Most recent public comments by Triumphant overlord of many worlds Jennica Ley https://nowcomment.com/users/80345 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1889095 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1889095 The use of the butterflies in this piece is an absolute stroke of genius! The blue butterflies on the black background is dark and ominous, but just cheerful enough that you can see the light at the end of the tunnel. This element also brings to mind the idea of having "Butterflies in your stomach", which relates back to the theme that love is confusing, but worthwhile. I am thoroughly impressed. Tue, 19 May 2020 15:56:43 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689622 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689622 The use of the butterflies in this piece is an absolute stroke of genius! The blue butterflies on the black background is dark and ominous, but just cheerful enough that you can see the light at the end of the tunnel. This element also brings to mind the idea of having "Butterflies in your stomach", which relates back to the theme that love is confusing, but worthwhile. I am thoroughly impressed. Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:34:10 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689472 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689472 this is, like, the coolest story Idea ever. Dang, that's awesome. Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:47 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1888768 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1888768 this is, like, the coolest story Idea ever. Dang, that's awesome. Tue, 19 May 2020 15:11:28 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689490 Is that really realistic enough of a scenario for Mr. Beksiński to be warning us about it? Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:51 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876220 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876220 Is that really realistic enough of a scenario for Mr. Beksiński to be warning us about it? Tue, 12 May 2020 15:54:05 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689495 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689495 Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:53 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876216 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876216 Tue, 12 May 2020 15:50:03 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876199 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876199 That poem was freaking awesome! Tue, 12 May 2020 15:48:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689494 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689494 That poem was freaking awesome! Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876194 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876194 I want to finish reading this story! Tue, 12 May 2020 15:43:41 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689492 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689492 I want to finish reading this story! Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689491 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689491 This sentence would be absolutley perfect if only you took out the word "memes" Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876193 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876193 This sentence would be absolutley perfect if only you took out the word "memes" Tue, 12 May 2020 15:41:07 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689489 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689489 This has so much insight. I would never have looked at that picture and come up with this theme myself, but now that you say it: it's absolutely genius! I would have come up with something like the dangers of genetic engineering, but this is a much better theme. Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:51 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876190 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876190 This has so much insight. I would never have looked at that picture and come up with this theme myself, but now that you say it: it's absolutely genius! I would have come up with something like the dangers of genetic engineering, but this is a much better theme. Tue, 12 May 2020 15:37:01 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689488 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689488 If all guilt weighs heavily on people, can one really say for certain that there are varying degrees of guilt? If there are varying degrees of guilt, what makes one person more guilty than another? Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:51 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876186 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876186 If all guilt weighs heavily on people, can one really say for certain that there are varying degrees of guilt? If there are varying degrees of guilt, what makes one person more guilty than another? Tue, 12 May 2020 15:31:59 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876184 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876184 Beautiful piece. Well done. This piece emulates the Tim Burton style of art and, therefore, matches the movie quite well. Tue, 12 May 2020 15:24:35 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689480 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689480 Beautiful piece. Well done. This piece emulates the Tim Burton style of art and, therefore, matches the movie quite well. Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:50 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689476 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689476 I think you did a good job with explaining the mood and theme; however, your paragraph does not include a enough of the story for this paragraph to be cohesive. I know the teacher said not to make it a summary, but you have so little plot elements in this explanation that the paragraph doesn't make sense. I suggest revising this. (If you feel like it, because the assignment is over as far as I know.) Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:49 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876180 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876180 I think you did a good job with explaining the mood and theme; however, your paragraph does not include a enough of the story for this paragraph to be cohesive. I know the teacher said not to make it a summary, but you have so little plot elements in this explanation that the paragraph doesn't make sense. I suggest revising this. (If you feel like it, because the assignment is over as far as I know.) Tue, 12 May 2020 15:21:51 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689448 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689448 Being present when it counts: the music only adds to the theme that people need to be cautious and know how far is too far, which is very clearly shown as things go wrong and slowly get worse as the movie progresses. Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:41 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876141 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876141 Being present when it counts: the music only adds to the theme that people need to be cautious and know how far is too far, which is very clearly shown as things go wrong and slowly get worse as the movie progresses. Tue, 12 May 2020 15:03:36 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876138 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876138 Doth thou have an artist statement? I would really like to know how this wonderful writing sample came to be. Tue, 12 May 2020 15:00:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689447 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689447 Doth thou have an artist statement? I would really like to know how this wonderful writing sample came to be. Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:41 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689446 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689446 This paragraph is well put together and the word choice is exquisite. I feel like I'm listening to the opening of a hit video game with well developed plot. Is this the whole thing or is the rest of it on the document I can't access? If this is the whole thing, you've got a great start to a hit short story (or novel) if it isn't, I WANT TO READ THE WHOLE THING!!!!!! Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:41 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876120 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876120 This paragraph is well put together and the word choice is exquisite. I feel like I'm listening to the opening of a hit video game with well developed plot. Is this the whole thing or is the rest of it on the document I can't access? If this is the whole thing, you've got a great start to a hit short story (or novel) if it isn't, I WANT TO READ THE WHOLE THING!!!!!! Tue, 12 May 2020 15:00:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689443 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689443 I like your first sentence, however; I would like to point out the fact that "People need to change the way they enact government" Is indeed a theme, but not a Gothic theme. ~Jennica Ley Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:32:41 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1876117 I like your first sentence, however; I would like to point out the fact that "People need to change the way they enact government" Is indeed a theme, but not a Gothic theme. ~Jennica Ley Fri, 15 May 2020 23:04:05 -0400