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      <title>Seriously, Kellan, you crack me up!</title>
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      <title>PAY ATTENTION TO THE CONTEXT CLUES IN THE PROMPT.  </title>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:48:59 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Your comments on Burr are interesting, Rachel.  And I don't disagree.  But Burr still has some hope...otherwise he wouldn't be &quot;waiting for it.&quot;  But he's less confident and more cautious, perhaps always waiting for the other shoe to drop.</title>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:34:52 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Another perspective is that Burr (with his family name and reputation in the States) has more to lose.  Hamilton has nothing to lose.  So he can more easily take the risks.  (But I tend to think it's simply a difference in personalities.)</title>
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      <title>This makes me wonder if it's a rebuttal aimed at what others say?  Or is it his own self-doubt?</title>
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      <title>Excellent point.  As we learn more about Burr, we learn he is worried about &quot;backing the wrong horse.&quot;  He wants to be on the side of the winners.  And when he can't be sure who that is, he refuses to commit either way.</title>
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      <title>Yes, Paige.  And if you consider the next two lines, he seems to say that love doesn't impact sinners or saints more.  So even though he and Theodosia are sinning by having sex outside of marriage, they are still gifted with love.</title>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 30 Sep 2021 22:23:15 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>You could probably get away with a lit-term-based topic in this instance because there is SO MUCH imagery in this poem.  Just don't forget to discuss how the imagery illustrates the relationship between speaker &amp; setting.</title>
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      <title>This is good, Isaiah!  You could consider the verbs, too, as it portrays a great deal of movement throughout the poem.</title>
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      <title>Alliteration is typically explored as &quot;emphasis.&quot;  The question would then be &quot;Why would the speaker want to emphasize this particular line?&quot;  You are right, Myah.  Alliteration is difficult to analyze because it is hard to understand the function of it.</title>
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      <title>Great, Paige!</title>
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      <title>True, Brianna.  The difference is that Burr's parents were people of &quot;means&quot; (education, influence, wealth), so he had a bit of a legacy to live up to.  Hamilton's parents were from an island in the Caribbean and were unknown to his American friends.</title>
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      <title>Do you think this influence of his &quot;fire and brimstone&quot; grandfather has shaped Burr's personality and philosophy?  (Not counting his extramarital affair with a married woman, of course.)</title>
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      <title>Excellent, Andrew!  (Highlight this in your text.  You might want to use it for future writing prompts.)</title>
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      <title>:)</title>
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      <title>Fun Fact:  In real life, Theodosia's husband was killed in the war.  And Burr married her.  They had a daughter, also named Theodosia.</title>
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      <title>Yes.  Lots of irony here in these lines.  Bitter irony.</title>
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      <title>Yes!</title>
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      <title>Good, KK!  Isn't this a bit ironic?  He hates her for loving him and breaking her vows to her husband.  BUT HE'S DOING THE SAME THING!</title>
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      <title>A bit of backstory might help:  Shakespeare was married to Anne Hathaway.  There are multiple legends, one of which is that a number of his sonnets are written to his married mistress.  This is allegedly  one of those sonnets to his mistress.  While many </title>
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      <description>of his sonnets are playful, flirtatious, and loving, this is NOT one of those sonnets.</description>
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      <title>Spenserian</title>
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      <title>Or to &quot;swear falsely&quot; = lie</title>
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      <title>Yes.  So how would you use the Shakespearean rhyme scheme to organize your chronological body paragraphs?  </title>
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      <title>Hm.  He said that his emotional state, like a lark rising at the break of dawn, lifts when he thinks of her and &quot;sings hymns.&quot;  </title>
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      <title>Yes.  And the word &quot;Yet&quot; implies a contrast and a shift.</title>
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      <title>Yes.  Why?  (Using what evidence?)</title>
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      <title>Better how?  Coupled with Bradley's comment, how does the speaker define a person's worth?</title>
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      <title>Explain.</title>
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      <title>Olivia, great job!  I love that you pull in the word choice for analytical commentary.</title>
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      <title>Chocolate</title>
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      <title>Does anyone know what &quot;list&quot; means?</title>
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      <title>&quot;She&quot; is the ship.  They're talking about the ship breaking apart and floating downstream.</title>
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      <title>They are roughly 12 or 13.  They won't actually commit the crimes.  They are simply being imaginative and talking tough.</title>
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      <title>This is SUPER important!  Tom is obsessed with adventure books.  After a period of war, it is typical for our society to become interested in books with romanticized stories.  Twain answers this romanticism with his realism stories.  Tom represents the </title>
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      <title>Yes.  I think it's amusing that Huck calls it &quot;grumbling over the victuals.&quot;</title>
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      <title>Imagine a boy used to wearing a ragged, soft, worn t-shirt.  But now he suddenly has to wear a dress shirt buttoned up to his neck.  And it's starched and ironed and itchy and stiff.  It isn't too small.  It's just something he's not used to.</title>
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      <title>The widow feels bad for him and takes him in; but she makes him follow a number of rules.  Huck isn't used to rules.  He's used to being in charge of his own life.  So while he knows she's trying to raise him properly, he sometimes can't stand it.</title>
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      <title>Yes, it's a teeny preview of characters-to-come.</title>
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      <title>This seems to be Twain's way of acknowledging the first book.  They aren't really a series; but the fact that Huck is rich plays an important role in defining his motivations in this book.</title>
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      <title>Good.  Why might this be significant?</title>
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      <title>I would agree.  The speaker is full of criticism that might mask some of his anger.</title>
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      <title>Good.  What does this suggest?  Does it serve as evidence for his tendency to exaggerate?</title>
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      <title>Good.  This might reflect his tendency to exaggerate or may point to the slang of the 1940s.</title>
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      <title>Great!</title>
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      <title>What does this suggest about his character?</title>
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      <title>How do we know?  Cite his specific word choice.</title>
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      <title>Why is this significant?  Consider how this relates to our speaker and their oldest brother, D.B.</title>
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      <title>Why is this important?  (If you knew the author's back story, you'd know that he fought in WWII and came back devastated.  He probably would be diagnosed with PTSD if he were alive today.)  So why might he be writing a story where the younger brother dies</title>
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      <title>Good.  What does this suggest about the speaker's (his) relationship with his brother and his emotional state after this loss?</title>
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      <title>Ha!  It's a great word.  (Miss seeing you in my classroom.)</title>
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      <title>Yes.  He's very judgmental.</title>
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      <title>He is &quot;staying&quot; in California.  Somewhere where his brother has to come to visit him and drive him home if he's allowed to go home &quot;next month maybe.&quot;  </title>
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      <title>I agree!  This scene screams of trauma, doesn't it?</title>
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      <title>Definitely.  But this might be natural since Allie passed away.  We tend to hold our loved ones who have died in higher regard, don't we?</title>
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      <title>One could analyze the structure to say that his short and choppy sentences/paragraphs mimic much of the quick, brief snippets we get from a Google search.</title>
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      <title>But if they are only beginning to learn French, their early vocabulary probably limits them to speaking about basic &quot;tourism&quot; topics instead of topics of more depth, like religion.</title>
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      <title>Me, too!</title>
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      <title>True.  And the reality is that we do still live in a patriarchal society.  This means that we need the support of men because they still hold the majority of positions of power in government, the work place, etc.  </title>
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      <title>I agree.  </title>
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      <title>This cracked me up.  Thanks Daniel!</title>
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      <title>Should I have given a disclaimer or warning?  :)</title>
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      <title>This is true...and amusing.</title>
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      <title>Check out the organization of Seaver's letter.  Not only did he steal Coke's slogan, he also has stolen Herbert's word choice (mocking him) and the organization of topics in his paragraphs!  Hilarious!</title>
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      <title>Yes!  And you can hear his snarky tone in his word choice.  Look at some of the details.  He says, &quot;executive committee meeting&quot; to mock the important formality of the Coke guy.  He also uses a &quot;seven to six&quot; vote, suggesting that one person isn't</title>
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      <description>willing to give Coke the benefits.  </description>
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      <title>Super interesting!</title>
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      <title>He struggles with severe OCD, to say the least.</title>
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      <title>Yes.  It also reveals that this essay is NOT HIS OBITUARY.  This is important and I hope everyone is reading this.  If this piece isn't an obituary, what is it?  It's an OpEd (opinion or editorial piece).  What does this mean?  (Keep reading.)</title>
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      <description>This is a fictional representation that serves as a reminder to people to live in the moment and not bury yourself in a job that could care less about you.  Phil is not a real person.  Rayna, this is an important detail to pick up on.  Great job!</description>
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      <title>Yes.  And even his golf game is a regular (&quot;monthly&quot;) work obligation.</title>
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      <title>Yes, but she is also publishing critical fan mail to call them out and publicly make fun of them a little.  </title>
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      <title>Totally true!  And to find enjoyment in the little things.  </title>
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      <title>And it's sad that because of the hoarders, some people can't buy basics.  What about the guy who bought hand sanitizer all over town?  Thousands of bottles!  Then he was re-selling it for a profit. </title>
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      <description>When my kid was in 1st grade, she was in line for sanitizer after recess.  The kid behind her was pulling her hair.  She rubbed the sanitizer on her hands and clapped them in his face.  Unfortunately it splashed in his eyes and he ended up crying.  This is an tragic story.  But somebody needs to clap sanitizer in the hoarder's face...just a little.</description>
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      <title>I thought exactly the same thing!</title>
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      <title>Yes.  Specifically, which word choice?</title>
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      <title>Good!  The reader's sympathy follows the narrator's view, lending sympathy to Phil first.  But once his children are introduced, the sympathy shifts to them.</title>
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      <title>Not only Sunday.  3:00 a.m. on Sunday!  Good attention to detail.</title>
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      <title>Good.  And Goodman repeats the Sunday detail for emphasis.</title>
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      <title>I agree.  She cracks me up!</title>
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      <title>Yes.  It gives her almost an absurd sense of credibility.  </title>
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      <title>I agree completely.  What specifically gives her voice power?  Look at her word choice or her syntax.</title>
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      <title>We are all experts on hand washing these days, aren't we?  :)  </title>
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      <title>Excellent point!</title>
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      <title>I'm cracking up right now!  I didn't even realize he said this.  One minute and twelve seconds.  God, he's funny!</title>
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      <title>Good, Angela!  The essay comes full circle with this repeated phrase.  Suggests a cycle of sorts.  Where is the cycle in this piece?</title>
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      <title>But he doesn't even eat lunch with others at work.  How much &quot;fun&quot; is he having?  What is his priority in life?</title>
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      <title>Excellent!  And in contrast, how should the reader feel about Phil?</title>
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      <title>Good!  Yes, that's why Goodman uses quotes--to illustrate her sarcasm.</title>
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      <title>Good, Will.  What is it emphasizing?</title>
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      <title>Dr. Preissel.  That cracks me up!  :)</title>
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      <title>She is pretty hilarious.  </title>
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      <title>I love this phrase from your parents.  You have to respect yourself before you can expect others to respect you.</title>
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      <title>True.  And a person's physical appearance doesn't often accurately portray how hard they work in life.</title>
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      <title>Nice!</title>
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      <title>The love he's finding is much less risky than a human relationship.  There's less rejection from soap, I imagine.</title>
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      <title>Beautiful, Ashley!</title>
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      <title>A bit obsessive, yes?</title>
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      <title>(Corrin, I have been watching John Krasinski's weekly SGN--Some Good News--episodes on YouTube.  If any of you want to feel better about humanity, check these out.  They bring me tears of joy that make me feel more faith in humanity.)</title>
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      <title>Good attention to detail, Olivia.</title>
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      <title>Good, Hailey.  It's important to recognize the reason for his choice of the anaconda.  As you've indicated, he's comparing the predatory natures of the anaconda and the British nobility.</title>
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      <title>Yes.  This is a general summary of his structure.  What is the effect of this structure, Meghan?</title>
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      <title>Given that it's Twain and he's a satirist, do you think he's actually using the scientific method?  Or is he merely drawing conclusions based on his observations?</title>
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