Comments by Olivia Anderson Most recent public comments by Olivia Anderson https://nowcomment.com/users/64290 I think this shows an underlying problem with wealth because those with less money are much more likely to suffer from issues with phones. https://nowcomment.com/documents/164086?scroll_to=1632755 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164086?scroll_to=1632755 Mon, 07 Aug 2023 20:05:01 -0700 I think this is an interesting finding because I have been told in the past that it takes a long time for your brain to refocus after you look at your phone. https://nowcomment.com/documents/169447?scroll_to=1632752 https://nowcomment.com/documents/169447?scroll_to=1632752 Fri, 06 Mar 2020 13:25:13 -0800 I think this proves that we need to teach kids how to use phones in moderation, so yes there should be controls that can be set to reduce screen time. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168180?scroll_to=1632748 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168180?scroll_to=1632748 Fri, 06 Mar 2020 13:24:11 -0800 I disagree with this because sometimes phones are a valuable learning tool, and I think in the future we should have classes to teach kids how to use phones properly. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168156?scroll_to=1632740 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168156?scroll_to=1632740 Fri, 06 Mar 2020 13:22:20 -0800 I like that many parents realize that phones are a large part of life now, so the solution is to teach kids how to use phones in a healthy way. https://nowcomment.com/documents/164845?scroll_to=1632727 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164845?scroll_to=1632727 Fri, 06 Mar 2020 13:15:39 -0800 I think this is a good paragraph because it says that we should enjoy our phones consciously, not based on a compulsive habit to check them. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172222?scroll_to=1632721 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172222?scroll_to=1632721 Fri, 06 Mar 2020 13:13:47 -0800 We actually never grow out of wanting reinforcements in reaction to our behavior. It can still dictate the behavior of adults. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172189?scroll_to=1631392 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172189?scroll_to=1631392 Thu, 05 Mar 2020 09:58:17 -0800 Checking our phones makes us think that we are alleviating our anxiety, when actually we are making it worse. https://nowcomment.com/documents/172189?scroll_to=1631390 https://nowcomment.com/documents/172189?scroll_to=1631390 Thu, 05 Mar 2020 07:45:45 -0800 Strokes aren't a risk associated with oral contraceptives https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606637 https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606637 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 07:48:46 -0800 There is only risk of stroke when the patient is a smoker as well, which can't only attribute strokes with birth control. https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606636 https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606636 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 07:47:54 -0800 There is a risk of strokes in women that use birth control and smoke too. https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606635 https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606635 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 07:43:39 -0800 Solution: use less estrogen in pills prescribed to women https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606634 https://nowcomment.com/documents/169867?scroll_to=1606634 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 07:42:20 -0800 Solution: parents need to have open discussion with children and make sex education less taboo https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596320 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596320 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:49:17 -0800 Another solution is sex education that isn't solely focused on abstinence. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596318 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596318 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:48:42 -0800 Arguing that human error can be what leads to unwanted pregnancy while using birth control https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596317 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596317 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:47:46 -0800 Solutions: LARCS (long acting contraceptives) that require little care and promising results. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596315 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596315 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:46:54 -0800 Problem: unwanted pregnancies in the US https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596314 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168855?scroll_to=1596314 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:46:09 -0800 Overall, the systems to prevent this are in place but they need to be monitored and followed in order to work. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596312 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596312 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:38:23 -0800 Solution: doctors must follow the standard of care to ensure rules are being followed. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596311 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596311 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:37:47 -0800 Solution: once a doctor and a patient have reached an agreement on treatment, the doctor should not be able to back out without patient consent. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596310 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596310 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:36:48 -0800 Solution offered: she is saying that in order to keep doctors in check they should be required to turn over charts and data on file. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596307 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596307 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:33:09 -0800 Problem: women in the south are most affected https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596306 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596306 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:31:47 -0800 Author is supporting argument by providing statistics and data https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596304 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596304 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:30:32 -0800 Problem: doctors are withholding health care to push their own beliefs https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596303 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596303 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:29:37 -0800 Argument: the author is clearly stating her stance and what she will be arguing in the paper. https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596301 https://nowcomment.com/documents/168854?scroll_to=1596301 Thu, 06 Feb 2020 22:28:12 -0800 Evidence that shows that access to the pill decreases teen pregnancy https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1566103 https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1566103 Tue, 21 Jan 2020 08:48:49 -0800 Solution: legalized abortion https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1566074 https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1566074 Tue, 21 Jan 2020 08:47:50 -0800 Cost of birth control/abortion is a major factor in birth rates and abortion rates. https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1566072 https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1566072 Tue, 21 Jan 2020 08:47:00 -0800 Outcomes of increased access to birth control https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1565171 https://nowcomment.com/documents/165187?scroll_to=1565171 Mon, 20 Jan 2020 20:44:22 -0800 This shows that many young mothers are from poor minority populations. https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565168 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565168 Mon, 20 Jan 2020 20:34:15 -0800 This shows the systematic attack on minority populations regarding health care. https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565167 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565167 Mon, 20 Jan 2020 20:32:26 -0800 Long term solution for birth control https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565166 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565166 Mon, 20 Jan 2020 20:31:22 -0800 This is a problem statement explaining the pressures minority populations face https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565164 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1565164 Mon, 20 Jan 2020 20:28:44 -0800 This is an alternative solution provided https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559282 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559282 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:38:12 -0800 Problem: LARC cost is really high which makes it hard to get https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559279 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559279 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:36:53 -0800 Opposing viewpoint: LARCs are used for the wrong reasons since there is a lot of hype around them https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559276 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559276 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:34:04 -0800 Solution: organizations created for women to go to when they are in need https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559275 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559275 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:30:53 -0800 They want to create access to women's health care to reduce unwanted pregnancies. https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559260 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559260 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:29:07 -0800 Solution https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559259 https://nowcomment.com/documents/164334?scroll_to=1559259 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:27:58 -0800 Clearly biased paper https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559242 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559242 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:18:51 -0800 Solution: access to birth control could have caused the decrease in unintended pregnancy https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559241 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559241 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:18:27 -0800 Solution: parental involvement laws in the US https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559240 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559240 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:17:33 -0800 A small number of abortions are teenagers https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559239 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559239 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:15:29 -0800 This is the goal: to reduce unwanted pregnancies by having access to birth control and abortion https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559236 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559236 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:12:18 -0800 Problem: abortion rates were high in the past https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559235 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163960?scroll_to=1559235 Wed, 15 Jan 2020 12:11:17 -0800 Solution: names the plan and what it entails. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544653 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544653 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:16:04 -0800 Problem: not every place gets a multimillion dollar donation https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544651 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544651 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:15:38 -0800 Solution: normalize the conversation about sex with young people to prevent pregnancy https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544648 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544648 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:14:51 -0800 Evidence: this bullet list shows the bad effects of team pregnancy https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544646 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544646 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:14:16 -0800 Solution: coaching officials and legislators on these policies https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544644 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544644 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:13:00 -0800 Talks about the problems of teen pregnancy (stating the problem) https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544643 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544643 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:11:58 -0800 This shows that they realize some people don't just consider reproductive health to be abortions. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544641 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544641 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:11:09 -0800 Evidence that certain budgets going toward family planning helps decrease birth and abortion rates https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544640 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1544640 Fri, 13 Dec 2019 12:10:09 -0800 Credibility: providing a visual way to display evidence to support the argument shows thoughtfulness and thoroughness. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543149 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543149 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:46:55 -0800 Credibility: Evidence that supports the provided solution https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543125 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543125 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:43:37 -0800 Credibility: this is evidence that shows a direct correlation between increasing contraception and decrease in birth rates in teens. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543117 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:42:34 -0800 Addresses other sides concerns about cost of this solution. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543112 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543112 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:39:45 -0800 Solution: the solution stated is to provide more accesible care https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543110 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543110 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:38:07 -0800 Solution: The problem with this solution is that there isn't always going to be some anonymous donor that gives out this kind of money to this specific cause https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543109 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543109 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:36:40 -0800 This statistic stresses the urgency of the problem https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543107 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543107 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:34:32 -0800 Introduces the problem https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543101 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162095?scroll_to=1543101 Thu, 12 Dec 2019 07:33:53 -0800