflict. It's okay to connect to promote your culture in a different way and if you are choosing the different path doesn't make you wrong.

Tue, 26 Nov 2019 15:39:36 -0500

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Tue, 03 Dec 2019 20:44:39 -0500

Dee, I know how to make the quilt and to cook African food, unlike you that you don’t know how to make African food.

This sentence is memorable because it shows how different perspective is the core of the conflict in the family.

Tue, 26 Nov 2019 15:33:49 -0500

The story is great . It explains Dee's attitude toward her family and the misunderstanding that is between her and her family due to the gap of the education level.

Tue, 26 Nov 2019 15:29:40 -0500

i don't think that you should end it this way because it's impossible that will understand each other after this many years of distance

Tue, 26 Nov 2019 15:22:16 -0500

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Tue, 03 Dec 2019 20:44:41 -0500

I don’t mean to offend you.

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Tue, 26 Nov 2019 15:19:18 -0500

All of us started to laugh and then Dee said, I miss those old days and Maggie said, can you sew me a quilt?”

This paragraph just describes the yard that Mama lives in. She is emphasizing the beauty of the yard that she lives in.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:15 -0500

This paragraph just describes the yard that Mama lives in. She is emphasizing the beauty of the yard that she lives in.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

This paragraph just describes the yard that Mama lives in. She is emphasizing the beauty of the yard that she lives in.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:53 -0500

Dee reinvented herself as wangero because her name was given to her by white oppressors and she wanted to bury the past she despises

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:18 -0500

Dee reinvented herself as wangero because her name was given to her by white oppressors and she wanted to bury the past she despises

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:42 -0500

Dee reinvented herself as wangero because her name was given to her by white oppressors and she wanted to bury the past she despises

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Dee is so naive and judgmental toward Maggie and mama lives. She insists that they choose to live where they are. except for mama financial support Dee wouldn't be able to craft a new life but now she uses her a education as a weapon to wield against fami

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Dee is so naive and judgmental toward Maggie and mama lives. She insists that they choose to live where they are. except for mama financial support Dee wouldn't be able to craft a new life but now she uses her a education as a weapon to wield against fami

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:51 -0500

Dee is so naive and judgmental toward Maggie and mama lives. She insists that they choose to live where they are. except for mama financial support Dee wouldn't be able to craft a new life but now she uses her a education as a weapon to wield against fami

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:25 -0500

Mama describes people life on the 30 th. People were complacent about what they have because of the oppressive mechanism of racism that made life like Dee impossible to mama.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama describes people life on the 30 th. People were complacent about what they have because of the oppressive mechanism of racism that made life like Dee impossible to mama.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:10 -0500

Mama describes people life on the 30 th. People were complacent about what they have because of the oppressive mechanism of racism that made life like Dee impossible to mama.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:35 -0500

Dee as young girl always searched for what perceived as better. She didn't feel content about her life. She was always looking for more. She willed to be different than her rural family.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:10 -0500

Dee as young girl always searched for what perceived as better. She didn't feel content about her life. She was always looking for more. She willed to be different than her rural family.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Dee as young girl always searched for what perceived as better. She didn't feel content about her life. She was always looking for more. She willed to be different than her rural family.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:34 -0500

Mama describes The grudges that Dee holds against her old house because the old house for her represents her poor and farming live.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:29 -0500

Mama describes The grudges that Dee holds against her old house because the old house for her represents her poor and farming live.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama describes The grudges that Dee holds against her old house because the old house for her represents her poor and farming live.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:05 -0500

Mama describes Maggie as a wounded animal who has to live her subjugated to forces greater than her own will

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:27 -0500

Mama describes Maggie as a wounded animal who has to live her subjugated to forces greater than her own will

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:04 -0500

Mama describes Maggie as a wounded animal who has to live her subjugated to forces greater than her own will

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama describes Dee as a person who is fearful and have confidence.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:26 -0500

Mama describes Dee as a person who is fearful and have confidence.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:02 -0500

Mama describes Dee as a person who is fearful and have confidence.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama low self seem emerges from the fact that she is black and she sees herself less than white people.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

Mama low self seem emerges from the fact that she is black and she sees herself less than white people.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:03 -0500

Mama low self seem emerges from the fact that she is black and she sees herself less than white people.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:26 -0500

Mama breaks out of her reverie to explain the realities of her life unlike the slim and lighter skin fantasy of herself on john arson show. mama has a darker skin big boned women wearing overalls instead of feminine clothing. She is also masculine.

Mon, 14 Feb 2022 13:19:37 -0500

Mama breaks out of her reverie to explain the realities of her life unlike the slim and lighter skin fantasy of herself on john arson show. mama has a darker skin big boned women wearing overalls instead of feminine clothing. She is also masculine.

Mon, 14 Feb 2022 13:19:37 -0500

Mama breaks out of her reverie to explain the realities of her life unlike the slim and lighter skin fantasy of herself on john arson show. mama has a darker skin big boned women wearing overalls instead of feminine clothing. She is also masculine.

Mon, 14 Feb 2022 13:19:37 -0500

it is crucial that mama imagine herself with lighter skin-tone while she is fantasizing about the reunion with her daughter. This implies that mama wishes to fit into her daughter's life but she cannot.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:23 -0500

it is crucial that mama imagine herself with lighter skin-tone while she is fantasizing about the reunion with her daughter. This implies that mama wishes to fit into her daughter's life but she cannot.

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:12:00 -0500

it is crucial that mama imagine herself with lighter skin-tone while she is fantasizing about the reunion with her daughter. This implies that mama wishes to fit into her daughter's life but she cannot.

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

mama is fantasizing about the reunion she might have with Dee on television

Thu, 06 May 2021 11:15:48 -0400

mama is fantasizing about the reunion she might have with Dee on television

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:59 -0500

mama is fantasizing about the reunion she might have with Dee on television

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:22 -0500

mama is fantasizing about the reunion she might have with Dee on television

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:17 -0500

mama is fantasizing about the reunion she might have with Dee on television

Wed, 27 Apr 2022 11:08:21 -0400

mama is fantasizing about the reunion she might have with Dee on television

Mon, 15 Nov 2021 09:11:55 -0500