Comments by ms Oumy Diop

Comments by ms Oumy Diop Most recent public comments by ms Oumy Diop https://nowcomment.com/users/63283 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859960 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859960 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother told to him.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:48 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859959 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859959 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truth of Tom.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:48 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859958 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859958 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to read the rest of this book because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:48 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859957 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859957 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859953 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859953 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859948 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859948 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you !</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859947 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859947 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859938 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859938 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This is interesting because these words are from Amanda who is </span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">worried about her son.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 you can explain what kind of problem they are trying to solve https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859936 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859936 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859934 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859934 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene, it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859930 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859930 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">When you read the play, you find interesting </span></span><span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-size: 16px; white-space: pre-wrap;">things</span><span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> in the story according to the scenes.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859925 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859925 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Every protagonists have different personalities, they are facing some struggles and thinking about their future.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859921 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196165?scroll_to=1859921 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-3d305e07-7fff-a4e9-685f-33981b214f4b"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This book “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories on the sons of the family where he explains some details about his life.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 why some reader will be mad it's just how she think is the best to know if her daughter will in a good hand that she will be happy. https://nowcomment.com/documents/198604?scroll_to=1859909 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198604?scroll_to=1859909 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/198604?scroll_to=1859887 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198604?scroll_to=1859887 <p><span style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Arial; font-size: 12pt; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: 400; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Amanda just cares about the money, how Laura will be with a rich person and who is going to give her a better life.</span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I think I don't need to repeat it again because I said it on the beginning to the paragraph. https://nowcomment.com/documents/196817?scroll_to=1858499 https://nowcomment.com/documents/196817?scroll_to=1858499 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1858177 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1858177 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-aba7d6a8-7fff-4667-cb4e-b5fd861454fd"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">That is why we've a exclusive magnificence within the USA today.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1858176 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1858176 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-aba7d6a8-7fff-4667-cb4e-b5fd861454fd"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">However they have forgetten on this low global, nobody has the proper to judge a person or actually have a manage to apply some people.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 how can we know she is satisfied because at the end she was angry by hearing a bad news. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856637 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856637 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856635 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856635 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-f13c0f1e-7fff-3738-6db2-cc8b1208c965" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">It’s a person vs person conflict that’s driving this story.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856618 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856618 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-f13c0f1e-7fff-3738-6db2-cc8b1208c965" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">In the scene seven on line 110 to 114 it says, “ I didn't expect you to.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856617 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856617 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-f13c0f1e-7fff-3738-6db2-cc8b1208c965" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">He is a person who Laura used to like.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 How is Jim invitation was an expectation. Since everybody know He was coming. It's just that Laura wanted to make sure that it was the Jim she was thinking. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856616 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856616 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Do we need the L or was it something you wanted to write? https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856613 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856613 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I don't understand what you mean in here. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856611 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856611 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856609 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856609 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-f13c0f1e-7fff-3738-6db2-cc8b1208c965" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">She asked Tom to bring some good looking guys into the house to find a man who can fulfill Laura's needs and desires.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 You right here but I don't think she does not want to be there make her quit. I think it's how she sees people, thinking that they are saying mean things to her, most of the part she was shy, she couldn't make friends. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856606 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856606 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856602 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856602 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-f13c0f1e-7fff-3738-6db2-cc8b1208c965" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Laura is a very calm and well behaved child, where her mom is looking for a rich and gentleman guy.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856595 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199149?scroll_to=1856595 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-f13c0f1e-7fff-3738-6db2-cc8b1208c965" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Recently, I read “Glass Menageries”, by Tennessee William. I appreciated the fact that I read it because it was a very interesting play.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854159 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854159 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-b0984732-7fff-a53b-7e08-f49328217d55"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This is important because the author is talking about the Spain revolution instead of he is talking about American life conditions.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854151 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854151 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-b0984732-7fff-a53b-7e08-f49328217d55"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">This is interesting because America is a place that has to much discrimination stuff. Think of segragation, at end of the day they realise this is not good for the population that caused fight to get the independence for their country.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854137 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854137 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-b0984732-7fff-a53b-7e08-f49328217d55"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The scene in the first and second sections of</span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-style: italic; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> The Glass Menagerie </span><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;"> By Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling grateful because even if this scene is imagery some of it is realistic in the whole world. Since some of the people who live in the upper class think they are over than others who they see as poor.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854128 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854128 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-b0984732-7fff-a53b-7e08-f49328217d55"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Thanks to human behavior, they make or create stuff by not thinking about consequences that we will have in the long terme of the future.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 what do you mean here https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854124 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854124 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I agree with you but certain people do not have the same perspective that you have. Due to what had happened in this world, some people heart is full of hatred https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854114 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854114 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854098 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190485?scroll_to=1854098 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-b0984732-7fff-a53b-7e08-f49328217d55"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">Thus, the whole world has started to ask the questions how to get the drug for this disease.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 how can we know that for sure? https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850401 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850401 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 can you be more specific and explain why nothing works. https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850400 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I wonder why was she so desperate to find a responsible man. Was she thinking on what Laura want? https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850398 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850398 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I agree with you on this part, she worked really but nobody asked her to put all of those pressure on her. Even Tom told her to not worry. https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850374 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850374 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Remember Jim character just appear on the last scene how can he tell Laura the he was engage. It not his fault. And I think he said it on the right after what happen between them. https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850370 https://nowcomment.com/documents/198606?scroll_to=1850370 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is saying that he is been running away from his family https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1846025 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1846025 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 what if Jim is lying, maybe he is doing because he does not know what to say after kissing Laura. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845989 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845989 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 she is angry at Tom because she thinks that Tom knows about Jim engagement. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845986 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845986 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 she is just in socked and disappointed, and she may feel guilty because she just kiss somebody's men. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845966 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845966 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 wow what a tragedy. and a heartbreak. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845955 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845955 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 suprising. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845940 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845940 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He loves her. I can feel the butterflies around. that how love starts they loose their sense, and don't have words to say. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845938 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845938 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 she is in. She does not even care what is happening around her. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845924 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845924 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is guiding her and teaching her how to dance https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845901 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845901 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is inviting her to dance with him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845897 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845897 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I like this kind of guy, supportive in any way, and willing to help. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845693 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845693 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Jim is telling her that she should not drop out of school. He is encouraging her and be honest with her. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845691 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845691 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 he is telling what he is been doing during the past. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845643 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845643 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 She drop out to HS and college, but still she manage to do something at least. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845640 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845640 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 she used to think that Jim had another women that he was engaged with. But he hadn't been with a girl since. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845630 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1845630 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 this is a good one that will make Laura open up more https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843029 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843029 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 she was thinking that Jim may have a lot of girls around him every single time. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843028 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843028 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Aw. It is true but some others are only thinking about themselves no one else. Each of them have different perspective and opinions. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843027 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843027 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 some people are like that they are always shy it's just something they cannot let go. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843026 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843026 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 So she was alone with no friends, that's too bad https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843025 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843025 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is making sure that he did not hurt her when he was calling her blue rom https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843024 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843024 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 Flashback: https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843023 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843023 Talking about their past. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 What do you think she will say, when she has a huge crush on you.she will definitely be shy to talk to you specially you haven't talk in years. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843022 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843022 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I can say that Jim has a lot of respect. He is apologizing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843021 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843021 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 finally there it comes, he remember her but did not know she was his friend's sister. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843020 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843020 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 I think it is a nickname he used to called her when they were in high school. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843019 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843019 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 she is changing the subject. She is kinda ignoring his questions. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843016 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843016 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is just making her talk, by asking some kind of question. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843015 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843015 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is opening up to her https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843013 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843013 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:47 -0400 He is funny though. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843011 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843011 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 nervous https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843010 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843010 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 what is going to happen let's see https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843009 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843009 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 she is trying to get them close and maybe talk. share things https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843008 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843008 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 He is really helpful. He is asking if he can help with anything. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843007 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843007 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 Tom forget to pay their electricity bill, which is why the light are not working. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843004 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843004 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 maybe they just need an update for their lights. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843003 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 Jim is helping them get their electricity back https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843001 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843001 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 Description https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843000 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1843000 Laura still on the sofa, but seeing a little lightness around her. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 I wonder what game Laura is playing? https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842870 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842870 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 Is she acting up just to not sit on the same table as Jim. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842869 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842869 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 kinda selling her daughter here. she just should let her come and introduced herself let people know her a little. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842842 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842842 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 His mother does not know yet about what he want to do https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842831 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842831 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 why is he saying this to himself. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842830 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842830 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 i agree with him. He is definitely telling the truth. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842828 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842828 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 she is panicking. she does not know what to say. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842818 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842818 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 He does not recognize her yet https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842816 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842816 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 why is she forcing her. Why can she understand her for a moment. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842814 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842814 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 what a funny family! https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842811 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842811 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 I like her sense https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842809 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842809 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 she is just confused and don't know what to do. Just like me https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842808 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842808 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 she can't express her feeling. she is scared to see the same guy again. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842714 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842714 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 maybe something had happened to between Laura and Jim when they were in High School. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842711 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842711 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 I said foreshadowing before it is happening now. Looks like she knows the guys. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842687 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842687 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 she is explaining how her dress was important to her and how that make her look good around guys.She keeps using those jonquils to make the dress look prettier https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842677 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842677 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 I don't know what jonquils means so I google it. It is those yellow and white of flowers that smell really good. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842658 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842658 Definition: a widely cultivated narcissus with clusters of small fragrant yellow flowers and cylindrical leaves, native to southern Europe and northeastern Africa. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 in case some don't know what's a quinine. It's a medicine that can reduce fever. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842622 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842622 a bitter crystalline compound present in cinchona bark, used as a tonic and formerly as an antimalarial drug. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 look like a really important dress to her and an old one https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842616 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842616 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 she is kinda impatient https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842607 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1842607 Looks like she want their guess to come now and what she was waiting for years. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:18:46 -0400 Description https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1840314 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1840314 Laura change the way she looks, she change her hair. I think she is just trying to impress their guess. 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