Comments by Kelsey DeCamillis Most recent public comments by Kelsey DeCamillis https://nowcomment.com/users/65141 It does seem to jump straight to the writing here, as Paul said. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162716?scroll_to=1559940 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162716?scroll_to=1559940 Maybe there could be an added section for how to choose an issue? Or how personal experience is a valid form of evidence, especially when combined with further research. That might emphasize the need for students to delve into the topic, not just use their own experiences. Wed, 15 Jan 2020 20:02:09 -0500 Why does this issue matter to you - might be a statement that has been heard a lot by students and misunderstood. "It matters to me because I like it," I could imagine some students saying. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162716?scroll_to=1559933 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162716?scroll_to=1559933 Maybe adding "personally" to it? Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:16 -0400 I think this helps clarify the intention - joining and adding to a conversation that is happening now and that will continue to be had. https://nowcomment.com/documents/162716?scroll_to=1559929 https://nowcomment.com/documents/162716?scroll_to=1559929 Sun, 16 Jul 2023 16:48:15 -0400