Comments by Ava Most recent public comments by Ava https://nowcomment.com/users/66927 that's.. a long sentence. https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607732 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607732 i personally feel like the narrator's use of run-on esque, almost poorly executed grammar shows that they are a child and don't fully have the idea of sentence structure in their grasp. Fri, 14 Feb 2020 13:38:42 -0500 .__. https://nowcomment.com/documents/166472?scroll_to=1607710 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166472?scroll_to=1607710 Wed, 22 Jul 2020 17:03:07 -0400 the pope is supposed to be a superior to them, isn't that how it works? or maybe the grandmother is so self-absorbed that she has no problem with referring to the pope as a "bloody ignorant bogtrotter." https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607691 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607691 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 13:31:51 -0500 but it's a natural bodily function.. ? https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607654 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607654 throwing up, if anything, isn't a sign of an alleged "sin", it is a sign that the main character NEEDS to be treated medically. the fact that the grandmother is completely disregarding the well being of her own grandchild is simply disgusting, and it just makes her character even more worthy of an "ok boomer". Fri, 14 Feb 2020 13:27:16 -0500 why do you think that James Cagney was so important to her? https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607629 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1607629 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 13:19:37 -0500 Why no question mark? https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1603910 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1603910 The author's interesting use of a period rather than a question mark makes it, at first glance, seem like a simple grammar mistake, but it gives almost a completely deadpanned connotation, as if the main character is tired of their grandmother spitting on their head. Fri, 14 Feb 2020 08:32:19 -0500 do you think this information would affect the story in any way? https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1601548 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1601548 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 08:32:19 -0500 why was it that the people referred to god as an item of food? https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1597356 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1597356 Fri, 14 Feb 2020 08:32:19 -0500 take off that shirt https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1597350 https://nowcomment.com/documents/166481?scroll_to=1597350 why did the author choose not to use quotation marks when their grandmother said "take off that shirt"? is this a result of poor grammar, or was this a specific stylistic choice? because it's very confusing to read. Fri, 14 Feb 2020 08:35:31 -0500