Most recent public comments by Kaitlyn Simpson https://nowcomment.com/users/84345 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395847 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395847 This may be the shift because he starts talking about what they will get out of it if they keep with their religion. Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:48:48 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395838 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395838 You are at the will of god. You have no control over your life. Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:44:27 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395835 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395835 Another nature metaphor. Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:43:52 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395824 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395824 "... than a spider's web would have no more influence to uphold you..." Normal everyday things they know about to get them to understand them. Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:38:11 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393472 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393472 God doesn't do it for the power it's because they were already damned for life. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 09:07:56 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393447 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393447 It's his own fault if he falls not gods or anyone else. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 09:04:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393326 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393326 Everyone who does not convert is bad Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:52:20 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393267 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393267 Telling them that if they give everything up to god they will not fall. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:47:47 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393261 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393261 They will eventually fall and god will not catch you. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:47:00 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393242 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393242 Its their own fault for going against their own religion Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:45:48 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393232 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393232 Already using an example of a different religion. "Everything else is wicked" Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:45:17 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393222 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393222 This sermon is about this subject how people will slip up in their religion. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:44:02 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2306824 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2306824 He's bringing in his argument of individuality and being self-aware about how you think Mon, 01 Feb 2021 19:46:27 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2306821 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2306821 He creates the idea that it isn't so much about the knowledge you get from school but how they teach you to think and break that knowledge down. Mon, 01 Feb 2021 19:44:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2306806 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2306806 Though it's seen as self-centered, it is human nature for us to make ourselves the center of the universe. Mon, 01 Feb 2021 19:43:34 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268333 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268333 She talks about how a weasel's instinct isn't purely for killing things it's surviving and being able to live a life of freedom only caring for itself. Mon, 11 Jan 2021 08:47:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268301 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268301 It may not be the full message of the passage but it seems like instinct is one of the messages in this. She tells the stories of the weasel and shows it's natural instincts but says it in a way to show that both animals and humans have instincts that we can't help. Mon, 11 Jan 2021 08:43:48 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216074 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216074 A major part of the argument is using sources and it's important to remember to use enough of them. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 08:50:12 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216053 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216053 The thesis I think is the most important part of the essay because it shows what you're arguing about and it grabs the reader's attention. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 08:56:52 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216048 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216048 Finding out a position of the sources so you can know what to use for opposition or for evidence. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 08:47:57 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159759 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159759 She makes the main argument that she knows that she is a bad feminist but is okay with that because there doesn't need to be a copy and paste feminists all the time. Any female, no matter what they like or dislike can be a feminist. Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:08:15 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159750 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159750 Her evidence is examples from her own life. Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:06:43 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159746 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159746 THIS is her main argument Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:06:05 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159743 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159743 This is a really strong start and puts her argument at the forefront Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:07:43 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056837 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056837 Lincoln uses HE and HIS quite a bit. He uses this to show that it is God's rules and domain and that he has the ability to punish you. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:43:16 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056833 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056833 He uses words like Almighty to show that god is over man Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:41:33 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056827 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056827 He knows that this is the way to tell them that slavery is a terrible thing. He invokes the name of God to almost scare the people. He knows that they're devote followers of god and are scared of god's wrath. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:38:46 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056823 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056823 Like David said this is exigence. It also is diction. It's an interesting word choice but it fits very well. The word anxiously Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:36:28 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056819 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056819 Comments that everyone knows that the country has just been to war and that he doesn't have to go over it or recap it because everyone knows about it. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:34:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052294 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052294 He invokes god because he knows that the majority of people follow god. He knows that they used god to justify slavery but know he says that god does not want it know and the war was punishment. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:40:16 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052216 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052216 He uses appeals to the majority population and invokes the name of God multiple times. He hits their feelings instead of using facts this time. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:40:16 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2042268 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2042268 This is mainly the context of what's going on right now with slavery and the upcoming civil war. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 08:53:01 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2042179 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2042179 The speaker is Lincoln Tue, 15 Sep 2020 08:52:09 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2042178 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2042178 I don't know what were specifically trying to point out in this part of the text but this immediately jumped out at me as a metaphor. It didn't need to be added but was anyways and I think it was intentional. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 08:51:33 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951989 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951989 I think it is important that we keep up with our own work. College students have to do it so we should too. We're almost adults and we gotta get ready for the real world. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 09:21:26 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951972 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951972 I enjoy that we are going to learn about being able to express our ideas more and create a broader understandding about those feelings and ideas. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 09:17:33 -0400