Most recent public comments by Mary Basco https://nowcomment.com/users/84630 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240692?scroll_to=2186506 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240692?scroll_to=2186506 my writing better. Fri, 06 Nov 2020 09:58:39 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181668 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181668 Wed, 04 Nov 2020 09:41:07 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181653 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181653 Wed, 04 Nov 2020 09:38:27 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139403 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139403 when he is asked what type of manner he is, he starts to feel guilty again and wants to tell others in order to warn them or possibly stop them from being sentenced to what he went through. Fri, 16 Oct 2020 09:52:55 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136397 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136397 this decision ended up hurting the sailer in more ways than one. This ended up making the ship not be able to sail. He stopped the fog and the wind. only half good. Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:33:41 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042782 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042782 I really like this idea because it's a smarter way to get your grammatical errors and they "big picture". I think that this allows you to not have to think about both at the same time and lets you focus more, if you have truble focusing. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 09:56:55 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042640 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042640 I think that this is crucial advice. That is mostly because when you're in the minority, for at least, a lot of the time I tend to be quieter and not say anything. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 09:50:08 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1969144 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1969144 This paragraph as whole shows how hard it is to translate a text from one langaure to another, but the last senctecne in this paragraph shows how often it's done poorly. I say this because if you lose the rhythm that the writer had in the original, you are then affecting how new readers "hear it". Also if you lose the context then you aren't giving the same story. Thu, 20 Aug 2020 10:14:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959586 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959586 I don't know is this is just my experience, but in my house if someone calls you weird or a-weirdo we respond by saying thanks. We take pride in it. I think that most people who see themselves as weird think they are alone and that's the least true thing I've ever heard. Mon, 17 Aug 2020 10:02:30 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959557 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959557 i think that most people start at this place as write, I know I did, and you need someone to look at you and say "this is cool" or "I never would of geuess you do that" in order for some people, really me, to see my life as anything other than mundane. Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:57:44 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959302 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959302 This is how you crate depth and and make you characters interesting even if you sometimes don't look that interesting. Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:39:29 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959213 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959213 This is saying what you have to do in order to write a personal essay. Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:31:43 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956216 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956216 You need to allow yourself to write abut things that your scared to write about because that is where you are able to connect. Most times when your scared to write about something, it's because you have lived it and experienced it. Fri, 14 Aug 2020 10:12:39 -0400