Comments by student Kayli Fuhrman Rabuck Most recent public comments by student Kayli Fuhrman Rabuck https://nowcomment.com/users/80671 Good writing comes from pain https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1896006 https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1896006 Mon, 25 May 2020 16:32:01 -0400 Ethos,credibility, because of how much hes accomplished https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1896003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/202540?scroll_to=1896003 Mon, 25 May 2020 16:26:21 -0400 Very dramatic and shows regret and sorrow about how he worked so much so she never really got to see him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1895994 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1895994 Mon, 25 May 2020 16:09:47 -0400 Starts off with a very intense sentence setting the tone for the rest of the passage. https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1895993 https://nowcomment.com/documents/200985?scroll_to=1895993 Mon, 25 May 2020 16:05:49 -0400 Implies that humans are the only race that seeks revenge but well doing so used animal like attributes to compare them to animals such as "broods" and "harbors" https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1895991 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1895991 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:59:58 -0400 uses logos with how many aniamls were killed adding to the emotion of the piece https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1895989 https://nowcomment.com/documents/199547?scroll_to=1895989 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:56:54 -0400 because he believes that since they've used it for such a long time they have some right to it https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1895988 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1895988 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:54:25 -0400 That's true but i don't think it's a good argument because other things have also used this slogan https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1895985 https://nowcomment.com/documents/197911?scroll_to=1895985 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:52:04 -0400 I agree with Livi because she's very clear about her relationship with god and how she says it also shows her view on life https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1895981 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1895981 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:44:30 -0400 The way she repeats the words "respectable" and "Honorable" abd then leaves more space between lines gives the paragraph a more dramatic effect https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1895978 https://nowcomment.com/documents/195003?scroll_to=1895978 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:42:57 -0400 I agree with Logan, the way she says this with so much sympathy shows she really cares https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1895975 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1895975 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:40:11 -0400 **it's also relatbeable where we are ad it shows that everyone is kinda going through the same thing despite where they live https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1895974 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1895974 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:38:48 -0400 With everything going on with corona this paragraph was very relateable with all the drastic lifestyle changes happening https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1895972 https://nowcomment.com/documents/191853?scroll_to=1895972 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:37:20 -0400 Says a lot about what Africans want but by Saying "africans want..." so much and then going on for it to be just things that aren't asking too much adds a lot of tone to the paragraph https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1895971 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1895971 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:34:01 -0400 I would say this paragraph is a mix between logos with all the facts and pathos because the facts that africa is "the ichest country in africa" and still many of the Africans live in not the best condiontions and the whites do is sad https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1895955 https://nowcomment.com/documents/189663?scroll_to=1895955 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:31:08 -0400 I agree with Zoe because he goes to say it's permissible to do this and this and this but then on the last sentence changes to it is not permissible to do this https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1895953 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1895953 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:26:42 -0400 it shows his anger and how he feels about how things are now https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1895951 https://nowcomment.com/documents/186954?scroll_to=1895951 Mon, 25 May 2020 15:24:31 -0400