Comments by Zoe Rohling Most recent public comments by Zoe Rohling https://nowcomment.com/users/70359 I think he is trying to say something was not right in the way these men were brought up, but they can change if they really want. it's not their morals fault but their conscious is at fault. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1868812 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1868812 Thu, 07 May 2020 17:11:00 -0400 he feels ashamed to be associated with these kind of creatures that are called the human race. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1868782 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1868782 Sun, 10 May 2020 11:16:05 -0400 he's almost wanting the reader to finish his thought. After reading this passage Jarvis wants the audience to have their own perspective of what he just wrote. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1845343 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1845343 Sun, 10 May 2020 18:29:15 -0400 Using the words permissible and unskilled in two different ways makes the reader stop and think what is the difference between both of these sentences and why would he choose do this? https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1845325 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1845325 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:26:42 -0400 He is almost too confident in thinking Seaver's is going to be more than fine with not using the slogan anymore. I think they feel as if they don't need to give any logical examples because they feel the rights are too them and no one else. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1845235 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1845235 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:04 -0400 I feel like this sentance is a peice of sarcasm because notifying every bookstore across the country about one specific book and is a little too much and the reader finds its to be funny on how serious they are trying to be. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1845203 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1845203 Mon, 27 Apr 2020 18:02:09 -0400 making an impact on her audience. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1845092 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1845092 She is building off her last paragraph, how pp11 she used such big numbers(hundreds, thousands, millions) making her audience feel this overwhelming amount of sympathy for these people. then she brings it back to how she was one of those many people who have suffered and she's here to speak out for those who can't. Mon, 27 Apr 2020 17:24:26 -0400 she is drawing her audience in and making them feel welcomed and important. Maybe trying to build a connection before she continues? she showing a great amount of ethos in these first short paragraphs https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1845082 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1845082 Mon, 27 Apr 2020 17:16:47 -0400 I feel like this is Mandela's turning point or main idea of his speech. All around he gives supporting evidence to South Africa and poverty, but now he is making a turning point and telling the audience how they as a whole can fix this and be the change. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1845059 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1845059 Mon, 27 Apr 2020 17:16:47 -0400 using logos and stating his facts to show he was prepared and did his research for the audience to take his speech far more serious and show the major contrasts in the working world in South Africa. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1845051 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1845051 Tue, 26 May 2020 11:31:26 -0400 The queen is trying to tell her people that the pride they had before this outbreak does not matter anymore, nor will it after this is over. What matters is how you rebuild and adjust right now and when this outbreak is over. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1835727 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1835727 Mon, 27 Apr 2020 17:16:47 -0400 She's using a time in her past to help ease the pain due to this current event. She wants her country to feel peace and reassurance from her telling a story. She is trying to relate to the readers/listeners. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1835699 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1835699 Mon, 27 Apr 2020 17:16:47 -0400