Comments by Maja Bielich Most recent public comments by Maja Bielich https://nowcomment.com/users/72355 She uses pathos by speaking up about the pain of those who have lost loved ones and assures that staying at home will help the pandemic. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1903938 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1903938 Wed, 03 Jun 2020 04:28:33 -0400 She says "I am speaking to you" this draws a connection to the audience and makes it feel as if we are all going through the same thing. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1903937 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1903937 Wed, 03 Jun 2020 04:22:54 -0400 She uses the terms "brothers and sisters" in order to show that they are all connected and in it together. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1903920 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1903920 Wed, 03 Jun 2020 03:56:20 -0400 She sets the tone by starting of the piece thanking god and everyone who prayed for her. This shows that she is religious. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1903919 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1903919 Wed, 03 Jun 2020 03:53:47 -0400 The question shows the fear of the cold war. https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1903546 https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1903546 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 20:24:37 -0400 He uses words such as "agony" and "sweat" to show the work he went through to write. https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1903540 https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1903540 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 20:14:44 -0400 I agree, he wanted to end the entire piece with one clear, final statement to get his point across. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1903527 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1903527 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 19:38:51 -0400 In this paragraph, the author repeatedly begins his sentences with the word Man. This helps single out the differences between man and all other animals. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1903525 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1903525 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 19:34:28 -0400 Pathos is being used in this paragraph by relating to the readers with their daily activities and showing we all experience the same emotions. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1903490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1903490 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 19:22:21 -0400 The short paragraph helps get his point across of what they are striving for. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1903473 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1903473 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 19:11:44 -0400 Throughout the whole piece the author uses past tense words such as "was" or "were" only to end it with "It is time" showing that it is time for change to be made. In addition the sentence is very short to help get the point across. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1903443 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1903443 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 18:56:01 -0400 He uses repetition of the word permissible numerous times in the paragraph only to shift the tone of the piece in the last sentence, saying it is not permissible to destroy family life. This draws attention to the fact that family life is being destroyed. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1903413 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1903413 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 18:42:34 -0400 The word bitterness implies that she is bitter towards the company and possibly blames them as the reason for Phil's death. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1903388 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1903388 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 18:22:39 -0400 The author repeats themselves by restating the initial sentence. The repetition shows the importance of the death. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1903387 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1903387 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 18:11:49 -0400 The first sentence hooks the reader in by surprising them with the unexpected. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1903385 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1903385 Tue, 02 Jun 2020 18:08:52 -0400