Comments by Kahlan Francis Most recent public comments by Kahlan Francis https://nowcomment.com/users/84360 This is like in elementary school when they're like "oh if you don't but tickets to field day you're going to be left out and sad" https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395884 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395884 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:59:22 -0400 Somewhere around here he begins directly telling the audience what will happen in no uncertain terms that they need to fix themselves and speaking in terms of the community https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395852 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395852 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:49:45 -0400 I just commented about how relating god to a monarch would add understanding for the audience, but this line adds even more because the kings they left were a huge factor in their lives, and now hes saying look bro god is even bigger https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395845 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395845 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:48:05 -0400 The puritans escaped religious persecution https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395841 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395841 Comparing the wrath of god to that of a monarch they do not like adds an extra sense of rage and audience relation Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:46:29 -0400 This comparison greatly expresses god's wrath because if i have a spider in my hand, i will squash that thing https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395836 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395836 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:43:46 -0400 periodt - you're GONNA be convinced https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395833 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395833 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:42:15 -0400 arrows are drunk now. must be Irish https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395831 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395831 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:41:20 -0400 i forgot to add this https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395828 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395828 If the puritans have experienced a flood, this would create more fear from this simile Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:40:19 -0400 Creating an immediate need for audience. He is stating that at this very second you need help. https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395820 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395820 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:35:28 -0400 another simile but this one directly correlates to something the puritans experience in daily life https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395812 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395812 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:40:19 -0400 simile https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395808 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395808 like literally so many similies Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:34:46 -0400 Restates his claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395805 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395805 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:30:25 -0400 This is not hopeful and the tone changes completely from utter damnation https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395804 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2395804 goes to 2nd point of view Tue, 23 Mar 2021 08:30:08 -0400 He expresses Hell as being ruled by God and credits God with the negative aspects of religious damnation. https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393474 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393474 The context listed that he had a bit of controversy in his teachings, and the heavy association of God and Hellfire could be insulting to some religious people. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 09:08:09 -0400 This is where he switches from speaking about his slipping foot and gets into the meat of his damnation speech https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393443 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393443 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 09:04:02 -0400 idk what this is called, but it sure is something - epistrophe? https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393434 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393434 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 09:03:00 -0400 a tad more repetition https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393411 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393411 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:59:51 -0400 Hypophora https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393399 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393399 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:58:39 -0400 repetition in these sentences https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393372 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393372 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:56:04 -0400 figurative language : simile https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393340 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393340 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:53:31 -0400 Direct appeal to the audience. Makes a very clear message that they are the sinners he speaks of, and they are walking toward damnation https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393330 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393330 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:52:37 -0400 You are a worm lol https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393311 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393311 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:51:31 -0400 Comparing the man and God relationship with man and worm https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393302 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393302 Worms are lowly and easily killed Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:50:41 -0400 A threat https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393270 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393270 If you do not stop sinning, God will stop loving you and you will fall into destruction and the next paragraph makes it evident they will fall into Hell. Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:47:56 -0400 Purpose and Context https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393256 https://nowcomment.com/documents/264691?scroll_to=2393256 He is explaining the despicable nature of sin with a comparison to another religion that they look down upon with disdain. An example Mon, 22 Mar 2021 08:46:42 -0400 He gives evidence here by explaining how we are the center of our own universe, which can be seen as hypothetical; however, he supports this by having us analyze our own behaviors through his examples that provide the real life aspect of his evidence. https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2284703 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2284703 Fri, 22 Jan 2021 08:50:31 -0500 referring to life as an existence and to call it day to day trenches is incredibly negative word choice https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2284672 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2284672 Fri, 22 Jan 2021 08:43:00 -0500 A combination of hydrogen and oxygen https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2284665 https://nowcomment.com/documents/249496?scroll_to=2284665 Fri, 22 Jan 2021 08:38:43 -0500 This is a call to action, or "so what" that wraps up a conclusion. This statement explains what she wants us to do with the knowledge form the rest of the text. https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268360 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268360 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 08:51:29 -0500 This is the main idea of the entire passage. Through the whole text, she is building up to this idea, that we should behave as weasels. We must do as we want and be as feel we are meant to be. https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268355 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268355 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 08:50:25 -0500 The metaphor used here helps the reader to understand the depth and intensity of the stare between them. https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268336 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268336 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 08:47:52 -0500 The author uses this anecdote to prove a point about how tenacious and tough weasels are. To still be dangling from the throat of an eagle, long after death, proves that the weasel is stronger than it appears. https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268318 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247299?scroll_to=2268318 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 08:45:46 -0500 The original form of this quote was about Frank Sinatra from Dean Martin, therefore this is allusion. https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216086 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216086 Mon, 30 Nov 2020 08:52:09 -0500 even if the source does not support your claim, can evidence be pulled strategically to make it seem that way? https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216073 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2216073 I don't know if this is frowned upon. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 08:51:11 -0500 This is representative of her main claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159756 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159756 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:08:03 -0400 i find this to be a powerful admission. Even though it is pressed upon us, girls are made fun of for liking pink and being girly, but also expected you do so. https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159751 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159751 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:07:11 -0400 He is referencing his own first inauguration, 4 years prior. AT the time, the war was still raging. Now, as things were tilting in the way of the union, he is recapping what has happened. In the following text, he is saying what can and should happen. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056826 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2056826 Fri, 18 Sep 2020 08:38:44 -0400 He is comparing the two parts of the nation here. This is context because he is explaining the perspectives of the war. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052259 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052259 Thu, 17 Sep 2020 09:15:57 -0400 I think h is expressing purpose here. He is explaining how he feels he is following thee path of god by putting an end to slavery. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052222 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052222 Thu, 17 Sep 2020 09:15:36 -0400 In my opinion, this registers as a plead/warning to the south. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2052003 He is saying that the nation should be whole. The south is separate, but he thinks this should not be how it is. Thu, 17 Sep 2020 08:41:02 -0400 Mentions the south. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2050627 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225296?scroll_to=2050627 I find it significant that he says this. The tone directed towards the south in this speech is almost a warning to me. Wed, 16 Sep 2020 16:02:34 -0400 legible writing https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951985 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951985 I am unsure on what is considered legible, and if I qualify. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 09:19:39 -0400 Keep late work for insurance https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951979 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212286?scroll_to=1951979 I like the way there is openness to fix mistakes. Some teachers just tell you they're absolutely right, so I enjoy the ability to fix mistakes or anything similar. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 09:18:47 -0400