Comments by maddy McCandlish Most recent public comments by maddy McCandlish https://nowcomment.com/users/64868 gives a emphasis https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554936 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554936 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:17:03 +0800 makes poem more interesting https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554934 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554934 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:16:08 +0800 yeppers sounds good https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554930 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554930 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:16:08 +0800 u r correct https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554928 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554928 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:15:07 +0800 it makes it sound better https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554925 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554925 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:14:09 +0800 hyberbole gabriella https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554899 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554899 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:09:13 +0800 personification gabirella https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554892 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554892 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:08:49 +0800 metaphor- hearts are lights (Gabriella) https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554864 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554864 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:04:39 +0800 hyperbole- pounds with cruel violence (Gabriella) https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554855 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554855 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:03:36 +0800 repetition- somewhere (gabriella) https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554841 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554841 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:02:35 +0800 rhyme - score and four (gabriella) https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554824 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554824 Sat, 11 Jan 2020 02:01:16 +0800 rhyme - day and play https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554791 https://nowcomment.com/documents/163551?scroll_to=1554791 Tue, 14 Jan 2020 01:54:40 +0800