Comments by student Brooke Poe Most recent public comments by student Brooke Poe https://nowcomment.com/users/84410 First talks about gate being wide open now talking about the door of mercy being wide open https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396810 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396810 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 13:13:20 -0500 Imagery!! https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396765 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396765 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 12:56:40 -0500 Last part of sentence https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396764 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396764 Uses imagery to compare how heavy your wickedness carries and how your righteousness cant stop you from falling down to hell. Using the imagery of a spider web and a falling rock. Tue, 23 Mar 2021 12:55:16 -0500 saying again what he has been saying but saying it directly to the audience https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396756 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396756 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 12:49:01 -0500 intensifies use of figurative language https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396755 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396755 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 12:46:41 -0500 Switches from third to second person https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396751 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2396751 Tue, 23 Mar 2021 12:44:55 -0500 claim https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394705 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394705 "There is nothing that keeps wicked men at any one moment out of hell, but the mere pleasure of God." Mon, 22 Mar 2021 13:09:23 -0500 some imagery with the furnace and oven https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394702 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394702 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 13:07:59 -0500 God makes the decisions in who is going to hell. Without God withholding it hell would let loose on them https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394698 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394698 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 13:06:29 -0500 God is stronger no matter what you try https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394694 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394694 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 13:01:37 -0500 setting up biblical precedent https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394687 https://nowcomment.com/documents/265141?scroll_to=2394687 Mon, 22 Mar 2021 12:58:14 -0500 saying that the truth is people who commit suicide were dead long before they killed themselves. https://nowcomment.com/documents/251073?scroll_to=2286092 https://nowcomment.com/documents/251073?scroll_to=2286092 They had already been dead, unconscious and stuck in the same pattern day after day being alone. Fri, 22 Jan 2021 13:23:21 -0600 I like how she connected herself to the weasel using the brain and "retrieving" it back from the weasel and it feeling the separation https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269466 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269466 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:22:59 -0600 In the next couple sentences of the paragraph https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269445 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269445 the author goes on further explaining the locking of their eyes, giving more imagery and feeling to what the air around them was like and the feeling of having locked eyes with the weasel. Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:21:13 -0600 Author explains weasels way of living almost like a person writing in a journal https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269417 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269417 the author saying the weasels journal would be "tracks in clay, a spray of feathers, mouse blood and bone: uncollected, unconnected, loose-leaf, and blown" is like the weasels way of writing about life. A person writes things down in a journal, while a weasel can't do that and still live their life leaving small things from them that they have done. (don't fully know how to explain) Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:16:10 -0600 Explains how they looked at each other https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269395 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269395 to give the reader that sense of silence and almost seriousness or amazement of the two locking eyes Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:21:13 -0600 Author uses imagery for this whole paragraph https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269392 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269392 Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:06:16 -0600 Author connects the weasel fixed on the eagles throat to the end. https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269390 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2269390 At the end of the passage in the last paragraph the author writes, "grasp your one necessity and not let it go, to dangle from it limp wherever it takes you." To bring back the story from the beginning of the passage to remind the reader of how a weasel doesn't let go and compares you to it and that you shouldn't let go. Mon, 11 Jan 2021 13:05:07 -0600 Important to know https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239637 https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239637 its important to know when an author is implying something and what it is they are implying. Fri, 11 Dec 2020 12:45:32 -0600 for the reading comprehension part of the test https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239631 https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239631 Fri, 11 Dec 2020 12:43:04 -0600 example https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239629 https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239629 showing an example to give you an idea of what some of the questions will look like. Fri, 11 Dec 2020 12:43:04 -0600 skills and the weight https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239615 https://nowcomment.com/documents/245428?scroll_to=2239615 shows what the different skill categories there are and the percentage that they are weighted at. Fri, 11 Dec 2020 12:40:31 -0600 Always good to remember this thesis structure https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217981 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217981 You don't always have to use it but you could use it to get an idea of what you want to say and your reasons. Then you could write down your final thesis in that same structure or in a different one. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 13:10:29 -0600 It is always a good idea to have an idea of each source. https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217977 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217977 You can use the sources to help further explain your example, claim, or even another source. To make it even more clear on your statements. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 13:09:04 -0600 Before you go into writing you always want to know what you are writing about. https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217962 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217962 This gives you an idea that you will be given info on the prompt and background info on it as well. So make sure to use what you have to your advantage. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 13:05:37 -0600 Pink https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2162494 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2162494 She says this and explains this most likely because pink is seen a a girls color, how she lied because she thought it wasn't a cool color. Mon, 26 Oct 2020 13:26:02 -0500 different views https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2162480 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2162480 She says this because many people interpret feminism in different ways. Because of this she thinks she's doing it wrong but really everyone sees feminism and supports feminism in different ways. Mon, 26 Oct 2020 13:24:10 -0500 She uses these first two sentences to hook the reader into reading. https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2162467 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238129?scroll_to=2162467 She does this because it gets the reader to read the essay and to understand what this essay is most likely going to discuss. Mon, 26 Oct 2020 13:21:58 -0500 He talks of how no one truly wanted war, but one wanted to save the Union while the other wanted to destroy it. So in the end one would start the war and the other would have to accept war or perish. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2055043 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2055043 Fri, 18 Sep 2020 12:51:03 -0500 He is talking about how we should not be enemies working against each other but instead work together as one. To not let opinions get in the way but to still work together as one. https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2044180 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2044180 Tue, 15 Sep 2020 13:31:42 -0500 Important to know about the writing assignments and what type of writing assignments to expect. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1955088 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1955088 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 12:59:31 -0500 Important to know what will be on the exam, when the exam will be, and how many points. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1955084 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1955084 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 13:00:40 -0500 this helps the students know what they should get out of this course. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1955068 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1955068 Thu, 13 Aug 2020 12:55:42 -0500 Important to know what the AP test for this class will look like and contain. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952669 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952669 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 12:23:47 -0500 Knowing about the writing prompts and what to expect. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952634 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952634 Writing prompts are always either easy or hard for people so knowing that there will be writing prompts and what they might be about is important to know for the future. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 12:19:20 -0500 Important to know about how the test are going to be arranged. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952626 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952626 I think its important to have an explanation of how the AP test is going to look for this class and what is going to be in it. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 12:16:57 -0500 good that it states what this course is trying to guide students to be https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952619 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212291?scroll_to=1952619 This is important because it tells the students what to expect to get out of this course. Tue, 11 Aug 2020 12:15:04 -0500