Comments by Shelby Bartz Most recent public comments by Shelby Bartz https://nowcomment.com/users/71300 By saying thank you to all the people who are staying home and putting their lives on the line for others is making others realize the extent of the virus and hopefully staying home as much as they can to stop the spread. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1831863 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1831863 Wed, 22 Apr 2020 17:15:06 -0400 She achieves this by thanking all the care workers who "continue their day-to-day duties outside their homes in support of us all" and also thanking everyone who is staying home which is helping others and their families stay safer from the virus. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1831818 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1831818 Wed, 22 Apr 2020 17:04:06 -0400 When she says "Because they were and are afraid of change, afraid of the equality that we will bring into our society." Malala is saying that the extremists are afraid of how changing everything to be more equal it will be changed for the worst. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1831749 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1831749 Wed, 22 Apr 2020 16:39:42 -0400 In this paragraph Malala is saying that she is honored to even be talking again after being shot in the head, and she is grateful to be talking to the people who support her with everything she is doing/putting towards her goals. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1831646 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1831646 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:03 -0400 Uses we and our pronouns and uses diction to show unity to empower others. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1784570 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1784570 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:01 -0400 I think it's a combination of all three because it's a shift in tone by being heavier then the rest, content it's just talking about the Africans, and the purpose is to show what the Africans need/want more than they are receiving. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1784523 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1784523 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:01 -0400 The verb tense in the rest of the article is talking about what "was" happening. "Was" describes how they didn't know better. The verb tense in paragraph 12 "is" talks about what needs to happen now. "Is" describes how it's not okay and needs to change. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1764833 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1764833 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:00 -0400 Pathos https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1764832 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1764832 I agree with Cole, and I also believe that Pathos is being used throughout the entire article by using "permissible and non permissible" to make people agree with what he is saying in paragraph 9 and make people change and not be "criminals, prostitutes and drunkards." Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:00 -0400