Most recent public comments by Jadynn Outland https://nowcomment.com/users/80333 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689568 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689568 You do a nice job of explaining specific parts of the song and how they relate to your theme, however is living a better life, and finding love the same thing? you say one in your topic sentence and then another in your concluding. If you just clarified it would be even better! Nice Job! Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:33:30 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1875848 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1875848 You do a nice job of explaining specific parts of the song and how they relate to your theme, however is living a better life, and finding love the same thing? you say one in your topic sentence and then another in your concluding. If you just clarified it would be even better! Nice Job! Tue, 12 May 2020 12:52:35 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689539 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689539 How you chose to have the mirror reflecting the normal looking apple into mirror as rotten/evil is very clever. You emphasize very well that the mirror is the root of the envy of the queen, so with that her reflection is exactly what she doesn't want it to be. Nice Job! Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:33:13 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1875808 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1875808 How you chose to have the mirror reflecting the normal looking apple into mirror as rotten/evil is very clever. You emphasize very well that the mirror is the root of the envy of the queen, so with that her reflection is exactly what she doesn't want it to be. Nice Job! Tue, 12 May 2020 12:44:17 -0400