Comments by Jake Meyers Most recent public comments by Jake Meyers https://nowcomment.com/users/64823 YOUR WORK HAS BEEN OUTSTANDING, THIS IS A GREAT EXAMPLE OF ONOMATOPOEIA< GREAT WORK A+ https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554059 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554059 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:15:25 -0500 ADDS GREAT RHYTHM TO THE POEM, YOU HAVE AMAZED ME WITH YOUR WORK KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554054 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554054 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:14:11 -0500 Sickly silence isn't an illiteration, its an alliteration, please make sure to check your spelling as this could affect your grade, PS. this is embarrassing https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554027 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554027 Mon, 13 Jan 2020 10:15:45 -0500 THIS MAKES THE POEM GOOD BECAUSE IT MAKES IT HAVE A GOOD FLOW https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554006 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554006 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:06:48 -0500 alliteration - Christian charity https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553996 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553996 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:02:47 -0500 ryhme - same game https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553948 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553948 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:51:55 -0500 Rhyme - day play https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553941 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553941 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:07:57 -0500 Alliteration - Sickly Silence https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553870 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553870 Mon, 13 Jan 2020 10:10:10 -0500