Comments by Denieris Marte Most recent public comments by Denieris Marte https://nowcomment.com/users/63649 Love how you recognize the importance of using new techniques https://nowcomment.com/documents/164688?scroll_to=1870530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164688?scroll_to=1870530 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1854129 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1854129 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-aba7d6a8-7fff-4667-cb4e-b5fd861454fd"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">2 The Third and four sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee would possibly depart a reader feeling interested because the scenario of these chapters make me assume and sense like being a middle class or bad class is now not top.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1854125 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1854125 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-aba7d6a8-7fff-4667-cb4e-b5fd861454fd"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">However they forget on this low global nobody has the proper to judge a person or actually have a manage to apply some people.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Suggested Revision https://nowcomment.com/documents/195743?scroll_to=1854117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195743?scroll_to=1854117 <p><span id="docs-internal-guid-9a00365d-7fff-9811-be22-ef89ff71d009" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); color: rgb(0, 0, 0);"><span style="font-size: 12pt; font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; background-color: transparent; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; font-variant-position: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The third and final section of &ldquo;The Glass Menagerie&rdquo; by Tennessee Williams, might leave a reading feeling disappointed because there is a lot going on in the third and fourth sections.</span></span></p> Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 awww thanks. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191404?scroll_to=1854107 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191404?scroll_to=1854107 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 she was stupid at the time that she choose Tom father, because she only though about how very good looking was hi https://nowcomment.com/documents/189605?scroll_to=1854103 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189605?scroll_to=1854103 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Exactly that was the point I was trying to proof, glad you got it https://nowcomment.com/documents/189605?scroll_to=1854095 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189605?scroll_to=1854095 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 according to the internet it was on 1937 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189605?scroll_to=1854092 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189605?scroll_to=1854092 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 why would this lead the reader to question the play ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1854085 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1854085 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 I want to get to know the characters by name, I know you put the mother but who is this woman give me the prospective before the evidence and after the evidence. Its good to recognize that the names of the characters are important https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1854084 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1854084 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 What is the name of the play? where dos is take place? who is this mother and daughter, like what are their names? https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1854077 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1854077 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 what paragraph or line are this, because in line 58-60 there are many paragraph. and I know you put evidence but what lines and what paragraph https://nowcomment.com/documents/190496?scroll_to=1854072 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190496?scroll_to=1854072 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Love how you explained in few words why the mother and the kids do not have a good relationship and and the examples are pretty clear of why Laura and Tom only have a mother figure. https://nowcomment.com/documents/190496?scroll_to=1854067 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190496?scroll_to=1854067 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Love the evidence and how it shows the personality behind every character. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1848406 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197016?scroll_to=1848406 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Love how you first describe Amanda, as a mother who besides being a woman is racing to kids by herself without a male figure their entire life as a reader, reading this would definitive tell me that she's the only rock that her childers have to rely on https://nowcomment.com/documents/195743?scroll_to=1848283 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195743?scroll_to=1848283 and that as a mother she needs to have an strong personality full or regrets but she keeps on going day by day. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 this family is always going to be in conflict because the mother does not know hot to make her childrens feel that their life is theirs. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197085?scroll_to=1848198 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197085?scroll_to=1848198 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 love how with detail is your introduction about the family and their rolls on the play. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197085?scroll_to=1848196 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197085?scroll_to=1848196 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 that's exactly what I have been realizing that she comes to the states in which se does not longer want a better life for her kids but she wants a better life in which her kids include her to do better and change her life style https://nowcomment.com/documents/197095?scroll_to=1848172 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197095?scroll_to=1848172 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Love it, Hosseyna you really shows the change of Amanda just in several scenes, she was always trying to control their lives at her way like there was not other way to live https://nowcomment.com/documents/197095?scroll_to=1848163 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197095?scroll_to=1848163 her way to be a better mother make her be an undesirable person to live with. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 It seems that for you Amanda is the type of woman who decides to be a mother instead of a women, an according to you evidence that's what she shows. but did Amanda really try to teach her kids ? because as fara I understand you said that she was trying to https://nowcomment.com/documents/197095?scroll_to=1848145 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197095?scroll_to=1848145 teach her kids manner, but what manner can a person that is always minding other business has ? Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Laura start flirting's https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828267 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828267 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Laura now its letting him know that they know each others and she stared by the most simple thing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828264 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828264 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 it seems that Jim does not give up easily because now he's trying to get closer to Laura and have a conversation with her and to get to know her better because I can guess that he is remembering her a little bit https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828258 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828258 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 by the moment it seems that even when Jim stared the conversation between him and Laura she does not want to respond much or either had a conversation https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828235 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828235 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Amanda is making tom wash the dishes but tom does not seem so happy about it https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828215 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828215 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 It seems like Jim is trying to impress Amanda because there was something he saw about Laura that grabs his attention but at the same time it seems that he was being sarcastic because even though he offered to help he's doing things that Tom is https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828212 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172641?scroll_to=1828212 supposed to do Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Jim advice Jom about this because he wants him to understand that he needs to take care of his Job because it seems to be a good Job and he cant lost it because it will take longer for him to have another Job this part also reflects what Amanda is most https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810425 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810425 annoyed when it comes about Tom and is that he doesn't care about what he has on the present because he lives as tomorrow will have no future. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 I've always said that Tom is selfish he is planing on leaving his family specially his mother because he feels that the leaving is inside of his blood just to be like his father and honestly its just not ggod to let Jim know that because if Jim https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810328 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810328 and Amanda decides to get together that would be something that Jim would always have in mind... Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Toms really wants to show his family as a family exemplar but it seems to be difficult with all of the famous Amanda talk https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810298 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810298 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Amanda is talking about Tom's dad so Jim can know that even when she had the option to choose between many mans she choose wrong because she never had a stable home with a man who can actually gave her a financial support or even an emotional support https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810275 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810275 because he was always absent but the main propose of her bringing this conversation to the table is to let him know that she would never accept that her daughter would leave her House just with anyone!! Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Amanda is really pushy when she wants to be and when something is convenient for her, she wants Laura to come to the table so Jim could not talk bad about the family because Amanda notices that Jim was doubting about Laura shyness. Amanda was already https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810249 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810249 annoyed by the fact that Laura since the beginning do not want to be in the same room as Jim. This honestly lead the reader to understand that maybe something Happened before between Jim and Laura and she is afraid that Jim might talk about it or even act confident with her. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Toms knows what is going on and he perfectly understand that Laura isn't sick, is just that she does not want to be seem by Jim because he knows that Laura used to have a crush on him once they were in high school. As a good brother he's trying to let his https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810198 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1810198 mother unsderstand that Jim isn't the right man for his sister and that Laura wouldn't like to end up with Jim as his man Caller Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Toms knows that Laura had a crush on Jimmy but he tom is kind of worry that Jim only remembers laura as his sister and nothing more because if Jim doesn't seem Laura more than a friend that would be a problem because Amanda can drive herself https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1795688 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1795688 even crazier about Jim and Laura getting together because it would take time for Laura to get another caller. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 Tom and Jim seem to have a pretty close relationship as friends. Tom knows a lot about Jim and it seems that Jim was with the only person that he could smile and feel like a human being. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1795677 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1795677 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 tOM really know a lot about Jim and all the accomplishment that he had made https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1795672 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172642?scroll_to=1795672 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:13 -0400 I unsderstand that laura should finish her education but her mother force her to much, Amanda never took a time to ask Laura what do you want to be in the future instead she force her to get into a business school. forcing someone never leads to good https://nowcomment.com/documents/191128?scroll_to=1784157 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191128?scroll_to=1784157 things. perhaps Laura try to teach her mom a lesson of live Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 do you think that a mother so intense its really teaching her kids how to live ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/191128?scroll_to=1784153 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191128?scroll_to=1784153 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Loving the free witting, this really grab my attention. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191128?scroll_to=1784152 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191128?scroll_to=1784152 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Tom is tired of listenign to the same bullshit because shes always trying to care about him but actually she doesn't and he knows about that https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783112 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783112 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Of course as a mother she is totally preoccupation about her son lungs, but she is the main reason of his upsetting life. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783092 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783092 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Every time that he was going to the "movies", it was not exactly there. He uses the term movies to refer to the streets and places like bars where he can get himself a rest from his annoying mother https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783089 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783089 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda husband ain't dead, he just vanish because he wasn't a family man. at the begining of the play it clearly say that Mr winfield fall in love with self distancing. therefore we can infere that he left because he was not ready to be a dad or a husband https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783072 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783072 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 I just think that as Tom do not have such as a great image of his dad, he would like to know what is that good thing that his father used to have that he needs to imitate now. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783062 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783062 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 what amanda is trying to say is that in only one way she would like tom to look like his dad. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783040 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783040 Emulate= imitate Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Agree with you, Amanda is the kind of mother that like to sell an image about her family so the family always needs to look impeccable so no one can talk about their image https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783037 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783037 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda is happy nit because the hair is fix, she is happy because finally Tom's care about a word she says. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783033 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783033 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda is trying to take care of her son image, because Image in those time means everything for a man becuase it can define who he really is so Amanda is trying to make him care a bit more about himself https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783026 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783026 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Is like a visual description of what he seeing at the moment https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783021 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783021 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 What the author is also showing is that after de Dinner the mother Amanda and his siter Laura are happy to remove everything from the table because the dinner went so well. Therefore, the way to make the table clean as soon as possible is a way to show https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783004 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1783004 how grateful of their guest they are. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 what Fatoumata means by imagery is that the author is visually describing where is at. is like a collectively of visual imagine https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1782998 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1782998 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Even though Toms dad was a drunk what make Amanda felt in love with him was the way that he look at everyone, she fall in love of his physical cuteness but not with his personality and he was a good looking man.. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1782922 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1782922 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Toms brings up a perfect example, because Laura seems to be a woman of words and actions but she made a mistake by getting a drunk as her husband. She judge her kids but she isn;t the perfect example either https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775363 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775363 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Love this phrase, this is very true and every time that Tom is acting that he does not care about life at all https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775348 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775348 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda would not like that type of man for the family because she wants to be around wealth. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775338 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775338 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 As a mother Amanda is concern about who her Daughter Laura is going to like because she doesn't want Laura to be with a drunk man because she would suffer. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775299 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775299 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Even though Tom did not agree with his mother, he seem to do things to make her happy in certains ways. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775269 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775269 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 All Amanda wish was "happines for her kids" but it seem that she wants to make things her way and they would never be happy that way https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775252 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775252 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda is always trying to mind Toms Business. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775245 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775245 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 as Tom is going outside to smoke I can infere that the fact that his mother talk about his dad make him feel upset about why his dad left them. Smoking can be used by people who try to relax and scape from certain situations and Tom clearly wants to https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775218 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775218 advoid conversations with his mother Amanda about Mr Windfield ( his dad ) Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 apparently Amanda wants her son Tom to look a little bit like his dad, she remember her husband as a handsome man. therefore she wants tom to look just like him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775205 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172660?scroll_to=1775205 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 this is completely true, the mother it seems that the mother do not treat her children as adults or humans because she's so annoying. https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1775185 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1775185 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 I like the way you started this free writing about the story, but you should talk about the characters by their names.. but I love how you started it.. https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1775169 https://nowcomment.com/documents/190488?scroll_to=1775169 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 laura is agree with the fact that she needs to dress up nicely for mans that she is not even ready to be in a relationship with. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738212 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738212 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 the happiness that Amanda wants for her daughter to have is a men that can give them the biggest of a fortune. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738210 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738210 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda seem to care a lot about reputation and what a Mans think but more about what people thinks. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738207 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738207 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda wants a bunch of young mans to go over the house for dinner to see if Laura fall in love with any of them, but why does she wants Laura to fall in love so fast ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738204 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738204 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 it seem like Amanda wants her daughter to be more like her when Amanda was a young woman but her daughter Laura disagrees with the fact that she was not popular liker her mother in her times https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738197 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738197 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda the mother, Seems to irritated tom a lot and he seems that he can not stand a word out of her mouth because she is so annoying https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738150 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738150 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 at this time of the movie, the author is describing part of what is going to happen in the story but at the same time giving a flashback https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738148 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738148 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 here it looks that the character is in the old hause that he lives during many times but now is ruin and he's trying to remember some things. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738144 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186027?scroll_to=1738144 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 I understood that they are siblings but I think there is something else happening https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712338 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712338 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 I want to know the relationship between Tom and Laura ? this is rally confusing me https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712319 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712319 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 why did laura appears like that in toms room? where they lover ? I am pretty confuse https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712308 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712308 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 the description of the setting on each scene was really important to know what is going to happens depending on where ech character is https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712256 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712256 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Tom seem not to care about whatever Amanda says. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712223 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712223 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 16:14:33 -0400 Amanda really dont like this guy, he was not part of her glory https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712216 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712216 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 Amanda an tom seems to have a pretty sensitive relationship in the point that they do not stand each other that much. but why is this? https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712209 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712209 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 did Tom and Amanda had a good relationship ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712187 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712187 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:12 -0400 I think Amanda was not happy with the decision that Ida took on not going to the D.A.R and she feels that Ida lies about not going so she's trying to undercover the lie by acting worry about her sinus infection https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712178 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712178 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 Characterization, it shows that his mother was a woman who never took her words for granted because if she say it it was because it needs to be done. when there is a woman like this in real life everyone respect her without even doubt about her. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712160 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712160 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 by this I can see that they was lots of mans trying to get to Laura but I do not remember the word right but its when you're a woman and there are many mans falling for you. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712135 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712135 Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:24 -0400 I unsterdant that the mother want Laura to marry someone important in society so the family earns more value and people look at her daughter like a respectful woman https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712094 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172661?scroll_to=1712094 Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:24 -0400 they really took lots of support from the mother as they never had a dad https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1712048 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1712048 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 Mr Paul I need your Help to understand this https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1712010 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1712010 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 this means that every time that the family was about to eat they thanks to God for the aliments that are on the table https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1712006 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1712006 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I think the father travel a lot to space from his family https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711999 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711999 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 He felt that the blank spaces that his dad let on him was something that mark him for life https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711995 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711995 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 since the beginning he is trying to give us a clue of how is every character in the play https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711971 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711971 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I think the story is also refelcting a lot of what is going on right now in real life https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711896 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711896 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I do not think he addressed himself as a magician because at the second sentence he started of as " but I am the opposite of a stage magician".what he was trying to said was that he have his ways to do certain things and he knows how to easily deal with https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711779 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711779 it. Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 he also talk a lot about his siblings Amanda and Laura which means that they grew up together without being separated at any moment. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711752 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711752 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 he uses lots of settings in the story as well its another important fact that we need to keep an eye on it https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711741 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711741 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I am agree with you that he is trying to remember something about his past and also about when he was a younger kid because he mentione something about his dad which is that the dad left them when he was a kid and his siblings where kids as well. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711736 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711736 its important to pay close attention to this because I feel that the whole story is about memories Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I think he uses many literally elements because he also uses characterization to describe Amanda and Laura but also he uses imagery. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711680 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711680 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I think the person whos talkings is Tennessee the author https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711670 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711670 Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:24 -0400 do you mean what Kind of society is he living ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711662 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711662 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 I feel the same way to I even when to google and look for the story but I still not understanding who exactly is telling the story and what it's about. I think Its about a family and a Guy who grew up without their family I guess https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711657 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711657 Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:24 -0400 I wonder the same I was like if the person who is telling the story the main character of the story but I get to the conclution that yes it's the same person https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711642 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1711642 Thu, 16 Jul 2020 10:44:16 -0400 can I have a clarification of what was the main idea of the conversation between this two ladies? https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1669404 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1669404 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400 where laura and Amanda sisters or relatives ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1669400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172663?scroll_to=1669400 Mon, 13 Jul 2020 15:12:11 -0400