Most recent public comments by Madison Mitchell https://nowcomment.com/users/84632 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181666 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181666 I never thought of actually describing the little things that i write about. I like how to the author is saying to do so I feel like it would give more detail and in some way engage the reader more so i'll have to try that. Oh and also putting more action in the setting would really hold the reader's attention Wed, 04 Nov 2020 09:40:56 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139394 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139394 Here the Marnier is basically saying that he had to tell his story as a part of his punishment because it would set him free from his penance Fri, 16 Oct 2020 09:51:09 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136514 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136514 he has a big change of character and it's in a positive way Thu, 15 Oct 2020 10:01:18 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136474 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136474 after killing the bird the ship is stuck and they have nowhere to go .. another ghost ship comes about with dead people and death herself the ship disappears all the men curse him then all of a sudden the people die Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:48:41 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136362 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136362 after killing the bird they get stuck and now they're in a bad situation on an old boat Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:31:41 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136357 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136357 he shot the bird now he is saying he has killed the bird Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:39:40 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1971897 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1971897 i like how the author explains good qualities of writing and calls it a target text , basically saying the target text is what writers aim for Fri, 21 Aug 2020 09:45:13 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959582 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959582 the author is basically saying thougts like this can stop a writer from writing something people might actally like but the negative thoughts are holding them back Mon, 17 Aug 2020 10:01:06 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959325 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959325 the author is saying that when writing you should present yourslef in a dramtic manner Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:45:07 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959308 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959308 the author is saying how you can have conlfict in an essay because most writers wouldn't think about using it. this is a really good tip Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:41:33 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956175 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956175 this is more of a tip to me while writing this would be good advice for someone whos writing Fri, 14 Aug 2020 09:57:26 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956158 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956158 This comment makes me more relaxed about using the letter "I" as much as I do Fri, 14 Aug 2020 09:55:12 -0400