Comments by Dez Daniels Most recent public comments by Dez Daniels https://nowcomment.com/users/84362 This makes the description better https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181670 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181670 Wed, 04 Nov 2020 09:41:38 -0500 In her head she had a vision of what a feminist should be which caused her to push away the stuff she enjoyed https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159763 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2159763 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:10:23 -0500 This is showing is that how all language have various similarities and can men the same things. https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1971910 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1971910 Fri, 21 Aug 2020 09:51:10 -0400 When writing people must understand that not everything must contain drama or action, you have to learn to focus on the regular day struggles of life itself without something extreme happening. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959580 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959580 Mon, 17 Aug 2020 10:00:23 -0400 This isn't saying a essay/story should be full of drama but don't try and hide the honest truth because if s story has no conflict it would be boring to read. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959532 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959532 Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:50:08 -0400 This sentence is explaining how the word I is more commonly found in 1st pov which isn't a bad thing https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956198 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956198 Fri, 14 Aug 2020 09:58:25 -0400