Comments by Angela Grant Most recent public comments by Angela Grant https://nowcomment.com/users/69797 For a body paragraph I would talk about lines 8-12 and the significance of focusing more on the field. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2583261 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2583261 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 12:39:51 -0400 Personification with the apples resting and pumpkins yielding. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2583251 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2583251 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 12:34:45 -0400 Uses "dearly beloved" as sort of a sarcastic outlook that the eldest son didn't have that connotation portrayed to him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1872057 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1872057 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:05 -0400 Repetition of the same sentence at the beginning. Emphasis of the idea of him working himself to death and the added idea that it wasn't a shock. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1872039 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1872039 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:05 -0400 Shorter sentence to kind of put everything together and wrap everything up. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1861173 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1861173 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 19:38:51 -0400 Builds up ethos with gaining credit for what experiments he's done and what he has come across. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1861164 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1861164 Mon, 04 May 2020 11:37:34 -0400 Uses almost the logic behind Coca-Cola and the slogan's history to help add to the argument of why the don't want it to be used as they have been using it so long. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1843921 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1843921 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:52:04 -0400 Uses allusions to Games People Play and One Hundred Dollar Misunderstanding both to show that this isn't something that has only happened once. Using that to help prove point. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1843904 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1843904 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:04 -0400 Both two short sentences to make the idea of how important education is and how it should be seen. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1818272 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1818272 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:03 -0400 Appeals to emotion. Not everyone has the oppertunity to be educated and showing that some have fought for "their right to be educated", and how hard it was for them to be heard. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1818270 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1818270 Sun, 19 Apr 2020 14:13:25 -0400 Using pathos to reveal an sense of emotion that this challenge can be overcome and that globally everyone is facing the same struggle, giving off a piece of hope. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1788449 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1788449 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:02 -0400 Trying to establish a sense of hope and through her use of pathos evoke emotion within the people and allow them to see that things will soon get better. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1788446 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1788446 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:02 -0400 Shorter paragraph length then overall the rest of the speech. Maybe to emphasize the struggle of African American people. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769467 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769467 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:04 -0400 Using ethos to help build up his credibility and truly reveal what he has been apart of and help to prove his overall point. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769440 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769440 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:00 -0400 Short sentence, to help emphasize the point getting made. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1745756 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1745756 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 09:59:59 -0400 Repetition of the word wishes throughout the paragraph. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1745748 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1745748 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 09:59:59 -0400