Most recent public comments by Smriti Chadha https://nowcomment.com/users/80166 https://nowcomment.com/documents/206469?scroll_to=1917932 https://nowcomment.com/documents/206469?scroll_to=1917932 Fri, 19 Jun 2020 07:08:38 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/206469?scroll_to=1917930 https://nowcomment.com/documents/206469?scroll_to=1917930 Fri, 19 Jun 2020 07:08:01 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/204089?scroll_to=1900068 https://nowcomment.com/documents/204089?scroll_to=1900068 you begin with talking about the history of mask in previous epidemics/ pandemics and after that you just talk about masks. Knowing about masks is very important but I don't think this really relates to the topic. Fri, 29 May 2020 11:23:29 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/204089?scroll_to=1900066 https://nowcomment.com/documents/204089?scroll_to=1900066 You are meeting the criteria of talking about a cultural artifact of the pandemic but I feel like you can really improve the end and add more of how the mask is connected to your culture. You also need a title relating to your experience. Fri, 29 May 2020 11:21:33 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203392?scroll_to=1894103 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203392?scroll_to=1894103 You started with how you felt about college and then in the middle explained your problem and in the end found a way to unlearn previous ways and improve which ended up helping you.You are using your own personal experience but you might wanna elaborate more in the 8th paragraph. Overall its pretty good and you are using MLA formatting Fri, 22 May 2020 10:48:56 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203392?scroll_to=1894100 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203392?scroll_to=1894100 Fri, 22 May 2020 10:43:57 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203392?scroll_to=1894098 https://nowcomment.com/documents/203392?scroll_to=1894098 Fri, 22 May 2020 10:42:14 -0400