Comments by Rayna Hess Most recent public comments by Rayna Hess https://nowcomment.com/users/72966 for a body paragraph i would talk about how the author uses imagery to describe the setting https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2581632 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2581632 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:08 -0400 personification and imagery are two techniques that are heavily used https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2581629 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2581629 Wed, 29 Sep 2021 13:23:45 -0400 "the obituary didnt mention that" is repeated. seems like the man's obituary did not do him justice for his work-filled life. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1879629 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1879629 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 10:00:06 -0400 With this statement being its own paragraph, I feel as if its trying to put emphasis on "because it was the weekend" through almost a sarcastic tone https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1879627 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1879627 Thu, 14 May 2020 12:07:03 -0400 I agree with zoe. By making it a short sentence like this, it emphasizes it's importance and leads the reader to almost infer what happens next https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1872101 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1872101 Sun, 10 May 2020 18:29:15 -0400 saying it was okay to believe that destruction was inevitable, but watching it happen was not. morally meaning destruction of conservative and liberal sides of south africa and race debates. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1872097 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1872097 Sun, 10 May 2020 18:24:52 -0400 I agree with meghan, by saying it is allowed but you shouldnt do it. Like when he states "but it is not permissible to develop any resources if they can be developed only at the cost of labour" https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1872010 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1872010 Sun, 10 May 2020 17:36:42 -0400