Comments by Victoria Nealond Most recent public comments by Victoria Nealond https://nowcomment.com/users/84650 Confict and Setting https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181655 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181655 You can use the setting in your story to help create your conflict in the story Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500 Here it seems like to get relief from the agony he feels inside he tells his story. https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139355 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139355 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500 This is like his personal prison https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136479 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136479 This is him living with the punishment of living along on the sea on an old boat with the bodies of the sailors that still hold that aces of the cruse they gave him. I don't feel the ghost ship was there to bring punishment but instead was there to enlightening the other of their punishment. Not only has he stuck alone on this ship but he has to constantly be reminded of the people he messed over. Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500 He felt that everything was just at a standstill https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136396 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136396 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500 Tone https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1969136 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1969136 Translators have to make sure the feeling of the source text is still shown in the target text. Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500 Make yourself stand out https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959318 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959318 Make yourself interesting and focus on what make you you so you don't seem boring and basic Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500 The author is saying that when writing something in your point of you you need not use I which can be isolating but instead build yourself into a character so that the reader will be able to connect to the essay and see deeper into the writers point of vi https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956190 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1956190 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:50:19 -0500