Comments by Rhiannon Tumminello Most recent public comments by Rhiannon Tumminello https://nowcomment.com/users/84433 length of walk https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2274988 https://nowcomment.com/documents/248767?scroll_to=2274988 the sentences here are long and descriptive, drawing the reader into the experience the narrator is weaving. it's also a sort of contrast between the length of sentence (long) versus the length of journey (short), like the contrast made between the areas she has traveled from and traveled to. Thu, 14 Jan 2021 16:50:45 -0500 interesting https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217978 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217978 I always find it interesting when other essays use this tactic, so it would be good to remember for my own essay Mon, 30 Nov 2020 14:09:19 -0500 most important https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217971 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243597?scroll_to=2217971 I feel that this the the most important direction to remember because it really is the basis of your entire essay. You can't write anything else without first deciding what you're going to write, which viewpoint you're going to look at things from. Mon, 30 Nov 2020 14:07:14 -0500 subtly agressive https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2055117 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2055117 Lincoln is very good at making somewhat backhanded comments. The way it's phrased makes it seem like the comment is directed towards both sides but then he says "but let us judge not" implying that they are not the ones to be judged. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 13:53:14 -0400 manipulation of mindset Sort Of https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2054782 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2054782 Lincoln does a good job of putting the Union (the side he leads) in s good light and the Confederacy in a bad light while also making them seem as one entity and not being entirely wrong or disrespectful. Fri, 18 Sep 2020 13:50:29 -0400 agressive, sort of https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2044174 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225298?scroll_to=2044174 The way he comes off in this does a really good job of framing the Confederacy as the Bad Guys and I think it was a very interesting word choice. The way he's taking a peaceful (ish) stance on the subject is interesting. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 14:30:20 -0400 It's good that it details exactly what qualifies as cheating, just in case. https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1953239 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1953239 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 14:18:54 -0400 What is labor-based grading? I am kind of confused https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1953160 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1953160 Tue, 11 Aug 2020 14:24:30 -0400 Lists the "big ideas" of the ap exam ! Very important to know so that you can properly prioritize when cramming https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1953059 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212365?scroll_to=1953059 Joking! No cramming :) Just nice to know what to focus on Tue, 11 Aug 2020 14:18:54 -0400