Comments by Emily Shoup Most recent public comments by Emily Shoup https://nowcomment.com/users/64826 onomatopoeia adds excitement, provokes your senses https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554016 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554016 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:08:35 -0500 makes the reader think deeper about the meaning https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554007 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554007 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:07:09 -0500 makes it more fun to read and sounds poetic https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554002 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1554002 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:05:56 -0500 alliteration- sickly silence- emily and carly https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553990 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553990 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:59:55 -0500 imagery- carly and emily https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553983 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553983 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:58:09 -0500 defiance gleamed is personification- carly https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553965 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553965 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:55:04 -0500 air is shattered is imagery- carly https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553949 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553949 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:52:30 -0500 personififcation- https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553935 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553935 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:50:21 -0500 tore the cover off the ball- hyperbole- emily and carly https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553913 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553913 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:15:12 -0500 latter was a cake is a metaphor- emily and carly https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553907 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553907 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:48:57 -0500 whack is onomatopoeia https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553896 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553896 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:47:59 -0500 deep despair is alliteration https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553887 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553887 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 09:47:07 -0500 play and day are end rhymes https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553879 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163550?scroll_to=1553879 Fri, 10 Jan 2020 10:05:54 -0500