Comments by Sabrina Bonine Most recent public comments by Sabrina Bonine https://nowcomment.com/users/69340 In a body paragraph I would write about how the speaker uses "we" and "us" pronouns to call the audience to fight back and stop putting up with the treatment they are receiving. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2586558 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2586558 Sun, 03 Oct 2021 22:12:12 -0400 The tone of the piece shifts here from being more passive and compliant to fighting back against the deadly racism occurring during this time. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2586549 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2586549 Sun, 03 Oct 2021 22:07:17 -0400 In a body paragraph I would write about the light tone that is carried throughout the poem when describing the setting, making the speaker seem at peace with their setting. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2582259 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2582259 Wed, 29 Sep 2021 21:12:44 -0400 The author uses imagery that describes the field with light words such as "flutter". https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2582252 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2582252 Wed, 29 Sep 2021 21:05:30 -0400 She uses a metaphor for the extremists, meantime they are afraid that if more, specifically women, are educated then their old way of living will change. She doesn’t want revenge for what they have done, she wants to educate others and gain equality. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1861634 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1861634 Mon, 04 May 2020 14:12:56 -0400 Even though a member of the Taliban attempted to kill her, she still wants education for everyone, including them. This shows how forgiving she is and overall makes her argument more appealing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1861628 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1861628 Mon, 04 May 2020 14:07:45 -0400 Although it is very difficult for many to stay in their homes, the Queen addresses that is for the better, allowing people to feel better about the situation. This encourages others who are unsure that they are doing the right thing by staying at home. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1859780 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1859780 Sun, 03 May 2020 22:51:36 -0400 This shows the people that even though they were going through a difficult time, there is still good in the world. This brings hope to everyone because they know they aren’t alone and people are still willing to help, even more then before. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1859759 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1859759 Sun, 03 May 2020 22:42:15 -0400 This shows an example of how the white government was biased against the black people of South Africa. Each person should be allowed to determine what work they want to do and race should not be a factor. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785722 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785722 Fri, 10 Apr 2020 17:25:54 -0400 The black people of South Africa are not asking for much from the white people. They are ok with building their own money, their own societies, and goods, but they cannot because the white people won’t give them the ability to change their circumstances. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785671 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785671 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:04 -0400 Using the word “we” shows that he is taking responsibility for what happened, and places responsibility on other white people. When he said “never did it thoroughly or honestly”, it shows that no one ever cared about what truly happened. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1762702 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1762702 Fri, 03 Apr 2020 13:37:07 -0400 Jarvis recognizes the destruction that the white people created for the people of South Africa and how they mush now begin to help build them back up. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1762623 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1762623 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 09:59:59 -0400