Comments by Jadyn Torkelson Most recent public comments by Jadyn Torkelson https://nowcomment.com/users/72563 Keeps showing how the animals are better than the Man, and uses the short sentence of "The cat is innocent, man is not" which puts emphasis on his research of how brutally honest he is being that men aren't innocent. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1863561 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1863561 Tue, 05 May 2020 15:24:36 -0400 He shows how he has credibility, and hasn't just been guessing on this but actually used scientific method. So that shows how the rest of the article is going to be reliable not just his opinions. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1863555 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1863555 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:05 -0400 Uses sarcasm because no one is actually gonna mistake a book for a pack of Coca Cola and it is just silly of them to ask him to stop using the slogan. https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1848178 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1848178 Tue, 28 Apr 2020 15:33:37 -0400 Tries to come off that he is sorry about explaining so much of why he shouldn't use the slogan but really isn't because he claims it's "necessary" to use another line, even though they sell completely different things and doesn't really give him a choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1848167 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1848167 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:04 -0400 She doesn't want revenge and show's how she's a good person that is just fighting for the children and wants education available. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1834507 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1834507 Thu, 23 Apr 2020 14:10:00 -0400 Says dear friends as she's addressing to the audience and makes her more appealing to them and more personable. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1834502 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1834502 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:03 -0400 Says "we known that it is the right thing to do", by addressing to herself and country as a whole to make people know they are all in the same situation and gives a sense of hope if they can all do what is right. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1804149 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1804149 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:02 -0400 Hopeful Tone https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1804094 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1804094 In the previous paragraph she states that they "may have more to endure", and so in the finishing sentence she keeps it short and sweet to gives off a hopeful tone, even though there is still more to bad times to come. While saying "I send my thanks" to make it more personal. Wed, 15 Apr 2020 14:50:49 -0400 States how there are 2 ways to get out of poverty but for the Africans it is deliberately restricted by the government, so really they have no way of escaping poverty and are stuck with living that way, and leaving the ... at the end for emphasis/pause. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785765 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785765 Fri, 10 Apr 2020 17:50:11 -0400 Even though he explains that the people who live in towns are closer to white standards, they are still impoverished and its showing how everybody is struggling even though south Africa is very rich, and leaves the ... at the end for emphasis. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785747 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1785747 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:01 -0400 He makes it clear that was fine to have doubts, but now that they are aware and there is an urbanized nature population it is now not allowed to not be educated and addressed the opposing thought but shows how its not okay anymore. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1760838 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1760838 Thu, 02 Apr 2020 19:25:24 -0400 Makes " There is no other way it can be done." a very short sentence to add emphasis to how important the education is and having social aims and purposes. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1760834 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1760834 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 09:59:59 -0400