Comments by Riley Eccles Most recent public comments by Riley Eccles https://nowcomment.com/users/80407 I like that you made both versions of the events in the poem represented. The red to show the madness of the man, and the blue to show how he thought it really was. Gold for his fantasy and silver for the truth. https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689586 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689586 Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:33:46 -0500 I like that you made both versions of the events in the poem represented. The red to show the madness of the man, and the blue to show how he thought it really was. Gold for his fantasy and silver for the truth. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1877605 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1877605 Wed, 13 May 2020 10:55:08 -0400 I like the inclusion of the veins in the man's wrist, showing his struggle to hold onto the sand. https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689608 https://nowcomment.com/documents/302686?scroll_to=2689608 Mon, 24 Jan 2022 14:33:58 -0500 I like the inclusion of the veins in the man's wrist, showing his struggle to hold onto the sand. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1877593 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200895?scroll_to=1877593 Wed, 13 May 2020 10:41:15 -0400