Comments by Cole Reiger Most recent public comments by Cole Reiger https://nowcomment.com/users/74798 Exclamatory sentences are used as it rallies those to fight against what's bringing death. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2583545 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2583545 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 11:15:49 -0700 Personification as the field is spreading. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2583530 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2583530 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 11:13:05 -0700 For a body paragraph I would use the repetition of "us" throughout the piece to connect the speaker and his audience. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2583514 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290094?scroll_to=2583514 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 11:10:17 -0700 For a body paragraph, I would use the "spreading fields" and have it flow into the other fall imagery like in the lines above and below with the pumpkins and corn. https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2582969 https://nowcomment.com/documents/290093?scroll_to=2582969 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 07:52:05 -0700 Is commenting on people in power not living up to the standards that they hold other people to. https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1861879 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1861879 Mon, 04 May 2020 13:13:08 -0700 When she says united and unity, and it reminds me of a part from one of Lincolns speeches, the "united we stand" part, which may be trying to relate her way of uniting for education back to her democratic government that is mentioned earlier. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1819585 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1819585 Mon, 20 Apr 2020 05:59:14 -0700 16-19 are meant to bring people to her side because of how the list appeals to people like the Taliban families. https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1819552 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1819552 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 07:00:03 -0700 I agree with Madison that the words "Together" "Reassure" "United" and "overcome" bring hope, but in addition to hope I think the words make the nation feel confidence/pride in themselves that the will "overcome" what they are going through. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1794408 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1794408 Tue, 14 Apr 2020 07:34:40 -0700 She repeats the word disruption as well as a similar word (change) to show how the virus is effecting evoryone negetivley, but then goes on in the next paragraph to praise healthcare workers, which shifts the focus from negetive to postive. https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1794373 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1794373 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 07:00:02 -0700 Tone shift from ten into 11, 10 was about the problems and 11 addresses the wants and needs to solve the problems that were talked about in paragraph 10. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769490 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 07:00:00 -0700 Pathos being used throughout the paragraph, seen with word choice like breakdown, poverty, wander, illegitimacy, violence, showing how bad the townships are, attempting to evoke pity from the reader through negatively associated word choice. https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769444 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1769444 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 07:00:00 -0700 8th paragraph = Pathos paragraph because of words such as destruction (x3), inevitable, and deteriorates, which are words that evoke pity for the "physically and morally" deteriorated country. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1747612 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1747612 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 07:00:00 -0700 The importance of Jarvis using the word "permissible" throughout the speech may be important because of how to adds to the piece's serious tone. https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1747596 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1747596 Thu, 30 Sep 2021 06:59:59 -0700